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Reviewer: notmyself Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2010 11:36:09 AM Title: Chapter 9

A very poignant and touching chapter. Thank you for it.

~Mia

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2010 7:45:46 AM Title: Chapter 9

Nice job of showing the whole relationship from both sides--with a healthy dose of 'mental' Logan and 'mental' Erik thrown in. I'm anxious to see where things go from here... --Wendie

Reviewer: notmyself Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2009 4:00:01 PM Title: Chapter 8

That was a really lovely chapter. Especially the last part. I could almost see it happening in slow motion, it was that vivid.

~Mia

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2009 8:47:51 AM Title: Chapter 8

This is one of the most beautiful stories here. Prey continue.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2009 5:54:51 AM Title: Chapter 8

Bingo. Perfect. Dead on. Couldn't be better. Nailed it. (I could go on) Top notch. Outstanding...oh, you get the idea. --Wendie

Reviewer: Elliesmeow Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2009 12:14:27 AM Title: Chapter 8

Thanks for the new chapter. I'm glad Charles put a stop to everything and put Marie first. I like the development between Logan and Marie, keep it coming.;)

-Ellie

Reviewer: GeoRaxSco Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/2009 7:16:15 AM Title: Chapter 3

Fantastic so far

Reviewer: tamisnead Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2009 10:14:46 AM Title: Chapter 7

I wanted to let you know I am really enjoying this story! Can't wait to see where it goes! Please keep posting:) (offers cookie)

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2009 5:44:57 AM Title: Chapter 7

What I think is that this is exactly what I would have loved to have seen in the movie, but in a way, I'm glad I didn't. The tension--the potential--of a relationship building between them was so delicious. However, you are doing a wonderful job of 'realizing' that potential. Keep 'em coming. --Wendie

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2009 5:33:15 AM Title: Chapter 6

I love how you are exploring what the voices in Rogue's head sound like to her, which is something the movies never really did. Excellent. --Wendie

Reviewer: notmyself Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2009 4:12:24 PM Title: Chapter 6

Yeah, I like it. It was sweet. Love the bickering personalities operating independantly of her will. Makes for an interesting show.

Reviewer: Wytchling Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2009 12:56:23 PM Title: Chapter 6

lol. This is great stuff!

Reviewer: Elliesmeow Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/07/2009 1:00:11 PM Title: Chapter 6

Very sweet. Loved getting a peek at what each of them is thinking.

Looking forward to more.

-Ellie

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2009 5:00:11 PM Title: Chapter 5

Awww. The way he just makes everything right for her just melts me every time. I love protective Logan.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2009 2:54:08 PM Title: Chapter 5

Beautiful--that's what I think. Just beautiful. --Wendie

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/31/2009 2:44:41 PM Title: Chapter 4

i loved it, plz update soon.

Reviewer: tamisnead Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/30/2009 10:57:15 PM Title: Chapter 4

I'm really enjoying your story so far. Can't wait to see where it goes.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/30/2009 6:20:23 PM Title: Chapter 4

I am loving the two Logans both wanting to take care of Marie, to protect and comfort her. I also think it's neat how the mental Logan is keeping tabs on the 'real' Logan, but the 'real' Logan has no idea what's going on in her head.
I am thoroughly enjoying this. You write beautifully.

Peace,
Wendie

Reviewer: Sabertooth1973 Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 10/30/2009 6:07:08 PM Title: Chapter 4

reallly good, keep it going, i must say one of the best that i have read this month if not the best story.

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2009 6:44:09 PM Title: Chapter 3

oo update this soon

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2009 8:58:47 AM Title: Chapter 3

:-) More please xXx

Reviewer: jnet Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2009 10:11:26 PM Title: Chapter 3

I loved this the first time I read it on the other site. Thanks so much for bringing it here on WRFA.

This story was one of the reason's I decided to try writing one for myself. I love the flow of your writing. And I kept checking daily for updates. Kept me on the seat of my pants in anticipation.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2009 9:57:44 PM Title: Chapter 3

This is getting better and better as it goes along. The story is so rich--with meaning, emotion, imagery. I love the way you portray the voices in Marie's head and the conversations (internal and external) with Bobby were delightful.

'Magneto whispered in her mind of ulterior motives' -- amazing detail! perfect!

I so look forward to Chapter 4.

--Wendie

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2009 9:24:41 PM Title: Chapter 3

i am loving this new twist on post-X1. what if Logan was just a bit more responsible and aware of what he did to Rogue.

adding this to my faves so i can get updates!

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2009 7:01:27 PM Title: Chapter 3

i am really enjoying this story. I really like how you have Marie struggling with having all the voices in her head. I really hope that Logan (in her head or in the real world) can help her. I look forward to the next chapter! Hope you update soon.

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