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Reviewer: Wolvester Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2011 11:41:13 PM Title: The Pain Intensifies

Ok...that was a nasty twist! More please?? You can't just leave poor Logan with no hope of seeing his Marie again.

Author's Response: Ducks head!! lol, thanks for reviewing! Do you think I would be that mean to Logan and not let him see Marie again??? ;)

Reviewer: Wolvester Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2011 8:22:31 AM Title: She is Found

OMG....I love this story...PLEASE..PLEASE...PLEASE..put up the next chapter(s)and finish it...I'm hoping for Magneto to die and Logan to be hurt/saved by the X-Men and reunited with Marie!!!!

Author's Response: You're wish is my command! I've put up three chapters and hold off on wanting to kill Magneto, he just might suprise you! ;)

Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2011 12:23:35 AM Title: She is Found

OMG, I had to search for this story, bc it's been awhile since you updated.

But, I love, love, love this story- you really paint a heart-wrenching scene when Logan has to leave Marie, and I can't wait for the angsty/romeo and juliet saga to continue.

When will you update? Can't wait :) If you can't tell I'm a bit excited for this story to continue...

Author's Response: I know!!! I'm sorry about the long wait. Life can get in the way some times, but I'm back now with several updates and more to come! So glad you love this story, its what makes me continue writing. Please, continue being excited about the story, I feed off of it!! :)

Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2011 9:44:55 PM Title: She is Found

"Swallowing the lump in his throat and not bothering to wipe the tears on his face, he walked slowly towards Marie."

I loved, loved, loved this chapter- great work and keep em' coming. I especially can't wait to see how this develops with Logan in the brotherhood. A very interesting predicament and not one I've seen before.

Author's Response: So glad you've liked it! Yeah, I thought Logan having to join the Brotherhood would be a new twist and it would show the lengths he would go to for Marie! In my head, that man loves her more than life itself and sacrificing everything for her was only fitting. She had sacrificed everything for him at Stryker's hands and it was only fitting that he do the same!! Thanks for the review and keep them coming!

Reviewer: notmyself Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2011 2:32:57 PM Title: She is Found

Terrible and painful and beautiful.

~Mia

Author's Response: I hope you feel that it's beautifully terrible, heartbreakingly painful and absolutely beautiful!! :) Thanks for the review and keep them coming!!

Reviewer: notmyself Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2011 3:37:49 PM Title: Everything is Fading

I have missed this. Don't judge me for that.

~Mia

Author's Response: lol, I would never judge you!!! I'm so glad that you took the time to start reading the story. I will try not to go so long without updated! The story WILL be finished! :)

Reviewer: Shuttlelauncher Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2011 5:44:18 PM Title: She is Found

That was heartbreaking! I'm so glad she has been found but you just killed me when Logan had to leave her again....geez, I'm torn up about it! Please, please update again soon.

Author's Response: Awww...stay with me, I promise it will be worth it!! Maybe Magneto will have a change of heart! ;) we will just have to wait and see!

Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2011 1:19:27 AM Title: She is Found

Thanks for another great chapter, I've now read and re-read all the way through and it's a great story.

I especially like how Logan went to the Brotherhood, as I haven't seen that before in a story. I didn't like the rape scene, but realistically in that situation it would unfortunately probably happen.

Hell, if it was me I would have pulled a Michael Weston a la Burn Notice and swore I was with Stryker's team and not strayed from my cover. But I digress.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Hey and thanks for the great comment!! I'm glad that you are enjoying the story. As for Logan going to the Brotherhood, I got to thinking about how desperate he would be to find Marie and what lengths he would go to to find her. It just popped in my head that Magneto would be his best bet since I'm sure that he has resorces that maybe even Xavier can't get to. So, the idea was born. As for the rape scene, believe me I DID NOT want to write it and fought against the idea for a while, but you're right, realistically it would probably happen, so I did it as tasteful as possible without too much detail. Thanks for reading and the next update will be out shortly!

