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[Report This]Date: 07/28/2010 12:35:37 AM Title: Chapter 3
Ah, sweet. I was planning on saving this for tomorrow but that resolution only lasted... Bout seven hours of filling my head with distractions. Another well written chapter Rose my dear. Always leaving me wanting more.
It's a lovely poetic style you have. Very nice, a god among insects if I do say so myself. :P
Do hurry. And do not make me to use the hostility of caps lock. You provoke it by making me wait.
Author's Response: Next update...Monday or Tuesday. Sorry! But I'll do my best to make it a long one. Anything to avoid the horror of caps lock....I can't begin to enough for this review. >hugs tightly<
Date: 07/27/2010 11:49:01 PM Title: Chapter 3
Beautiful. Succinct. Painful. But absolutely glorious. I loved reading this sick little thing. Coffee does wonderful things to you, m'dear.
~Mia
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I wish I could hug you for real.
[Report This]Date: 07/27/2010 7:43:26 PM Title: Chapter 3
I like the start of this one. Its an interesting twist. A familiar premise of Logan taking care of Rogue, but I don't believe I've seen anything quite like this one before. Good job, keep up the great work.
Author's Response: A thousand thank yous would not be enough. Im glad you like it.
Date: 07/27/2010 6:48:39 PM Title: Chapter 3
I sorta like it but I'm not engaged in these characters yet. I'm waiting for them to do SOMEthing. Mind giving us a little background on what this Marie's life is like?
Author's Response: Due to the shortness of both my time to write and these chapters, this story will be a long one. It's slow moving now but I am trying to be thorough. Thank you!
Date: 07/27/2010 6:32:47 PM Title: Chapter 3
Is it odd that I had no problem eating while reading the first part of this chapter? I'm considering what kind of person that makes me...
"She'd known girls (plenty of them), girls raised on curse words instead of lullabies, girls who couldn't read but whose eyes had learned too much before they were six years old." A heartbreaking, but astute description.
" Just looking at him provided answers to questions before anybody asked them: No, you could not run fast enough; No, you did not have a chance." Loved, loved, loved this description of Logan! So true and worded very nicely! I think the Logans you tend to write are my favorite Logans :)
And I just want to formally say welcome to the coffee club. You'll be addicted in approx. 2 days so please feel free to drop by one of our meetings. Just look for the group of sunglass-wearing tweakers, clutching coffee cups & laptops huddled in the shadow of a Starbucks.
Author's Response: It makes you an awesome person as far as I am concerned and I am very pleased to hear that it didn't bother your digestive tract. (The caffeine has worn off, but Ive gorged myself on episodes of The Big Bang Theory...thats only funny if you've seen the show. If you haven't, ignore everything in these parenthesis). Thank you uber much. >hugs< Want some of my cheesecake?
Date: 07/27/2010 4:34:00 PM Title: Chapter 3
I am really enjoying this story. Logan's relationship with Marie is very realistic for him. It is interesting to see how you are developing their relationship. My only complaint is that you don't update often enough! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! Can I interest you in a first born son? Or some cheesecake?
[Report This]Date: 07/27/2010 3:52:21 PM Title: Chapter 3
Fuck it..... I tried so friggin’ hard to bypass - kept my eyes trained on the ‘complete – NO’ kept them there for ages but they betrayed me, couldn’t/wouldn’t overwrite the actions of my fingers that happily clicked away to start.
So here I am and I guess we’re off again on another journey – one I know will be well worth it in the end but why do I have to be so damn impatient? It’s painfully frustrating!! There’s also the fact that it’s not good for a grown woman to have to beg and plead but then again this is a brilliant beginning (no surprise there) Logan is as he should be, loving his version of revenge, your descriptions, the setting, the way you introduced Marie, his internal conflict, the not knowing why, the questioning of himself and the gentle build of interactions.
Sooooooooo.....Please update this ASAP.....pretty please.....promise of cake/choc/alcohol/naked wolverine (delete to you taste, or keep all!)
Hmmm.....very nice......(sorry drifted off a bit at the thought of the last one)
Great stuff as usual x
Author's Response: Lol. Im very grateful for the lack of control over your own fingers... You can beg all you want, I wont tell anyone. ("Hey Sahara! Just what Litlen just did!") Thank you a billion times; Ill write as fast as I possibly can and hope to see you around these parts again.
Date: 07/27/2010 3:28:24 PM Title: Chapter 3
Aw, I love watching their relationship develop here!
Author's Response: Thank you!!! >offers cookie<
Date: 07/27/2010 3:07:26 PM Title: Chapter 3
Damn I wanna feed her too... I'd drown her in food... hell I'd adopt her.
can't wait for more
Author's Response: Lol. Im sure she would appreciate that.
