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Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2010 1:59:06 AM Title: The Night Is Long

ehh, well kinda uneventful chapter, kinda familiar, ya kno? cnat wait to see whats next

Reviewer: RoseSumner Signed star star half star [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2010 4:55:28 PM Title: A Stranger In The Land

Holy crap! This was shere brilliance! I can't begin to tell you how much I love your writing. Your characters are dead-on. Please write more, pretty please with cherries and cheesecake.

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2010 3:27:35 PM Title: The Night Is Long

Ooooh, fantastic! Jean did a a great job here. Can't wait for the next part. :D

Reviewer: Solidae Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2010 1:37:05 PM Title: The Night Is Long

Love. Love. Love.

Reviewer: Wanderlust Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2010 1:35:08 PM Title: The Night Is Long

Yeah! Thank you for updating so quickly. I'm really enjoying this story, especially your telling it from multiple perspectives. It gives me an understanding of and sympathy with the characters. In that vein, how about a chapter from Scott's perspective? How did he get so cold? Why is he angry? What's going on in his mind? I love that I get the answers to these kinds of questions about the other characters!

Author's Response: From Scott? Well...hang in there. Something may be coming. Eventually.

Reviewer: Alana Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2010 1:16:42 PM Title: The Night Is Long

This is a truly wonderful story you have here. I very much enjoying your AU. It's rare, in my opinion, to pull off an AU well, and you're doing a great job. I really like how you've painted everyone, especially Jean, Scott and Logan's issues. I also thought it was very real that you had the "grownups" figure out relatively quickly what exactly went on with Logan and Marie in the bedroom. That always bothered me in the movie. I'm looking forward to the rest of this story. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: That's part of the fun for me...getting to dig further into stuff I wish someone had fleshed out better. Thank you so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: curikitten Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2010 11:31:17 AM Title: A Stranger In The Land

I reading you correctly? (/end channeling of Avenue Q's Christmas Eve)

Whee! As you are aware, I've been waiting for this story's completion for years. And now it's coming! Huzzah! O, Happy Day!

Author's Response: Yeah, I know, I know...all too aware. My apologies, and I can only hope you'll find it worth the wait. Thank you for coming back!

Reviewer: alwayseemsudden Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2010 10:58:30 AM Title: A Stranger In The Land

so much great character development every step of the way. and I love a 3D Jean Grey. makes it easy to view her as a human and not merely some hated obstacle. better reading experience this way.

Author's Response: Thank you! I think three dimensions are always better than one. G

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2010 10:15:36 AM Title: The Night Is Long

Jean and Scott should just take their problems elsewhere. And when we rule the world, I want a pet wolverine.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2010 8:53:53 AM Title: The Night Is Long

Again, the writing here is so rich with emotion. I anxiously await the next installment. --Wendie

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2010 1:23:53 AM Title: A Good And Broad Land

yep, i agree with everyone else that Jean and Logan SHOULD NOT get together, woudl ruin the whole story for me lol. update soon

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2010 1:23:35 AM Title: A Good And Broad Land

Poor Logan. So confused. I realy love his story.

Reviewer: alwayseemsudden Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2010 12:41:55 AM Title: A Stranger In The Land

you nailed Logan's attitude toward everything in a way that I find consistent with his character in the comics and movie if put in these circumstances. AU can be difficult but you struggle not. I can't wait to see how you develop Rogue. I'm glad you're taking your time. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2010 8:38:33 PM Title: A Good And Broad Land

I don't wont a pony. can I have a duck or chicken instead? Oohh, no a camel. like the rock in the scorpion kind. Camels are smarter then horses. xXx

Author's Response: But they spit!rnrnOkay, you can have a camel. When we take over the world, you'll need some classy transportation.

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2010 8:06:04 PM Title: A Good And Broad Land

I get so excited when I see an update for this fic in my email! Great job, loved this chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you! More coming soon, very soon.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2010 7:58:03 PM Title: A Good And Broad Land

You get two ponies for writing such an amazing story! I love all the undercurrents you portray here. Oh, honey, put on your hip waders, the angst is gettin' deep! And I love it! --Wendie

Author's Response: Ooo! TWO ponies! Where will I keep them? rnrnGlad you're liking it! (And I like the metaphor.)

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2010 4:30:02 PM Title: Cruel As The Grave

Stupid Jean. Lol Mean Jean. I crack myself up. xXx

Reviewer: Solidae Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2010 10:28:57 AM Title: Cruel As The Grave

Ugh. I know she's too young for him, but I still hate the Logan/Jean lust fest.
More please!

Reviewer: SummerSky Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2010 8:13:54 AM Title: Cruel As The Grave

This keeps getting better more please.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2010 7:42:58 AM Title: Cruel As The Grave

It's so easy to give wonderful feedback to writing this good. As much as I hate the connection between Jean and Logan, you have done an amazing job of describing it. Poor Marie! Nice set up with Scott being such a dork, thus making Logan's advances that much more appealing to Jean. More, more, more, please, please please! --Wendie

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2010 5:45:58 AM Title: Cruel As The Grave

Oh God. Not Jean and her prissy puppy. I'm really curios about what comes next.

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2010 2:45:36 AM Title: Cruel As The Grave

really enjoying this fic. I really hope that jean and Logan don't get together. Marie has been hurt enough....

Reviewer: Turante Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2010 2:27:27 AM Title: Cruel As The Grave

God, this is fantastic. I love that you've made Jean completely human and understandable, and since I love S/J/L/R quadrangle fics (even the ones that have one or two of the participants quietly pining away for their unrequited love. I have an angst addiction.) I'm happy to see hints of that here. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: lunarkitty Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2010 12:51:38 AM Title: A Stranger In The Land

This is fabulous! Can't wait to read what's next!

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2010 12:45:56 AM Title: Cruel As The Grave

oh u are so awesome for updating so fast, good story keep going

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