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Reviewer: Wytchling Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2010 11:09:34 PM Title: Chapter 6

Oh shit. Xavier is in for it now.

Author's Response: Uh-huh.

Reviewer: Solidae Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2010 8:40:05 PM Title: Chapter 6

Ah! You can't leave it there!!
That was really, really good. Loved the bit with the vase, and the garden, and the hot chocolate... Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: THANK YOU!!!! The vase part was my favorite to write....and you should see the next update tomorrow or Wednesday, as soon as I can type it up. It didnt take nearly as long to write it as I thought.

Reviewer: Lorelai Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2010 6:53:21 PM Title: Chapter 6

You write so well I feel like I'm right there in it, even more so than reading normally does for me. My heart broke with Marie's when he broke the vase, and then you damn near gave me a heart attack at the cliffhanger ending! And now you tell me it will be a week or more before an update?? Cruel! lol As always, an excellent chapter, thank you!

Author's Response: It's so amazing, hearing you say that. Its unbelievable. I'm so glad. Thank you.....I've been writing all day, and there are only a few scenes left so I actually think you might see this Tuesday-Wednesday at the latest. >puts finger to lips< Sssh.Don't tell. ;~)

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2010 4:43:57 PM Title: Chapter 6

Oh Charles is going to be lucky to live. I am not really as upset with Logan in this one as the last chapter. That he would feel trapped is very in character for him, that he would act out in anger is also very in character for him. He realized what he did and apologized for it. I love that you had Marie not quite trust the apology and put the vase away where it would be safe, very nice touch.

Yep Charles is going to be lucky to live when Logan finds out what he did.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you were happy with this chapter!!!!

Reviewer: notmyself Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2010 2:20:33 PM Title: Chapter 6

Tender and amazingly sweet. I loved it.

~Mia

Author's Response: Thank you!! >hugs<

Reviewer: Comic-cake Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2010 2:13:14 PM Title: Chapter 6

Well what can I say? I need to find some new words to praise your work because it is so ubberly, mindbogglingily fantastic (now, there’s some new words that my thesaurus refuses to accept! But when it comes to your writing, they exist).

"He's sleeping in your wing." "Not for long." - haha!

And what an emotional scene when he returned and the vase was smashed. It brought tears to my eyes, and very few stories do that.

What an amazing writer you are. I admire you greatly. xx

Author's Response: You don't have those words in your thesaurus? Mine does....Okay, so I scribbled them in with a pencil. But whatever. ;~) Lol. Trust me, you don't ever need to find new words. Whatever you say is guaranteed to make me fist-pump the air and scream, "YES!" ......Thank you so much. I just wish I could express my gratitude without being repetitive.

Author's Response: You don't have those words in your thesaurus? Mine does....Okay, so I scribbled them in with a pencil. But whatever. ;~) Lol. Trust me, you don't ever need to find new words. Whatever you say is guaranteed to make me fist-pump the air and scream, "YES!" ......Thank you so much. I just wish I could express my gratitude without being repetitive.

Reviewer: Alana Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2010 8:14:01 AM Title: Chapter 6

Uh oh. He's done it now. I greatly look forward to Logan's fiery retribution.

Author's Response: So do I. ;-)

Reviewer: ellebell Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2010 5:27:14 AM Title: Chapter 6

I love love love this story so much. You are a very talented writer.

Not to nit pick or anything but do you have a beta? There are just a few things being missed here and there.

*I'm happy to remove this if any offence is caused; sorry I just always notice these things, it is in no way a criticism of your skills.

Author's Response: Yes, I do. But she read this chapter in paper form (in my aweful handwriting) and as I'm sure you know, there are always a few things that slip through the cracks. If you email me with those "just a few things", I'll happily check them out. Thank you for the review, I'm glad you like the story. :~)

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2010 4:35:07 AM Title: Chapter 6

Next chapter, next chapter NOW!!!

Evil cliffhanger!

Author's Response: Lmao! I'm trying.

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2010 4:14:38 AM Title: Chapter 6

What has that cold bastard done!!??? Oh, he deserves a death by the claw. A slow one.

Author's Response: Lol. >winks<

Reviewer: litlen Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2010 3:48:43 AM Title: Chapter 6

Great chapter, loved the underlying conflicting emotions from Logan (especially the guilt he feels, not only does he know what he's done, he can see it in her too), the trust of Marie and the wonder and beauty she sees, the gentleness and understanding from Storm and the pure bastardness (ok so that’s not a word but it's how I see it) of the Prof.

Do you have to finish so damn well? "Where is she?" you say, well I don’t bloody well know but I want to......now!

Much as I hate this chapter reading lark, I’m loving it!

Author's Response: Well, I say it is a word! Lol. Thank you so much. In a few minutes, I'll start the next chapter and put you out of your misery.

Reviewer: Dromeda Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2010 1:59:49 AM Title: Chapter 6

*gasp* Oh, Xavier, what have you done?

Author's Response: lol. You'll see.

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2010 1:31:29 AM Title: Chapter 6

dun dun dunnnnnnn. next chapter tomorrow? please? i dont wanna wait a whole week

Author's Response: Sorry. I'm writing as fast as I can.

