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Reviewer: Jahunta4974 Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2021 3:25:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh, I would have sooooooo touched him! Great fic!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2010 11:12:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

LOL bastard

Reviewer: litlen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2010 8:10:44 AM Title: Chapter 1

“Belatedly deodorising up the inside of the T-shirt” – sounds like 5.30 every morning in my house!!
I was going to mention spacing, especially the jumps to 1st person and with your dialogue- but I see Wendie has already mentioned it! A nice little fic, I enjoyed it. Well done x

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2010 7:41:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

OOOoohhhhhh, he can be pure evil our little Logie, now can't he?? Gets Scott to do his dirty work for him!! Yep, he's evil alright!!

Agrees with Wendie about the space between paragraphs, would be much easier.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2010 4:15:54 AM Title: Chapter 1

Ah, well, you've gotten your feet wet and a fine toe-drenching it is, too. Very clever. I really felt like I was 'in her head.' Nice.

'He should have to polish the jet.' HAHAHA!

Just a tip for future postings -- put a space between paragraphs. It makes it so much easier to read. -- Wendie

Author's Response: Huh? but it had spaces in word...*looks at online version of story*...and Italisedness where it was Rouge's thoughts! Sigh, I think I need to work on the whole submitting process stuff. heh.rnrnThanks everybody for your reviews. Totally didn't expect any especially not so quickly. Appreciatedrn

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