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Reviewer: tamisnead Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2010 3:18:41 PM Title: Chapter 5

Really loving this story, please update soon.:)

Author's Response: Thank you, I'll try!

Reviewer: ellebell Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2010 3:03:59 PM Title: Chapter 5

A++

Author's Response: Thank you!! >waves grade around, jumping in the air.

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2010 10:27:18 PM Title: Chapter 4

cant wait til next chapter

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: annie77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2010 8:16:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

Personally, I only read the reviews on the fics I really really like. Because reading other people interpretations is fun and helps with my own view on the story, things I could have missed, etc :)

Author's Response: I do a little happy dance every time I read that; Im so glad to know that I am included in that category. Thanks.

Reviewer: annie77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2010 3:50:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

I was reading the reviews the other day and you asked for the issue where Logan meets a young girl in the corridor of the building they live, It starts in "Wolverine" V3. Issue Number 1, cheers

Author's Response: Y'know, Im always shocked when I hear that other people read fic reviews. It's rediculously obvious, of course, but somehow I got it in my head that they were just for the writers! But thank you, thank you so much for telling me. It was really kind of you. Imma wait 'til after this story is finished to buy it (so theres ABSOLUTELY POSITIVELY zero chance of anybody saying that anything, you know, *spilled over*). Gracias! >hugs<

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2010 9:43:32 PM Title: Chapter 4

NO.NO. NO NO NO NO NO. I don't want to wait a week! I want it now! I couldn't stop reading this. Its great! I cant wait to see what other things are in store for both the girl and Logan.

Author's Response: Lmao!!! Im sorry to torture you, and so happy you like it that much at the same time. The updates are a week apart because it take me a week to write them. I manage about three pages a day, at best. And the night before Im always scrambling to finish! So its not like Im holding out on ya'll-I promise. Thanks a million. It feels wonderful to read that at the end of the day.

Reviewer: notmyself Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2010 12:46:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

Ribbons of squishy flesh on the floor isn't scary to you? Or did you mean just for this chapter. Honestly, the wondering what happened to her left me with a good dose of wariness for a good chunk of the chapter. To clarify, thank you for writing a good quality, original look into Wolverine. It scares me at times and sickens me at others. But it always entertains. Thank you for the daily dosage of fingernail.

~Mia

Author's Response: Oh, my, how could I have missed that? Lmao. But I have to say, I really really really really really really really reeeh-eeally love your explanation. Its one of the nicest things Ive ever been told. Thank you!

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2010 11:11:42 PM Title: Chapter 4

Have I told you yet how much I enjoy the way you structure this story? The way Logan's selfdeception drives the story is really natural and flows very well.

Author's Response: >hugs really really tightly< Thank you; Im so glad you think sn

Reviewer: sahara Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2010 8:50:17 PM Title: Chapter 4

"Logan dreaded them more than a kick to his testicles, more than Scott Summers singing, more than an open bottle of Nair." Genuine lol moment. I'm glad I'm not the only one who considered how awful it would be to have super senses around a bottle of Nair. Thank you for making me feel less crazy.

"But he would no longer be bothered by the girl. He would no longer be bothered with her trailing him or demanding food or giving those girlish "thank you’s”." I just love how he's turning everything around & doing his damnedest to convince himself that she's a bother. Other people may not be able to fool the Wolverine, but he sure as shit is good at fooling himself.

"He could cram Singapore noodles down her throat. Make her--make her say those things she'd said before. About him being nice." Is 'aww' the appropriate response here? Because that makes me want to go 'awww'.

This gives me warm fuzzies. Warm Logan-shaped fuzzies. I will cuddle with them. It will be fantastic. Thank you.

Author's Response: Oh, I think its awful to have NORMAL senses around Nair. That crap is terrible! >gags<....This review made me stare at my screen for about ten minutes with a huge, completely idiotic grin. Thanks, Sahara.

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2010 7:34:33 PM Title: Chapter 4

The way you so vividly describe side characters is amazing!!! The cashier one I could see in front of me. Keep it up. He is going to find out
that she is a mutant, right?

Author's Response: >launches, hugs wildly< Im so glad you liked the cashier. Thanks so so so much. But no spoilers!

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2010 5:39:17 PM Title: Chapter 4

ooooooohh... xXx

Author's Response: Lol...Thank yooouuuuuuuuu...