Reviewer: kluane Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2010 1:23:39 AM Title: Chapter 6

Great as usual and quite the cliff hanger!

Author's Response: Thank you!!!!!

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2010 12:34:13 AM Title: Chapter 6

Logan let Chuck off way too easy. Then again, I guess Chuck still had to have his head if he was going to tell Logan where she is. I love this. I hate this. I AM ADDICTED TO THIS!

I love that Logan reached a limit and then was sorry he crossed it. You're so right. He's only human. Every long-term caregiver on the planet has had that moment...no one can blame him.

And I don't think it's so much that she's tamed him, but rather that she has put him back in touch with all the best parts of his humanity. She's polished the rust off of them. With her, he shines. --Wendie

Author's Response: Mwahahahahahahahaha!!!! Lol! I'm glad that you liked the Logan-snapping scene. I was a bit worried that I'd get flames for that. Thank you so,so much. >hugs< I'll try to get your next fix to you very soon.

Reviewer: pwaller93 Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2010 12:26:30 AM Title: Chapter 6

Oh my God. I did NOT see that coming! I can't believe... I can't believe Xavier would do that! Oh my GOD! I hope Logan kicks his arse.

Loved this; great progression, and the vase incident was beautiful. I really do love what you're doing here, and your characterisations are just wonderful. :)

Author's Response: So glad you can't see my victory dance. It's quite scary. Lol. Thank you so much. I'm glad I could shock you, and that you liked the chapter.

Reviewer: Amara Nevena Malfoy Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2010 12:09:14 AM Title: Chapter 6

Oh, what has that bastard Xavier done now??? I can't wait to see what you have going on in the next chapter! Keep up the awesome work!

Author's Response: You'll see. >winks< I'm going to start the seventh chapter right now. I think it'll be pretty short, so you might see it in less than a week. Thank you!!

Reviewer: sahara Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2010 11:25:28 PM Title: Chapter 6

Ahhhhh!!! That is the sound I make when my brain explodes. This was so good! The buildup of Logan's frustrations was perfectly executed & believable. You also must be a psychic because when thinking about this story I thought, hmm wouldn't 'Ro's garden be a perfect place for Marie's rehab?

Cliffhanger though? Cruel! Please rectify by making Xavier get his just desserts, Marie getting better, and an abundance of kittens just for good measure.

Author's Response: Not to sound creepy, but I'm so glad I could make your brain explode. Rofl. And of course I'm a psychic. Don't you know: repeated exposure to Hugh Jackman's bare chest is the same as radiation. Don't worry, I'm sure you'll get your superhero powers any day now. Just go watch Wolverine......Thank you so much as always, and I'll see what I can do about the kittens.

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2010 9:40:24 PM Title: Chapter 6

oh christ! what did the professor do???!!! I can't believe she is gone!!! I almost cried when Marie's vase broke. This chapter was beautiful and heartbreaking. I hope you update soon!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you!! I was trying very hard to make people cry. >hugs< Next chapter asap.

Reviewer: DarkDragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2010 9:35:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

I have been waiting all day for you to update :D

Wonderful as usual, Im sure you are tired of hearing that.

You are a master of emotion. My heart absolutely dropped when Marie wrapped Logans vase up and hid it.. Wonderful writing.

Author's Response: Sorry I made you wait so long!! :( :( .....And, trust me. I never ever get tired of it. I honestly am that greedy. Lol. Reviews are what gear me up for the next chapter, and keep me going when I've got writers block....Thank you very, very, very, very much. >hugs<

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2010 9:49:32 AM Title: Chapter 1

yeah i deleted it cause I realized that what I posted made no sense once I finished the chapter. lol

Author's Response: Oh!! Lol. Thanks.

Reviewer: Comic-cake Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2010 3:04:33 PM Title: Chapter 5

I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, yet again. It was so full of heart and subtle emotion.

I so loved the tiny snippet from Rogue’s POV, it was perfectly placed. Also, the reason why Rogue’s mutation had not shown itself was such a brilliantly simple and believable idea.

I loved the darkness from Logan when he said this line - "But if you do, darlin, I'll cut your fucking throat."

Loved it and I can’t wait for more. xx

Author's Response: Omg. I wish I could buy you a cupcake. Thank you! Starting chapter six now.

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2010 7:18:13 AM Title: Chapter 5

Jean's a bitch :-D xXx

Author's Response: Agreed.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2010 7:10:36 AM Title: Chapter 5

First I wanted Jean locked in a lab for a week, then I wanted Hank as Marie's doc and now I'm just so happy that she told Logan her name ^-^

Author's Response: Lol. I will put those on my list.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2010 12:59:26 AM Title: Chapter 5

wow, just wow. i love how protective he is of her and it's just so pure and gentle and concerned and not with the usual sexual undercurrents we see in many stories...of course if it goes that way later i won't complain LOL!

and jean totally sucks, which i always enjoy. such a cold, calculating, insensitive bitch totally in love with her own supposed awesomeness.

i really need to write a hate jean story myself sometimes b/c she pisses me off so much LOL!

Author's Response: Gracias! And--not to give anything away, of course--but by the end you "wont be complaining." ;~) ......you really should write one. Its a great way of channeling hatred.

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