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A very poignant and touching chapter. Thank you for it.
~Mia
Nice job of showing the whole relationship from both sides--with a healthy dose of 'mental' Logan and 'mental' Erik thrown in. I'm anxious to see where things go from here... --Wendie
That was a really lovely chapter. Especially the last part. I could almost see it happening in slow motion, it was that vivid.
~Mia
This is one of the most beautiful stories here. Prey continue.
Bingo. Perfect. Dead on. Couldn't be better. Nailed it. (I could go on) Top notch. Outstanding...oh, you get the idea. --Wendie
Thanks for the new chapter. I'm glad Charles put a stop to everything and put Marie first. I like the development between Logan and Marie, keep it coming.;)
-Ellie
Fantastic so far
I wanted to let you know I am really enjoying this story! Can't wait to see where it goes! Please keep posting:) (offers cookie)
What I think is that this is exactly what I would have loved to have seen in the movie, but in a way, I'm glad I didn't. The tension--the potential--of a relationship building between them was so delicious. However, you are doing a wonderful job of 'realizing' that potential. Keep 'em coming. --Wendie
I love how you are exploring what the voices in Rogue's head sound like to her, which is something the movies never really did. Excellent. --Wendie
Yeah, I like it. It was sweet. Love the bickering personalities operating independantly of her will. Makes for an interesting show.
lol. This is great stuff!
Very sweet. Loved getting a peek at what each of them is thinking.
Looking forward to more.
-Ellie
Awww. The way he just makes everything right for her just melts me every time. I love protective Logan.
Beautiful--that's what I think. Just beautiful. --Wendie
i loved it, plz update soon.
I'm really enjoying your story so far. Can't wait to see where it goes.
I am loving the two Logans both wanting to take care of Marie, to protect and comfort her. I also think it's neat how the mental Logan is keeping tabs on the 'real' Logan, but the 'real' Logan has no idea what's going on in her head.
I am thoroughly enjoying this. You write beautifully.
Peace,
Wendie
reallly good, keep it going, i must say one of the best that i have read this month if not the best story.
oo update this soon
:-) More please xXx
I loved this the first time I read it on the other site. Thanks so much for bringing it here on WRFA.
This story was one of the reason's I decided to try writing one for myself. I love the flow of your writing. And I kept checking daily for updates. Kept me on the seat of my pants in anticipation.
This is getting better and better as it goes along. The story is so rich--with meaning, emotion, imagery. I love the way you portray the voices in Marie's head and the conversations (internal and external) with Bobby were delightful.
'Magneto whispered in her mind of ulterior motives' -- amazing detail! perfect!
I so look forward to Chapter 4.
--Wendie
i am loving this new twist on post-X1. what if Logan was just a bit more responsible and aware of what he did to Rogue.
adding this to my faves so i can get updates!
i am really enjoying this story. I really like how you have Marie struggling with having all the voices in her head. I really hope that Logan (in her head or in the real world) can help her. I look forward to the next chapter! Hope you update soon.