Reviewer: Oracle13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2011 8:25:06 PM Title: She is Found

Excellent chapter! God, that was heartrending! Poor Logan, he finally finds Marie only to be separated from her again and he's not even allowed to make sure that she's okay or talk to her. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yeah, it was pretty emotional for me to write as well. I know, I feel like I'm being so mean to them and well...I am, lol!! It will all be worth it in the end...I hope!!!

Reviewer: serafim Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2011 8:07:02 PM Title: She is Found

What a powerful chapter!!! That was so heartbreaking - poor Logan, poor Marie. After everything Marie has gone through, she deserves happily ever after....please tell there is one...

Author's Response: There is light at the end of the darkness I promise, though we might have a long way to go to get there!! I am a sucker for happy endings!!

Reviewer: Shuttlelauncher Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2011 8:55:46 PM Title: Everything is Fading

Wow! What a great chapter! The whole Jason manipulation totally surprised me. I'm really glad your back with this and I look forward to more updates soon. This was a very emotional chapter...great job!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the comment! So glad that you liked the Jason scene. I did too, lol! It's good to be back. I forgot how much I enjoyed writing this story and I have more things in store for our two favorite love birds.

Reviewer: Oracle13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2011 12:49:48 AM Title: Everything is Fading

Hey, welcome back! It was great to see that you updated this! I really liked this chapter. Nice little twist with Jason manipulating her mind to try to get her to reveal Logan's whereabouts. I didn't piece that together until Jason/Logan started to really push her for info. Disturbing that Magneto and Logan had a similar bad dream about her too. I hope they can find her but I'm afraid of what condition she'll be in if/when they do. I'm looking forward to your next update!

Author's Response: Hey, thanks so much for the review! Yeah, the Jason manipulation plot actually wrote itself. I was writing an actual scene with Marie and the Logan in her head, something kinda sweet and then the next thing I know, Jason makes an appearance. It was totally weird, lol!! Magneto and Logan's dream was kinda showing symbolism that the part of them in Marie was destroyed, don't know if that came across like that. They will find her, and soon...but we will have to see what state she is in! The next chapter will be up this week, hopefully Tuesday!! Thanks again.

Reviewer: Ashnan Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2011 2:00:32 PM Title: The Meeting

I really love this story. You haven't abandoned it have you? I check regularly hoping for an update! I love your writing style and I love what you've done so far...just really want more. Please!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!! No, I have no abandoned this story...I will finish it I promise!

Reviewer: Capt_Mackenzie Signed star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2011 12:05:26 PM Title: The Meeting

Your writing always has good elements but this story is, honestly, starting to drag a little. I find myself skimming, sometimes, to get to the next part.

Author's Response: Thank you for the kind response about my writing! :) As for the story feeling like it's dragging out...what would you have me do? Would the story make more sense if I said...Oh Marie's been kidnapped, then two chapters later jump to six months later she's saved? I'm trying to give the reader a glimps of the horrors of what happens to Marie and at the same time what lengths Logan will go to to save her. I hate that you feel that it's being dragged out but honestly I don't see that at all. I'm trying to get you as the reader to feel what Marie and Logan both are feeling. My intentions are not to hurry through this story and if you feel that I'm dragging it, feel free to give me some advice to change that! Thanks!

Reviewer: Shuttlelauncher Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2011 4:41:32 PM Title: The Meeting

I'm sooooo happy that you finally updated this story! This has been on my radar for a while and I really hope you have more updates planned! Thanks!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!! Yeah, I was stuck for a while but I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I do have some updates planned, I'm in the middle of writing a new chapter so stay tuned and thanks for the comment! :)

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2011 9:33:43 AM Title: The Meeting

I hope Jennings, Carpenter and Morgan come to know Logan's claws up close and personal!!! *growls*

I hope Logan finds Marie soon.

Author's Response: Yes, they need to meet the Wolverine big time!! Maybe they will, we will have to wait and see! Thanks for the comment!

