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Fantastic piece of work! Love the brooding aspect of Logan, as the way people see him when he's in "introspective" mode... he's cranky, he's grumbly, he doesn't want to talk to people so he is obviously brooding. No, but he'll take the space you give him simply because he's not that sort of touchy-feely, sharing kind of person. Except with Marie, and YES dammit! Go find her you thick headed Canuck! She needs you as much as you've just figured out you need HER!!!
yeh, get your head outta your ass logan and go find her!
I heart me some brooding/introspective Logan and this definitely topped anything that I've read about this side of him. There have also been many fics about his feelings for Jean after she died, but this one is great. The comparison of his grief to Scott's was the clincher and it rings true.
Favorite: "You’ve got to respect a little bit of a girl who sasses her way through a whole conversation with a man she knows could snap her like a twig" :)
Excellent work!
Author's Response: Aw shucks! Thanks for that. I just thought that even at the end of X2 Logan was starting to come to some sort of realisation about Jean and his feelings for her, considering how he and Scott interacted. In the end, even though she tormented Scott, his grief was just a lot more like someone mourning a love (not just a lover), and I don't think Logan ever really got there. I have to admit that line was just a one-off, but for me it just perfectly captured *that* scene in his truck.
Really nice! I like it!
Wow, you really have nailed so many aspects of Logan's character. This is clear and precise and makes perfect sense with regard to how his 'brooding' has led to these realizations about his feelings for everyone in his life, especially Jean and Marie. I so hope you continue this and show us how he goes about being a better friend. --Wendie
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I hope my foray into your little project doesn't step on any toes! I really enjoy your notion of his chair and all its uses. I'll do my best to take them both where they need to go, but I can honestly say I'm not sure exactly where I'm going with this...scary! Next up should be some Marie-thinking, but we'll see.
I really like this. I like the voice of you Logan and appreciate that you gave him depth in determining what his feelings for Jean were but also his feelings for Scott and the Professor. Keep going.
Author's Response: Thanks! Assuming the muse does not abandon me, I hope to have more sometime later this week.
More please xXx
If this is a first-foray/second story, then you're terrific at this! Other than a few omitted words here and there, it's pretty darned good. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks. That means a lot coming from someone whose stories I've really enjoyed reading this past year. I was hoping maybe you would be willing to point out exactly where the words are missing... I would really appreciate that, since I was too worried about losing my nerve to have it beta-read. Thanks, Melanie