Reviews For Invisible Clock
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Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2009 8:13:34 AM Title: Chapter 1

It may not have been easy, Summer, but it came across just beautifully!!!! It read just fine.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2009 3:59:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

Not only does this not sound 'forced', it is the perfect progression in the chain of events you are detailing. And writing it from Logan's POV keeps it from being too weepy and maudlin, as it could have been if it were from Rogue's POV. Excellent work.

Peace,
Wendie

Author's Response: Glad you liked it I guess I was worried about it being to soppy plus the computer froze twice so it was close to four it the morning when finally posted

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2009 1:37:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

It doesn't seem to be forced. It's very Logan, actually. And very moving.

Author's Response: Thanks it was just so hard to write if this keeps up i'll have writers bloke and have to send you different way's to kill Maries father 9 & 10 will be up soon

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