Reviewer: Oracle13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2011 6:39:02 AM Title: The Meeting

God, that was heartbreaking to read! Thank you for not being too graphic- it was brutal despite that. Please tell me that Logan's gonna get her out of there soon and kill those bastards? This is heartwrenching!

Author's Response: It was heartbreaking to write!! I had been struggling with the rape issue and that's why there had not been an update in a few months. I thought long and hard about going that route and when I decided to do it, I was adamant about not being graphic! Being raped is something that, thank God, I've never had to endure and I in no way wanted to offend anyone who has been through that. I will never be graphic when it comes to that. In my mind, just the thought of her being raped was enough to touch the readers. Logan is a desperate man at this time and will do WHATEVER it takes to find Marie! When and if he does, there will be hell to pay I assure you! Thanks so much for the comment, it helps me to want to write more!! :)

Reviewer: WitchBaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2011 2:35:35 AM Title: The Meeting

she has to stay with logan once he finds her! she just has to! yay for updates!

Author's Response: Well, we will have to see about that!! Logan will do whatever it takes to save her but the thought of her staying with Magneto is NOT want Logan wants. Thanks for the comment and stay tuned to see what happens.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2010 12:46:54 PM Title: We Choose the Paths We Must

First I was sad and angry... then angry and sad... and some more angry and now after what Logan said in the last sentence my mouth is hanging open.

Damn good chapter - more please soon

Author's Response: Actually to tell you the truth, In my mind, when I see this story taking place, I never saw that happening. As weird as that might sound, Logan going to ask help from Magneto came to my mind as I wrote it! It was so weird, I've never had that happen before! I had something totally different in mind for this story and Logan just kinda took over! LOL! I'm glad you liked the chapter and thanks for the comment! More to come soon.

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2010 7:13:25 PM Title: We Choose the Paths We Must

WHAT???!! NO FUCKING WAY! OMG!

Author's Response: YES!!!!! Logan has not other choice, or in his mind he thinks he has no other choice!!

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2010 5:15:18 AM Title: We Choose the Paths We Must

Magneto should do it without asking for anything in return.

Author's Response: Well, we will just have to see what his response is when he learns the reason Logan is asking for help. Will he be the good guy for once? Or will he be the evil man we all know and in some weird way love!! :) Thanks for the comment!

Reviewer: Shuttlelauncher Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2010 10:14:17 PM Title: Crime and Punishment

I really love this story and can't wait for another update!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!! I'm glad that you love it! Don't worry another update will be coming shortly. :) Keep those comments coming.

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2010 7:34:44 PM Title: Crime and Punishment

Oh god, I love this story so much! It was my intention to continue reading until the story was finished... but THERE IS NOTHING MORE TO READ. You should fix that :)

Author's Response: HAHA!! Don't worry, I will start on the next chapter very soon! I'm having so much fun writing this story and I'm so glad people are enjoying it! We have a ways to go with this story so sit back, buckle up and enjoy the ride!!

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2010 6:37:25 PM Title: She's Gone

OH MY FUCKING JESUS. I have never cried before while reading fan fiction. But this chapter did it for me.

Author's Response: awww, I'm sorry I made you cry!! I actually cried when I wrote it. Thanks so much for leaving me a comment and letting me know that you felt the pain that I was so trying to describe in this chapter! It's so much easier to see it in your mind than it is to explain it!! :)

Reviewer: tamisnead Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2010 3:21:34 PM Title: Crime and Punishment

Wow! Just WOW! Poor Logan, and I can't believe you made me feel sorry for Stryker! More please!

Author's Response: lol, yeah...feeling sorry for Stryker goes against human nature huh? I thought I would add a little conflict into the mix. You start to just feel for the guy and then his true colors show and you see just how screwed up he is! Poor Logan is right! He's on the verge of losing it himself. Can he hold on long enough to get to Marie? We will see! Thanks for the comment and more will be coming soon! :)

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