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Reviewer: hobbitsdoitbetter Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2010 7:41:32 PM Title: A Stranger In The Land

of course i loved this, adored it in point of fact. but where's the rest? pleeaaase?
ps glad you like my pen-name. but please, as wendie said, give us our fix...

Author's Response: The rest is here. Sorry. Can I still coax you out of your hobbit-hole?

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2010 1:27:34 PM Title: When I Awake

At the risk of sounding like an inexperienced and uncouth (?) lover -- Are you done? The little 'complete?' box is still checked 'No' and it seems like there are a few loose ends yet to tie up -- Logan's 'release' being one of them. I was also really hoping to learn the location and the significance of the little church in the painting. Truth is, I need my 'Scripture' fix, but failing that, I guess, I need a definitive 'THE END'. Any chance of an update--or something--soon? --Wendie

Author's Response: I now give the definitive "the end." Thank you so much for your support and your patience.

Reviewer: Rogue1189 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2010 5:12:51 AM Title: When I Awake

Amazing. Every time I read a part of this story I have such a hard time putting to words how much I love what you continue to do because it is all just wonderful. The patience Logan has with her from beginning to end is just beautiful and I'll I can do is wish for a guy like Logan who can handle me at my worst and deserve my best. (just like these two)

And that hot hot hot scene was played out just perfect. I was getting all hot and bothered just like everyone else. That grin was weeeelllllll deserved and makes me love him all the more ;)

Reviewer: Oracle13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2010 1:14:18 AM Title: When I Awake

Wow. You know, just when I think that this story can't get any better, it does! I find myself rereading it over and over. It's just so complex, heartbreaking, sweet and realistic. I also like the fact that when you add another character's POV, like Kitty or Jubilee, it's not filler. Instead it just adds yet another rich layer to an already compelling story. These last several chapters have been especially great! As usual, I can't wait to find out what happens next!

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2010 12:28:21 AM Title: When I Awake

Omg, that last sentence made me grin. This chapter was so good! I loved it, absolutely can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Entropy Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2010 7:20:55 PM Title: When I Awake

Oh wow, Wow! This is delicious, like a N'Awlins pastry.

Need clarification: is this the conclusion, or is there more to come? Please advise!

Also, I wanted to mention a continuity glitch: Seems like there is an extra overnight added: They are getting busy, but they stop, she pretends to fall asleep, then it is morning. But it still feels like the same day. Pacing feels a bit wonky just there. Otherwise the flow was perfect for the story to unwind with delicious languor.

Author's Response: More now at last provided. (And I hope this chapter clears up the continuity for you...not a glitch, but possibly not as clear as it could have been made...)rnrnAnd thank you!

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2010 3:09:39 AM Title: When I Awake

...and I jizzed in my pants.

Reviewer: Alana Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2010 8:07:35 PM Title: When I Awake

Jeepers that was hot.

Reviewer: Bancainte Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2010 6:55:30 PM Title: When I Awake

Oh, am I relieved, you MAKE it! The last chapter was, forgive me, kind of the average shipper stuff, and it seemed to have so much pink icing and "cutey Jubes makes it all right", I got seriously worried. Well, shame on me, I could've known better.
And no Moviemom, Logan isn't patient, it's "tenacious" you are looking for!
:-) And yes, after so much shattering pain, you need to take it slow, and you need to go back to being 16, just to heal those old wounds before you can start growing any further. WELL done!!! (For whatever my praise it worth... :-)

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2010 1:42:51 AM Title: When I Awake

damn, love the chapter, lol kinda good for valentines day

Reviewer: sahara Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2010 12:50:21 AM Title: When I Awake

"Holy Christ. Hallelujah. World without end" - That about sums it up! Hot damn!

And I have to agree, he certainly earned that self-satisfied grin!

I just, wow, yeah...kind of at a loss for words after this chapter. Wish I had some grand praise, but some synapses seemed to have shorted in my brain ;)

Reviewer: VampOrchid Signed star star half star [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2010 11:41:29 PM Title: When I Awake

Woot! I am Miss Clevah! New Orleans! Love this chapy little miss. Look and you and being on the roll and stuff ;)

Reviewer: lunarkitty Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2010 10:53:40 PM Title: When I Awake

YAY! :D

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2010 9:08:21 PM Title: When I Awake

No one in the history of the planet has ever been more richly deserving of a self-satisfied grin, wouldn't you say? 'Patient' and 'long-suffering' don't even begin to cover it. I love that his best advice is 'don't try so hard' and that he made this first experience all about her. And for Marie, it's apparently been an almost religious experience.

'Holy Christ. Hallelujah. World without end.'

Amen, sister. AMEN! --Wendie

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2010 9:03:00 PM Title: When I Awake

wow....just wooooooooow

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2010 2:20:43 AM Title: A Voice Is Heard In Ramah

DETAILS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: OKAY!!!! HERE!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2010 11:55:13 PM Title: Many Waters

wow, that was so powerful, Rogue trying to relearn how to live...or maybe just learn to live for the first time.

and of course the terrible timing with the knock at the door...gee wonder who that could be?

Author's Response: Gee, I wonder. As if you don't already know. ;)

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2010 11:51:34 PM Title: The Conviction Of Things Not Seen

wow, you captured Piotr's voice so wonderfully, as i read them i heard that deep slow Russian voice, so calm wash over me.

congrats on being the #1 reviewed story on this site, you and this amazing tale 100% deserve it!!!

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2010 11:14:04 PM Title: A Voice Is Heard In Ramah

oooooo whered they go?

Author's Response: Go and find out. ;)

Reviewer: VampOrchid Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2010 7:23:10 PM Title: A Voice Is Heard In Ramah

I wonder where they went? Back to New Orleans? I love the way you got Jubes to tell us this! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Well, little Miss Cleverclogs, now you know. ;) More is here.

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2010 5:15:51 PM Title: A Voice Is Heard In Ramah

Sooo good! I liked seeing her POV here, it was fun. And the scene between Logan and Scott was great. :D

Author's Response: Thank you! So glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Solidae Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2010 3:57:15 PM Title: A Voice Is Heard In Ramah

MORE!!!!!

Author's Response: OKAY!!!! HERE!!!!

Reviewer: sahara Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2010 3:44:00 PM Title: A Voice Is Heard In Ramah

I love your writing! And I especially love your Jubes! There were some legit lol moments.

"...our Nell." Rogue really is.

"phallus-substitutes"? Only Jubes would come up with that one.

Logan put it best, she really is a piece of work!

Dying for the next chapter. Really. It's tragic...please....hurry! *cough* *sputter* *cough*

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I have a great fondness for this chapter myself. And hey! Crash cart! Stat! We've got a woman down here!

Reviewer: Wanderlust Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2010 3:42:32 PM Title: A Voice Is Heard In Ramah

Thank you for this chapter! Great mix of the intense and the comedic. I love redemption stories, and this chapter is chock-full of them. Logan's, Marie's, heck even Scott's! Thank you for not letting them go softly into that dark night...

Author's Response: We will rage, rage against the dying of the light to the last moment. Thank you!

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2010 3:28:13 PM Title: A Voice Is Heard In Ramah

Ok when I got to the middle I was like oh hell no. Not Jubes and Logan. I hate them together with a passion!!! Loved the chapter. Kept me on the edge of my seat all the way through. Update again soon!

Author's Response: Updated! And c'mon. Canonically, Jubilee and Logan go back a lot further. ;)

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