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[Report This]Date: 04/14/2010 12:56:37 AM Title: Chapter 5
ooooooo soooooo good this is my new fav story right now, cant wait til next one
Author's Response: >hugs!!< Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 04/14/2010 12:36:39 AM Title: Chapter 4
wow, very powerful. i love the way she finally talks and it's just desperate and sad and scared.
love this story.
and p.s. JEAN SUCKS AS USUAL! YAY I LOVE HATING JEAN! could she be more obvious in that new green low-cut dress. desperate harlot lol!
Author's Response: Super-duper thank you!!!!!!!!!! .....and desperate harlot indeed.
Date: 04/13/2010 10:19:49 PM Title: Chapter 5
Ok I left a review a second ago before I finished the chapter. lol bad Idea I know, I was just so upset that it looked like Logan was gonna let that witch near Marie again!!! i went back and read the last little segment there and realized you totally spun a 180 on me and had Logan come to his senses! My reaction was Oh thank god!!! Great chapter! I was really drawn into it. I am on the edge of my seat awaiting the next chapter. Please update soon.
Author's Response: I couldn't find the review, did you delete it?....I'm so glad I could surprise you!!! I'm about to start the next chapter now. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 04/13/2010 9:56:58 PM Title: Chapter 5
I didn't mind the summarising at all! In fact, nice work. I really liked this, and I have to say the progression is just lovely. Well done! I really can't wait to see what comes of this fic. :D
Author's Response: Oh, I'm so happy you liked the summarizing! >breathes sigh< Thank you. :~) I'm guestimating there will be about three/four more chapters.
Date: 04/13/2010 9:06:30 PM Title: Chapter 5
I got really worried with this one, not because of what we know Marie's mutation to be but because Logan was going to actually let Jean operate on Marie again. How could he? Doesn't he see what the last 'exam' did to her? I am glad he realized it, that he couldn't do that to Marie again. Now it is just time to get the Heck out of Dodge.
Author's Response: Sorry, I have no say in what Logan does. I'm just the writer. ;~) But if it helps, I think he meant well. :~)
[Report This]Date: 04/13/2010 8:26:23 PM Title: Chapter 5
Great work on this chapter. You're writing this version of these two wonderful characters in a way that is truly fascinating to behold. I love how completely Logan takes care of her. I love how she can only tolerate him, and from how you're writing Jean and the Professor I completely understand her point of view. Good grief Jean is a manipulative bitch. Words cannot express how much I enjoyed Logan threatening her. That was perfect. Also, I was so glad you didn't have Logan allow that medical procedure. That's Marie's decision and I'm glad you left it up to her. I'm really looking forward to your next chapter.
Author's Response: Oh, my. Thank you multiplied fifty times! I'm happy you liked this, it had me worried....I could never have them go through with the procedure. Marie not being able to touch Logan is a sin. :)
Date: 04/13/2010 7:07:51 PM Title: Chapter 5
First, enormous thanks for going the extra mile (literally?) to use the library computer so us 'Heal Over' junkies can get our fix. You are the total bomb!
Second, Thank you, thank you, thank you, a thousand times thank you, for making Logan turn around and go back to *their* room with her. I know eventually, the whole thing will come undone, but I'd rather it be something SHE wants, because she wants to be 'the girl she was' before the lab. As for Logan's warning to Lady Mengele (is that how you spell that?), Way to go, Wolvie! Don't trust her as far you could throw--well, just don't trust her. Period.
Love the she remembered her name. Amazing writing. Can't wait for more. --Wendie
Author's Response: First, thank you, because you reminded me of something about the holocaust I wanted to put in the author notes. I'll have to go back next time I have a working computer.(I'm using a psp right now, and it has a space limit. It shuts off after about 2 paragraphs)......Second, thank you for the review. Yours are always thorough and kind, and I hope u know how much every writer on this site appreciates that.....Oh, and Im reading your latest fic now. It's fantastic. Will review soon.
Date: 04/13/2010 6:50:24 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wonderful!!!! And she whispering her name? Beautiful. And could somebody PLEASE set Jean strait?? I want to see that **** swallowing her words in front of everybody.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're happy with this! That last scene was written pretty quickly, so I had my fingers crossed. Gracias!!!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're happy with this! That last scene was written pretty quickly, so I had my fingers crossed. Gracias!!!
Date: 04/13/2010 6:50:21 PM Title: Chapter 5
OMG that was so heartbreaking! I'm almost thought he was going to go throught with it, thank god he came to his senses!!! more soon please, this is so so good. I want to see Jean get her's she's such a B%$^%!!!!
Author's Response: I'm dancing in my chair again. Thank you! I'm so so so so glad you liked it.
[Report This]Date: 04/13/2010 6:49:22 PM Title: Chapter 5
THANK GOD he decided to not do what Jean wants to do. She's getting better, she can make up her own mind. :) Keep up the great work!!!!
