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Reviewer: tamisnead Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2010 12:13:08 PM Title: Love At First Feel

You're just evil, leaving us dangling from the cliff that way! Update soon, pleeeeeeeease......

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2010 11:59:22 AM Title: Love At First Feel

I hate Mystique's guts, but I love how you write her -- devious, snarky, too horny for her own good.

'Monster'? Color me intrigued... --Wendie

Reviewer: Wanderlust Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2010 11:50:26 AM Title: Love At First Feel

Aaaaahhhh!!!!!! Update soon! Please! For the love of Pete!

Oh, and a continuing excellent job. :)

Reviewer: Ally Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2010 11:43:05 AM Title: Love At First Feel

Okay, you're not stopping there, right? There's another chapter hidden somewhere that you'll remember and post right away? Please? *whimper*

Reviewer: notmyself Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2010 9:57:47 PM Title: Prologue: Gimme a Bullet

I also neglected to mention that Kitty phasing so she could kick iron man in the junk? Made of awesome. Brilliant. Never crossed my mind before.

~Mia

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2010 8:18:10 PM Title: Mean Streak

OOOOOOOOOOOOH OOOOOOOOOOOH!!!!!!!!!

Is the Boss-man Daken, Logan's son?

*EXCITED*

Author's Response: i ain't sayin' nothin'...

Reviewer: notmyself Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2010 8:02:24 PM Title: Mean Streak

Holy hell on a pancake! Thank you. Very convincing and just brutally beautiful. You capture Sabertooth perfectly. Makes me want to hug him and kill him with fire all at the same time.

~Mia

Author's Response: you know,i used to hate that character, but i'm getting to the point where i like writing him... perhaps i should be worried... or my cast should be...

Reviewer: notmyself Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2010 7:54:42 PM Title: Ain't No Fun (Waiting Around To Be A Millionaire)

I love it! I love it! I wanna kiss you now. I love it!

I will forever treasure porn smurf.

~Mia

Reviewer: Ally Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2010 7:36:11 PM Title: Mean Streak

So I come back to Wolverine and Rogue fandom after an absence of a few years, and I get this...YAY! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!

Okay, enough craziness. Seriously, get to writing! I'm definitely needing to know what is happening with this story.

Author's Response: welcome back.i will do my best to update soon

Reviewer: tamisnead Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2010 5:27:40 PM Title: Mean Streak

I'm intrigued! Who is this new player?

Author's Response: *grins* you'll just have to keep reading and find out, he he he

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2010 5:21:21 PM Title: Mean Streak

Talk about the plot thickening! Pea soup, dense fog and screwed-up white gravy got nothin' on you, Hobbit. This is downright CHUNKY! But don't sweat the suspense or anything. I'll just wait right here, hanging by my fingernails...AAAAARGH! --Wendie

Author's Response: well, i'll update as soon as i can hun... the next few chapters should be fun *grins* will try to make your suffering worthwhile...

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2010 5:16:56 PM Title: Ain't No Fun (Waiting Around To Be A Millionaire)

Love getting some of Tony's POV. This just gets better and better. --Wendie

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2010 7:59:36 PM Title: High Voltage

fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu.what's bossman gunna do?

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2010 6:22:10 PM Title: High Voltage

Love it! The mixture of action and humor makes this read like a great movie script. Say, now THERE's an idea! Wouldn't it be funny if this little story found its way through some bizarre internet trail and right into the hands of someone with the connections and the capital to actually make such a film? Action, humor, romance, suspense, more action, plenty to keep the CGI guys busy, tons of nifty Marvel characters doing their superhero thing, still more action...sounds like a summer blockbuster to me... --Wendie

Author's Response: it's funny you should say that, because the original idea with this was that it would be my version of a jerry bruckheimer movie. after all the angst in still-life this would be my popcorn movie. glad it's succeeding in its intent then, lol :-) And you're right, it'd be sooo cool... alas, it is not to be... ah well, at least a hobbits can dream...rnhobbits away, ho!

