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[Report This]Date: 04/21/2010 4:57:01 AM Title: Chapter 6
OH FUCK OH FUCK OH FUCK.
[Report This]Date: 04/21/2010 4:41:18 AM Title: Chapter 5
I HATE JEAN SO GOD DAMN MUCH.
Date: 04/21/2010 4:32:14 AM Title: Chapter 7
I'm of 2 minds, I can't wait for the next chapter, but the next chapter is the last, and I don't want that either! Wonderful job sweetie, just such a wonderful job. Now, bring on my happy ending!! :)
Author's Response: Thank you, I trully appreciate that. I'm working hard to make the last chapter as long as I can, if that helps. ;~)
[Report This]Date: 04/21/2010 4:27:26 AM Title: Chapter 4
God he is such a wonderful man. No one else sees it. But he's becoming her only tie back to reality.
Author's Response: Hell yeah!!!
[Report This]Date: 04/21/2010 4:10:08 AM Title: Chapter 3
Fucking Xavier. Going to ruin everything. There is no possible way that she would be ready to go to the mansion yet. The only fucking person she trusts right now is Logan. Stupid Stupid Wheels.
Author's Response: Lol. I agree.
[Report This]Date: 04/21/2010 3:56:18 AM Title: Chapter 2
Brilliant. :D
[Report This]Date: 04/21/2010 3:45:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
First chapter. And I'm hooked. Very very well written. Can't wait to see what's in store. Oh And Xavier's an asshole.
Author's Response: Thank you!!!
[Report This]Date: 04/21/2010 1:52:53 AM Title: Chapter 7
Dayam! That was pretty action-packed. The only complaint I have was that it wasn't longer! :P But this was amazing, and I absolutely loved the frenzy you put Logan in. I do love the Professor, though, so I'm always a bit antsy when he's portrayed how he was here, but you made up for it later. I thought it was amazing, although I wish maybe Logan wouldn't have found Marie so easily. But that's okay, this is awesome. Thanks! :D
Author's Response: Thank you!!! This seemed a lot longer on paper-fourteen pages. It always seems rediculously short when I type it up. As a writer, I'm sure you have the same problem. I wanted it to have a more fast-paced feel, rather than just too fast. >wince< ;~) Guess it just shows how big my handwriting is. Lol. Gracias, final chapter will be up Saturday.
Date: 04/21/2010 1:33:53 AM Title: Chapter 7
Ok, it's the first time I review a story and I can read english but not really write english (I'm french). But I really love your story. I'm happy each time i see there is a new chapter.
Author's Response: I am so honored that you would take the time to review. Thank you.
Date: 04/20/2010 8:47:10 PM Title: Chapter 7
Awesome. Just... Wow.
So exciting! Now what!?!
Author's Response: Lmao! >hugs tightly, bounces<
Date: 04/20/2010 8:38:59 PM Title: Chapter 7
Oh, wow. that was awesome! I truly felt Logan's anguish. It was painful and sharp. I Hate the professor. If the needs of the many out way the needs of the few in his eyes then why is he not embracing the human's point of view about all mutants? By his logic because there are more Humans than Mutants, Mutants are expendable when it comes to the humans survival. His morals come down to what benefits him and his own interests and in truth isn't that what the humans are doing to the mutants. He is no better than they are. The ending of the chapter was hopeful yet so heart wrenching. I really loved this chapter with all its passion and heartache. Awesome job! Update soon!!!
Author's Response: Thank you soooooooooooooooooo much. I agree with you about Chuck.
Date: 04/20/2010 7:44:41 PM Title: Chapter 7
I could kill Xavier for that! How dare he! This has me all worked up. I love it! More soon please?
Author's Response: Lol!! So glad it could get a reaction like that. Final chappie-Saturday.
[Report This]Date: 04/20/2010 7:07:25 PM Title: Chapter 7
Only one more chapter? :(
Author's Response: 'Fraid so.
Date: 04/20/2010 6:19:53 PM Title: Chapter 7
Yay! You made my day. I love coming home from a tough day at work to a new chapter of a story that I'm obsessed with. Just when I think you've exhausted the levels of human depravity you come up with people putting a girl in a storage compartment of a vehicle after everything else that was done to her.
I completely agree with you in regards to Hugh Jackman's bare chest. I'm pretty sure exposure to it cures just about anything actually. It's just science.
In conclusion, loved this. It was kind of light on the kittens though...
Author's Response: The idea that I could make anyone's day makes mine. I could dance with the thought of someone being obsessed with my writing. Gracias....and of course it's science. You can find that in any medical book...but you gotta look very, very close. Bruce Banner didn't turn into the Hulk by a machine. He watched Kate&Leopold. P.S. I'm workin' on the kittens.
