"You're going to eat." I love that there's still this food-bond between them. I appreciate you keeping this. I think I said it in an earlier review (and probably better), but given that Logan isn't Mr. Talkative I really dig that he's still pushing food on her. It's very feral. And I heart that.

"She didn't understand why the better of these two filled her with more fear than the first ever had" Like everyone else I loved this line too. Do you realize your own amazingness when so many different people from all over & all different ages connect with just one sentence you wrote? You should. Just....just do it all right? Take a hot second & think about your amazingness - we'll wait...

Author's Response: Do you have any idea how much you've made my head grow with this review? Do you? And I'm begging you, please don't stop. I'll be bouncing all day long because of this. Thank you.

One word...
A-FREAKEN-MAZING!

OK so its not really a word but still!!

I spent all day refreshing the most recent page hoping you would update, you have no idea how happy I was to see this :D

Author's Response: Omigod! I'm so proud. Thats great to read (and it was read about 8 times). Thank you.

Three little words... harmless enough... maybe the panic attack helps a little, if Marie can let something out... I love your Logan!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm having fun with this Logan too.

‘It’s my turn’ 3 little words that actually made me shudder. Great line to drag you back into the story as a whole.
I’m repeating myself I know but you really do suck the reader right in with your words – we see it and feel it, such wonderful descriptive writing through panic and comfort and ending with what I am going to assume is control through safety at the end. This is the line that stuck with me......“Smashed there against soft folds of cloth and muscles that lacked any give. It was not uncomfortable.”
One of my fav chapters well done x
A few requests....please push bobby off a cliff - I know he hasn’t really done anything but he pisses me off on a good day so just a thought! While you’re at it let him take Jean with him....and I’m not liking Jubes much either infact....how many’s too many?.....you line ‘em up and I’ll push!

Author's Response: >scribbling on To-Do list<...Find...cliff...and...alibi....Jean, Jubes...Bobby too? Here I thought I was making him nice in this. Oh, well. You the boss. Especially after this review, after recognizing the one line I worried was too subtle. Would you like a trophy or the box of chocolates?

First off “I TOLD YOU SO”.....I told you this one would end up as number one and it’s not finished yet!!
Anyway on to the review which is entitled ‘Things I Loved’

Loved the comparisons “She didn't understand why the better of these two filled her with more fear than the first ever had”

Loved the sadness - the feeling of isolation and loneliness throughout the chapter.

Loved Logan’s lurking!

The end (or not as i see you've posted 2 chapters so I may be back in a min...)

Author's Response: Love that you loved it. Thanks for leaving another bounce-inducing review. >hugs<

Really liked this chapter, helping me see them together in the mansion.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad.

Congratulations on taking over the top review spot (with this comment, I might add)!

Looking forward to the rest, with everyone else.

Author's Response: >jumps in the air, grabs, hugs, and kisses< THANK YOU!!!! Thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou!!!!!!! Woot!

Well I kinda don't like Jean here... don't really know why maybe because she is so indifferent towards Marie... hmmm Jubes can be a good therapist but I
don't know if Marie is ready for that kind of treatment.

can't wait for more

Author's Response: Oh, honey, we ALL hate Jean. It's just so fun! :~D Thank you!!!

Is it bad that I wanna hit Logan with a big lump of 4x2 ? – thought it might help him clear his head a little, understand what his instincts are screaming at him.
Just for fun can I hit Jean too? (Repeatedly and with an evil grin on my face)

Like everyone else I loved the “I'm not staying with you?" Line, 5 words and you have hearts breaking everywhere. I also have to mention this one… "I know, honey. They've got blackboards and everything." Brilliantly placed in the middle of so much tension, made me smile.

Again at the risk of saying what everyone else has/will - such wonderful, descriptive writing, never over the top, always just dragging the reader further in. You write the subtitles to pictures that are as clear as day running in readers minds. We see how she looks/how he stands/ their body language/ their facial expressions etc. It’s so easy to see/feel everything.

‘I hope you are all pleased with this chapter.’ – daft question that could only ever have one possible answer.......YES!! now stop reading and get to it ;)

Author's Response: Only if you put a nail-preferably rusty-in the plank when you go for Jean. This review gave me the WarmNFuzzies...not in a kinky way, but in a glowing thank you way. Muchas gracias.

What is it about Jean that, even when she isn't doing it on purpose, she's still a skeezy bitch? Might have something to do with that stick up her ass...Case in point: "You'll call me Mrs. Grey," the auburn woman corrected, a firm edge to a voice that rehearsal had made kind, maternal. Nothing naturally kind or nurturing about this chick. Gives a whole new meaning to 'practicing' medicine, especially the bedside manner part.

But enough about 'Mrs. Grey'...

As usual, what makes this story worth waiting for are the changes, some more subtle than others, that the girl is inspiring in Logan. No 'stop, drop and run' delivery for her, like some mutant mercenary FedEx driver. Oh, hell, no. For her, he even puts up with Jean for the whole deluxe tour. And he's definitely planning to stick around a while, another about-face for him, I'm sure.

While I would have no objection to you giving us day-by-day, blow-by-blow descriptions of her every move at the mansion, because your descriptive writing is just that good, I do have to confess that I am looking forward to reading how he copes with the biggest change of all -- when she needs (wants) him less as a protector and more as a lover. --Wendie

Author's Response: I'd wanted to write a GoodJean in this so badly....>sigh< But its just too hard. It goes against my nature--and *hers*. Ah, well. BitchJean is fun. :~D Thank you, my superconfabulososmamboawesomepossum friend. In the next two chapters, the time frame will be trotting along much faster. I hope you enjoy it.

Yay! Your back! I can't wait to read more...I hope jubilee is nice to rogue though

Author's Response: Hey! Long time no see!...lol. Thank you. And Jubilee is going to be...interesting....in this.

I. Hate. Jean. Grey. Poor Marie. You would think, with all this mind reading people, they would be smarter, but nooooo....

Author's Response: Funny. I'd been planning to show that I was capable of writing GoodJean, but...yeah, that failed epically... :~D Thank you!!!!!!!!!!

This is GREAT!!!! I can smell Logan saving her from both, Xavier (I have a strong feeling you don't like him much, and not just in this story)and Magneto. And boy, did you have me wander about how you are going to do it. But then, you are the supreme writer here. I'm just a humble reader, happy with anything you decide to give me. God, I can be sneaky and sleazy too, with all this compliments ;-)

Author's Response: Y'know, its so strange: I loved Xavier until I began writing fanfiction. He's just so fun to play with as a jerk. But now I can't even watch the movie without picking out a thousand things that make him a secret bad guy...Weird. Thanks for your not-so-subtle hints and your sense of smell. >hugs tightly<