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[Report This]Date: 01/12/2015 3:34:46 PM Title: Chapter 1- Anticipation
OMG, don't feel bad. I once read a fic that took 10 years to finish. However, finish it she (and you) did! Your readers appreciate it more than you could ever know. There's nothing worse than to be invested in characters and then never get your ending.
Now, about endings, lol. I love angst and your story did not fail to deliver. I loved your description of the battle in their reality and the Logan's/Rogue's minds. Please don't stop writing. I'd be willing to wait for another story from you! Thank you for finishing this and posting it. It always makes my day to get a notification fro WRFA!
[Report This]Date: 08/02/2010 8:48:41 PM Title: Chapter 13- The Hill: Part 1-Begin
I felt so obligated to read this the second i saw it. It was as though I'd get murdered if I didn't read it. Really epic battle, a ton of fun to read! I can't wait to see the rest of the fight.
[Report This]Date: 07/18/2010 6:37:38 PM Title: Chapter 11- Headaches and Heartaches
This was an interesting addition to the story. For the most part, it seems like this battle is being dragged out. But it has vivid descriptions and very creative ways of depicting what is happening. I love the way her eyes change to the person she becomes, I never thought of that. And all I can think of is how much of a dramatic affect this is having on Logan.
I wonder if this experience turns him into the hard rugged and emotionally detached Wolverine we all know.
I can't wait to see where this goes.
Date: 07/05/2010 6:32:44 PM Title: Chapter 10- Phoenix
woah insane new direction
Cant these kids just be happy? Too bad about remy but hey they call her rogue for a reason.
I for one want a happy ending for our beloved characters
-Hellboy
Author's Response: I'm really glad you like it. As for that happy ending? I guess you'll have to keep reading and see.
[Report This]Date: 07/04/2010 10:20:19 PM Title: Chapter 1- Anticipation
I agree with Hellboy! Let me just elaborate with better grammar. :P
It does seem really real, the relationship with Rogue. Based it off your life huh? Hehehehe!!! That's adorable.
This story is really sweet because it shows Logan's protective side mixed in with the side that's in love with her. It's so depressing that they can't touch! Oh the obstacles, does this "Real Rogue" from your life not like you?
Don't worry, you seem like a great guy! Writers are hot. :D
Keep writing! I see a lot of potential!
Author's Response: Haha. im glad you like it so far. Id tell you how things went with my Rogue, but i dont want to spoil anything. it could be good and it could be bad, but either way it was important enough to write about. thanks for the comment.
[Report This]Date: 07/04/2010 9:58:14 PM Title: Chapter 6- Dont Think... Just Do
wow that was really good.
I love the dialogue how it flowed really well was amazing.
the relationship established with rogue was really down to earth and realistic. it seemed so real, humble, like its real love I can't explain it. I guess youre the one with the way with words hey?
I cannot wait for more! hurry up!
-Hellboy
[Report This]Date: 06/23/2010 11:59:20 PM Title: Chapter 5- The Wrong Kiss
Lol worthy
[Report This]Date: 06/21/2010 9:47:20 PM Title: Chapter 4- The Rain
awww, it's cute in an innocent kids way, hey they ARE kids after all!
not sappy at all.
and the spinning reminds me of the silly endless spins i would do at concerts when i was in college...just spin with my friends until we fell down dizzy and laughing..until i accidentally spun down some stairs and sprained my ankle badly at a Phish show LOL!
[Report This]Date: 06/21/2010 9:43:34 PM Title: Chapter 3- Calm Beginnings
LOL...i like your description of Gambit. what he tries to pass off as a devil-may-care attitude is actually complete cluelessness!
[Report This]Date: 06/21/2010 9:37:17 PM Title: Chapter 2- Thinking of Thoughts
you really capture the voice of an unsure, somewhat nervous and insecure adolescent boy...Logan or no.
hey, he didn't spring from the womb cocksure and arrogant and confident sex on legs did he? nope.
i like this new perspective on him!
[Report This]Date: 06/19/2010 5:09:17 PM Title: Chapter 4- The Rain
I wanna know what she has to tell him!
Author's Response: that comes later, trust me
Date: 06/19/2010 10:55:38 AM Title: Chapter 4- The Rain
awww that was really cute, I enjoyed reading it.
Author's Response: Im glad you like it so far :)
[Report This]Date: 06/17/2010 9:03:09 PM Title: Chapter 1- Anticipation
love it so far great start, can't wait to read the rogan chapters ahead.
[Report This]Date: 06/17/2010 7:46:01 PM Title: Chapter 1- Anticipation
so many funny lines!
"tonight they had some important meeting on how to destroy us, so he had to miss out."
"he lost himself to the rainbow" oh god, i have to use that with my gay best friend!
CAAAK!
i love high school aged mutants...i really HAVE to finish Mutant High. i have it all worked out in my head but caught a major case of the lazies.
Author's Response: haha. most of those likes my friends have actually said. especially Hank saying CAAAACK! i based him off one of my real stalkers. im glad you have a sence of humor
[Report This]Date: 06/17/2010 5:41:30 PM Title: Chapter 1- Anticipation
A nice start, getting to know all the characters so far. Can't wait to see more!:)