Date: 04/20/2010 6:05:18 PM Title: Chapter 7
Awwww... It really smelled like an approaching end. Can't wait to read what you have in store!
This story is fantastic, thank you for making my day!
Author's Response: Thank you for making my day!! Next chap....Probably Saturday.
Date: 04/20/2010 5:30:29 PM Title: Chapter 7
You are right to be happy with the way your action scenes turned out. You truly got across the brutality of the Wolverine and his absolute unwavering need to reach Marie, no matter how much gore and blood that involved. It was short and punchy and painted the perfect (brilliantly grim) picture.
There are many lines that stood out in this chapter, but I’ve narrowed it down to only one (for the sake of not having an embarrassingly long review!):
"And when it was over, the atmosphere was so saturated with blood every breath he drew felt damp.”
I myself write and post, but I only wish I could do so as well and as swiftly as you do. I am in awe... x
Author's Response: How could I have written so quickly or so well (though I suspect the latter must be an exageration) without these magnificent reviews? Thank you so much. >hugs< And trust me, theres no such thing as a embarrasingly long review....unless its a flame/bad review, which will only make me wanna cry. :~) Thankyouthankyouthankyou.
Date: 04/20/2010 4:04:35 PM Title: Chapter 7
What do we learn - never fuck with anybody The Wolverine cares about!
Author's Response: Mm-hmmm. I agree.
Date: 04/20/2010 3:52:39 PM Title: Chapter 7
As much as I love a cuddly Wolvie, nothing gets my heart racing faster than when he's fighting for his Marie! Very nice work on the action sequence.
The luggage compartment? They put her in the f-ing luggage compartment? Too bad he can't kill them twice!
I am very anxious to see what Logan does about this 'deal with the devil' that Chuck made. Will you be tackling that in this story, or do I feel a sequel coming on? *pins author with pleading puppy dog eyes* Hmmm?
And on that note, on with the cuddling! --Wendie
Author's Response: Whoo-hoooooooo!!!!!!!! So glad you liked it. Let's see what you think about the next chapter, and if you say so I might-possibly-sorta-kinda-at-some-point-if-i-get-around-to-it write a sequel. If it's in me. You know what I mean? But I don't think its necessary. :~)
Date: 04/20/2010 2:43:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
I've been checking almost compulsively since you said it might be up today, and I'm so excited it was! It's a great chapter, and I'm so happy it wasn't as bad as it could have been and that he got her back so quickly! I'm sad it's almost over but also a little relieved that there won't be anymore cliffhangers!! Great writing as always :) I can't wait to see how you end it.
Author's Response: Wow. Thats so unbelievably awesome to hear/read. You should see my face. Thank you. Next update....this weekend. Probably Saturday.
[Report This]Date: 04/20/2010 2:24:19 PM Title: Chapter 7
*two-thumbs up* Awesome!
Author's Response: Thank you!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 04/20/2010 2:21:26 PM Title: Chapter 7
thank you thank you thank you!
I am so happy that he found her quickly and has her back now.
I think he should disappear with her and never go back to the mansion, except maybe to extract revenge.
But however you write it will be far better than anything I could dream up.
Can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Oh my god. Thank YOU. I'm writing the final chapie now; you should see it this weekend. And I think you'll get your wish. ;~)
Date: 04/20/2010 1:49:27 PM Title: Chapter 7
Have so enjoyed reading this story.
Author's Response: >squeezes< Thank you!!!
Date: 04/20/2010 12:18:20 PM Title: Chapter 7
God. That fighting scene is the BEST one I read so far. My forehead is touching the ground in front of your feet. She should get better. And face Xavier herself. And spit in his face. I wander would he have a courage to look her in the eyes? Especially with her powers firmly in place.
Author's Response: >screams gleefully< So glad you liked it. Thank you!
Date: 04/20/2010 12:08:01 PM Title: Chapter 7
Cliches often become what they are because they are damned good and useful and effective. Your cliche usage is beautiful. My goodness, you do keep Charles' insanity carefully under wraps don't you. I found it amusing that such a breathing contradiction was questioning Logan's sanity. Wow. This was an amazing chapter. I loved the violence passionately. I wished it could last longer, but I'm sick like that. You did yourself proud, Baby. Just absolutely excellent writing. Please more? I'm afraid that I don't do the asphyxiated look well. DOn't make me hold my breath please?
Thank you, again, for this. Made my day.
~Mia
Author's Response: This review made my day. >hugs tightly< Thanks alot. I'll try to get the final chapter up this weekend.
[Report This]Date: 04/20/2010 12:06:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am running out of adjective to describe how wonderful your work it.
But, if you are planning to end it in one more chapter you better be planning a sequel...
Author's Response: >fist-pumps the air, dances< Yes! Thank you! I don't *think* there will be a sequel, but the last chapter should be sufficient; hope you'll agree.