Reviewer: notmyself Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2010 4:33:57 PM Title: High Voltage

That, love, was damned beautiful. You have got some of the BEST lines and snark I have ever read. You make me feel all sorts of gushy happy bloodthirstiness. The award for best insult to Mystique in the history of the the world goes to Hobbitsdoitbetter for: Porn Smurf. And most amusing insult to Iron Man for the same wonderful person for Forest Gump Transformer. My gosh, how the hell do you think up these things?

What, exactly are you in the middle of casting? Are we talking theatre? Because that would be a really cool coincidence. I'm in the middle of practise for my community theatre's summer production. Written and directed by ME:) Toot toot! (Blowing my own horn)

I also adore Mystique's dagger like insults that just barely cover her embarrassment. I wonder if she turns purple if she blushes in her natural form.

Thank you so very much Hobbitses. You consistently make me ten shades of blissful.

~Mia

Author's Response: glad you're enjoying it, mia. my inner smart-ass means insulting anyone is easy, lol. i'm reasonably sure Mystique blushes purple, now you mention it. and i'm casting a shakespeare play at the moment, going up in september. good luck with your show (i couldn't direct my own script, i'd be a nervous wreck) and glas you're enjoying it.rnhobbits away, hey!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2010 11:16:24 AM Title: If You Want Blood (You Got It)

Ok read all chapters and now I just need... MORE! ^-^

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2010 7:53:12 PM Title: If You Want Blood (You Got It)

Oh snap. That was seriously unexpected! What the hell is Mysti doin' there?? Where is Forge? Where is my Wolvie *POUTS*

I give props to Marie though. Nice headbutt. I hope they take her down.

Reviewer: Epic Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2010 5:36:44 PM Title: If You Want Blood (You Got It)

This just keeps getting better and better. Loved Rogue's attitude and her jelousy with the red head hooker!

Reviewer: Wanderlust Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2010 5:22:18 PM Title: Back in Black

What?!? That memory can't be right. Some kinda set-up. Argh!!! Man, and Callum's such a dip. Rogue needs to just dump his ass.

And I love the line, "She stalked through the Mansion with the fuck-you aplomb of Magnet on a bad day". I mean, putting together the fuck- you and aplomb. Great juxtaposition. I can see it.

Reviewer: Wanderlust Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2010 5:17:35 PM Title: If You Want Blood (You Got It)

Man, oh man, am I LOVIN' this story! The interplay between Rogue, Jubilee and Kitty, the intrigue, and the action. Puh-LEEZ update soon!

PS- It is the quiet ones...

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2010 3:13:05 PM Title: If You Want Blood (You Got It)

I love how you have enhanced the characters of all three women way beyond what I would have expected, the biggest surprise, of course, being Kitty the sex-kitten. You go, girl! And as much fun as all this is, could somebody PLEASE finally end that blue bitch once and for all? But before she shuts those yellow eyes forever, I'd like to find out what the devil she REALLY wants with Logan, cause I have a sneaking suspicion that he's just the bait in the trap she's setting to catch the real prize, the Hell's Belles!

Hey, wait a second...red hair...ultimate bitch...would fuck Logan in a heartbeat...have I been hating the wrong red-head in this story? Hmmmm. --Wendie

Reviewer: tamisnead Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2010 2:56:24 PM Title: If You Want Blood (You Got It)

I'm more intrigued with each chapter! More please!

Reviewer: spidergirl723 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2010 1:35:23 AM Title: Back in Black

Really am lovin' this story! I especially like how you added that Logan cheated with a redhead, unfortunately it's right in character :( Keep it going! I can't wait for Logan to meet her bf for real and try to win her back.

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2010 3:07:20 AM Title: Back in Black

Wow. Very insightful. I'm so fucking glad she got in his face. But if I was her I would have decked him for such disrespect.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2010 7:23:48 PM Title: Back in Black

Brilliance, pure brilliance. I don't recall being the one to ask what sent Marie packing, but I'll take the answer all the same. Damn, our favorite red-haired villain strikes again. Have I mentioned that I...oh, never mind, it ain't worth repeating.

Personally, I hope Callum sticks around long enough to get an up-close-and-personal with the real, live Logan. Now, THAT I would pay to see. --Wendie

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