Author's Response: LOL. I agree. Thank you!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 04/13/2010 6:32:00 PM Title: Chapter 5
This is touching and tragic and so damn beautiful. I love your self centered Jean. I love that Cyke trusts her implicitly. I love that Chuck isn't perfect. I also love that you haven't yet turned them into full stop evil paragons. I love that she whispered her name. I love that Logan wished he could trade his fuzzy nights with her nightmare riddled ones. I love that golf is not a sport and that Jean has less than no tact and that he calls her baby and that they need to get the hell out of that place.
Thank you for the beautiful mess. It's quite moving.
~Mia
Author's Response: Ohmygod. Thank you for the uber-kind review. It's very moving itself.
[Report This]Date: 04/13/2010 6:20:34 PM Title: Chapter 5
Love your story! You are rapidly becoming one of my favorite authors.
Author's Response: Thank you, so so much.
Date: 04/13/2010 6:13:05 PM Title: Chapter 5
My poor heartstrings. You should see what you've done to them.
There were so many things I just loved about this. Logan's calm rage, finally learning her name, the "Go" scene (killed me by the way).
I wish my vocabulary was advanced enough to tell you how much I love this without sounding like a broken record. I'm gonna go ahead & nap on it. Thanks for having this posted so soon!
Author's Response: Lol. Trust me, you could absolutely NEVER sound like a broken records. I'm so greedy when it comes to reviews. And I'm always worried my reply doesnt show gratitude sufficiently. Thank you!!!.....Oh, and I'm very glad u liked the Go scene, and his talk with Jean. I was worried about those.
Date: 04/13/2010 5:57:06 PM Title: Chapter 5
I can't wait to see what happens with her mutation!
Author's Response: >winks< You'll see.
[Report This]Date: 04/12/2010 3:02:27 PM Title: Chapter 4
That poor kid. The nice thing, if it can be referred to as "nice", is that while you're putting Marie through so much trauma, you've established such a realistic protector in Logan that it's not as horrific as it could be. All the kid needs is someone to finally be there to protect her from everything bad in the world, even if one of those bad things are the residents of the mansion. Please keep up the great work. I'm looking forward to your next update.
Author's Response: Oh, my. I dont even know how to thank you for this review. I can't find any grateful words in my dictionary that I havent used already. Just...thank you!!!
[Report This]Date: 04/12/2010 12:24:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
their are no words that can do justice to how much i love this story.
but i will try.
you're writing style is excellent.
the delicate character details you bring to the story are perfect.
i feel like i'm watching a weekly tv series unparalleled by any other.
and the cliffhangers always leave me screaming for more.
those are just the tip of the iceberg.
and still i failed to do justice to the art of your writing.
if you don't already, you should start writing professionaly.
Author's Response: There are no words to do justice to how happy your review made me. But I will try.... :) Thank you, thank you thank you thank you. I'm so happy you feel that way, and I hope the next chapters don't disappoint. >hugs<
Date: 04/12/2010 2:06:30 AM Title: Chapter 4
Great! Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: THANK YOU!!!!!!
Date: 04/12/2010 12:49:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
It was much darker this chapter, especially finding out some of the horrible things they did to her in the lab. I still like it though, and I'm so anxious for updates lol! I know you can only write as fast as you can manage, but it's so hard when a story is so emotional and tugs at you, I want to find out what happens next so badly I can't be patient very well. :) Great story.
Author's Response: I'm GLAD you can't be patient well. I'm so happy and proud, to have anyone feel that way. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 04/11/2010 7:56:20 PM Title: Chapter 3
i don't think there's ANYTHING wrong with this chapter at all. it really shows the slow patience Logan has for Rogue's rehabilitation. and also shows just how long they've been gone...and when Xavier calls, like you said as if Logan had been on vacation, it makes the professor look even more cold.
i love it.
Author's Response: Hi! I know this is so unimaginably late you probably don't even remember it. But I was running through some old reviews, and I found this. I never intentionally neglect to reply to someone, and I just wanted you to know how much I appreciated this!
[Report This]Date: 04/11/2010 2:14:23 AM Title: Chapter 4
This was very epically good. And the ending was so bittersweet. I do love what you're doing here... I'm just so desperate I'd wish you'd update everyday! But as a writer, I know how difficult, if not impossible, that is. But excellent work! :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you understand. I am writing as quickly as I can, without trashing the story.
Date: 04/11/2010 1:00:20 AM Title: Chapter 4
I'm so excited to find out where this goes and I'll be heartbroken if you never finish.
I love it!
Author's Response: Oh, I promise you I won't quit this story until the end. Unless I get a long weekend, it usually takes me about a week to write each chapter. :) Thank you for the review; I hope you continue to enjoy!