Reviewer: annie77 Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2010 5:24:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love the way you're developing their relationship. I wonder what happened to the girl when she was absent, only bad things cross my mind. By the way Id also like to know more about her background; Who does she live with? Doesnt she go to school? I even have a whole theory of whats going on (yes, thats what I do when waiting for the next update!). I cant wait till the next chapter, hope you can upload soon! Thanks

Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter will provide a lot of answers/backstory. Im even considering doing it in her POV...maybe. I dont know. But I swear you WILL get answers. Im only 25% making it up as I go. ;~)

Reviewer: Wolverette Signed star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2010 3:52:50 PM Title: Chapter 4

I could kick myself that I didn't leave a review for the last chapter - I meant to, but I guess I got distracted. Anyway, better late than never!
Y'know, this story is beginning to remind me of a recent series from the Wolverine comic, in which Logan, hiding out in a shabby tenement, meets a young girl - (not Rogue, I hasten to add.) She calls him 'Mean Man' and a kind of grudging respect develops between them, but when she's murdered Logan sets off to avenge her, spreading blood and mayhem across the country. Please don't kill Rogue off in your story, because I'm beginning to like her!
Chapter four - awesome as always! Looking forward to finding out why Marie was missing from her usual place on the step!

Author's Response: Really? Wow. Whats the name of that? Ive never read the comics (certainly not that one;Im no copycat!) but lately Ive had the urge to try them. Especially the ones where on the cover you can squint and pretend he's Hugh Jackman...Mmmh...Hugh...Anyway, thank you!!!! >hugs<

Reviewer: Comic-cake Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2010 2:26:35 PM Title: Chapter 4

I adore this chapter; it comes across effortless and unrushed, and I’m loving the build up. I can’t wait to learn more about Rogue’s background...

Author's Response: Effortless? Heh. Ive nicknamed my notebook "Little astard" and I alternately cuss/sweet talk it and my pen when I get stuck, which is every ten minutes....God I wish that was a joke. But Im so glad it seemed that way! Lol. Thank you!

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2010 2:12:56 PM Title: Chapter 4

awww You are really tearing my heart out with these chapters! I love how their relationship progresses so slowly but in their way its huge too. Great job! I look forward to the next chapter! In fact I am practically stalking this story looking for an update!

Author's Response: Please, stalk away. I love it. Thank you! The next chapter will show more Rogue-explaination and dialouge between the two.

Reviewer: tamisnead Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2010 11:45:32 AM Title: Chapter 4

I'm really enjoying the sweet Rogan going on, I would love to find out a little back story on Marie in this universe.

Author's Response: Gracias! Ask and you shall receive--next chapter, I promise.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2010 11:31:30 AM Title: Chapter 4

Yesssss finally!

more please soon

Author's Response: Lol. 'Tanks. Next update-one week.

Reviewer: ellebell Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2010 11:12:33 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm not very good at reviewing, but I like were this is going and can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Any review is a great review. >hugs<

Reviewer: litlen Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2010 1:10:19 AM Title: Chapter 4

Love how you write Logan, love how he's trying to convince himself everything he does/feels is anything but what it truly is.
The concept/beginning is wonderful and really enjoyable to read, so far its uniqueness is shining through and along with your brilliant style makes this one hell of a fic - keep it up x

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Im having alot of fun with this Logan too. Not as much as Heal Over Logan, but running close.

Reviewer: notmyself Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2010 9:35:41 PM Title: Chapter 4

Thank you for providing the scary.

~Mia

Author's Response: The scary? >puzzled, hugs anyway< Gracias!

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2010 8:00:27 PM Title: Chapter 4

Awww, I like seeing them slowly get closer. :)

Author's Response: I'm so glad.

Reviewer: Wolf CrescentWalker Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2010 2:42:10 AM Title: Chapter 3

You're doing one hell of a good job at setting the atmosphere in this story. I almost feel dirty after reading about the tenement. And the repeated "Here..." section where he gives her food is brilliant; really gives you the feeling of time passing as they encounter each other over fast food bags.

Good job! My only criticism is proof-reading - there are omitted words here and there, and one switched word (I think you intended 'shoulders' and wrote 'soldiers', and that smells like a spell-check error).

Author's Response: Thanks a billion. I wish I could hug you right now. And the typos are completely 100% my fault. My beta is amazing, but I can't expect her to catch everything with me rushing her through it. Are the mistakes only in the third chapter? I will re-edit it when I post the next chapter, because my beta works hard enough.(Said beta is looking over my shoulder and would like me to add that she is very pretty). Have a nice day!

Reviewer: tamisnead Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2010 9:34:46 PM Title: Chapter 3

Really enjoying this. Darn it I keep trying not to be drawn into WIP's but you guys keep sucking me in.

Author's Response: Yes, arent we terrible that way? Lol. Thank you. Im glad I could suck you in.

Reviewer: Turante Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2010 5:36:05 PM Title: Chapter 3

*Loves*

Author's Response: >hugs< Gracias.

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2010 12:41:52 AM Title: Chapter 3

i cant waits for next chapter

Author's Response: Thank you.

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