[Report This]Date: 04/10/2010 11:26:19 PM Title: Chapter 4
:( i want more chapters.......i get sad now that i see in my emai that u only updated 1 more chapter i want more then one chapter. im greedy. but its reallyreallyreallyreallyreallyreallyrealy good
Author's Response: So sorry! But I swear it isen't from laziness on my part. I write every single day, but it takes me about a week to finish, with my other responsibilities. I'm happy you enjoy it so much!
Date: 04/10/2010 11:15:59 PM Title: Chapter 4
Yeah...! Definitely good. I love the way you ever so slowly thicken the bond between Logan and Marie. And the fact that the Mansion's geeks are total asses, gives Logan's feelings an even greater depth (in my opinion at the very least).
I can't wait to read more about Marie's feelings about Logan's devotion to her. You did a Master's job with the nightmare scene and the introduction to the world inside Marie's head.
I was already in love with your story, but now... (won't say more)
Please, update soon, you'll make somebody very, very happy!
Author's Response: Omg. >hugs< Super mambo thanks. You have no clue how bouncing-in-my-seat-yes!-yes!-happy this review made me. I'll try to make the rest of the story just as good, and I promise to update as quickly as humanly possible.
Date: 04/10/2010 11:15:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hey,
Amazing story and so well done. I admit I tend to avoid really dark/angsty, unhappy stories ..and might have skipped this, except I recently read ScienceGeek and enjoyed it so much (will post review soon :)) I couldn’t pass up reading your work ...and am so glad I did. You write such a compelling story..it’s hard and gritty yet, so full of hope and humanity, each chapter has stayed with me long after reading it. So many things I want to comment on, I’ll have to make a list LOL.
-Your Rogan-I’m pretty sure if I wasn’t a fan of W/R before, I would be after ScienceGeek and this. Your Logan is so sweet (without losing any of his Logan-ness) and caring with Marie, it almost hurts it’s so achingly good. I love that despite the fallout of his actions (ie Professor’s censure etc), he would repeat them in a heartbeat to save Marie. His care and concern are shown in every small action he’s done to spare her any more pain/discomfort.
-It’s horrific what Marie’s been through and the fact that she has to be taught to feel like a human being again is beyond imagining, but I think Logan has done (and is doing) it not only with care/concern/tenderness but keeping her respect and dignity intact so that even in the future when she looks back, she’ll never have to feel embarrassed in any way with him about anything(does that make sense?)
-I love that Logan is Marie’s safe place and hopefully will continue to be so, for the rest of their lives.
-As for Jean and the Professor-it’s horrible how callously they’ve treated Marie, especially given all their tolerance propaganda, and I’m thinking Logan is on the way to being pretty disgusted by Jean (still slightly disappointed about all of Logan’s hook-ups in the mansion, lol).
Finally, Logan’s kiss on Marie’s neck was unexpectedly sensual. I know Marie’s nowhere near that stage of thinking and Logan doesn’t think of her like that, at all, yet I suspect it was more than just affection and there was something primal about it which he’ll probably realize later on (my spec.).
Okay, I wrote way too much..but the gist of it is--I love your story and wanted to let you know (umm, kinda hoping long review= quicker updates :D) Thank you so much.
Author's Response: *NOTE* THE FOLLOWING AUTHOR RESPONSE WAS WRITTEN IN A COMPLETELY PLATONIC, NON-CREEPY WAY: I love you. ThankyouthankyouthankyouThankyouthankyouthankyouThankyouthankyouthankyou. Oh my god! I literally screamed at my computer when I read this. I got up, walked around my house, leapt in the air at random moments, came back to my computer, read it again, and repeated the process. If we'd met in real life, I'd be buying you dinner. Thank you. And believe me,you could never ever have written to much. I was overjoyed, and I apologize to have taken til this afternoon to answer. I'm so glad my story could make you feel that way,and I greatly look forward to your Science Geek Series review. If it's half as kind as this, I will be ecstatic.....I wish I could promise you a chapter update tomorrow, but it'll most likely take a week. I swear it's not laziness; I write every spare moment I get, but that amounts to only a few hours at the end of the day. Once again, thank you thank you thank you.
Date: 04/10/2010 10:41:09 PM Title: Chapter 4
You've really nailed Logan and how he would handle all of this! I love it. Keep going.
Wondering if you know what story it might be where Rogue was raped, got pregnant and came back to the mansion. Logan then decides to build her a nursery but doesn't talk to her much until he really takes care of her and they fall in love. If you find it please, please let me know! Thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you!.....Logan building her a nursery sounds vaguely familiar, but I'm not sure...You might want to check Terri's fics, and the old WRFA(because some of the old fics were not uploaded). If those do not work, if you can remember any sentance in the story, Google it. Good luck!