[Report This]Date: 07/27/2010 2:47:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Absolutely brilliant! It was worth the waiting but this is so good I wish the chapters were longer. Anyways, you're doing a super work here I can certainly picture the creepy hall, the killings, everything its like a movie. Please update soon I want to see more kid(marie)/logan interaction I beg you! :)
Author's Response: I promise to write as much as I possibly can, but it'll still probably take a week. >wince< But I promise much more interraction. Thank you so much.
Date: 07/27/2010 2:00:57 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh, I was so happy when I received my alert for this story! I love how you ever-so-slowly build up their interaction, tiny piece by tiny little piece. Brilliant.
Loved this line: "Just looking at him provided answers to questions before anybody asked them: No, you could not run fast enough; No, you did not have a chance." Damn right - lol! :-)
Author's Response: Bet I was happier getting your review. :~) Thank you!!
[Report This]Date: 07/27/2010 1:19:14 PM Title: Chapter 3
$5 for an apple??? what a bloody cheek. xXx
Author's Response: I know, right? It's redonkulous. ;D
Date: 07/27/2010 12:53:09 PM Title: Chapter 3
oo! good writing! Good angsty but still lovable Logan! Goooooood story :D
Author's Response: >hugs< Thanks a bajillion. I hope you continue to enjoy it.
Date: 07/27/2010 10:51:50 AM Title: Chapter 3
I'll buy you a coffee, just keep it coming. I want them to get together soooo badly.
Author's Response: Thank you!!!!!!!!! Next update will take a week...but thanks to all these wonderful reviews I think (hope. This product comes with no guarentees). it will be a long one, with much more Rogan interraction.
[Report This]Date: 07/26/2010 6:59:38 PM Title: Chapter 2
You should PLEASE hurry up and give me more chapters! I'm dying for more.
Author's Response: Lol! I am finished with the third chapter, but I won't be able to type it up tonight. You will definately see it tomorrow. Im sorry, and thank you!
[Report This]Date: 07/26/2010 2:17:21 PM Title: Chapter 2
Another powerful chapter. Too many writers try to skirt away from what Logan does best - he's a killer through and through, however reluctantly he does it - but you have captured this side of him perfectly without being too melodramatic or over the top.
I am loving this story! Hope you continue soon.
Author's Response: Oh, dear lord thank you! I was worried that people would not like the gorier parts of this. Your review helped me finish the scene I was struggling with; thanks to you the third chapter will be up tomorrow. >hugs< Thankyouthankyouthankyou!
Date: 07/22/2010 12:03:23 AM Title: Chapter 2
I'm not sure why I'm so fond of this. Or why I want to adopt it and bring it home like some sweet stray puppy that is still half feral and may be rabid but has this cute little torn ear, so you love it anyways. Huh. Thanks.
~Mia
Author's Response: Lmao! That may be the coolest compliment Ive ever gotten...I am eating these absolutely amazing, fancy mini-cake things-theyre like frosted orgasms-that I refuse to share with anyone in my house. But I touched one to the computer screen for you. Thanks.
Date: 07/21/2010 6:24:02 PM Title: Chapter 2
Ooooh my kinda story - I like very much!
more please soon
Author's Response: >hugs tightly< Thanks. You're awesome.
[Report This]Date: 07/21/2010 1:54:22 AM Title: Chapter 2
I must hurt, becoming human again. xXx
Author's Response: That is so sweet. :D
Date: 07/21/2010 1:41:44 AM Title: Chapter 2
I'm intrigued to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Thank you so much.
[Report This]Date: 07/21/2010 12:29:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
yey another chapter! :D Im loving this story A LOT. Cant wait to see the way Logan gets closer to Marie- I love his personal struggle between what he knows he is (a killer) and the need he suddenly feels about taking care of that girl he barely knows, but probably he hasnt even realized that yet. Please pleaseee update soon! Thank you
Author's Response: A million gabillion thank you's, plus cookie dough. You are wonderful....And Imma try to update by next Wednesday. :~)
[Report This]Date: 07/20/2010 10:54:17 PM Title: Chapter 2
im still not sure im getting this story. but i like it so far. cant wait for next chapter
Author's Response: Thanks. :~)
[Report This]Date: 07/20/2010 7:32:49 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wondeful first 2 chapters you have here! I can't wait for more Logan/Marie interaction! Keep up the geat work and I'll be waiting for your updates!
Author's Response: Oh, mess. Muchas Gracias and a cookie for you. >hugs< Wanna make a deal? I give more great work and you give more reviews? Hmm?
Date: 07/20/2010 5:55:59 PM Title: Chapter 2
Thank you for writing this precious piece. Beautiful, tender, gentle. In Logan/Rogue way, of course. I can't wait for him to take her under his wing and starts protecting her really. And idea of her reading THOSE books in a place like that is just...amazing.
Author's Response: Thank you for writing this precious review. :~) Seriously, this was great to hear....er...read. >hugs< Im glad you thought so.
Date: 07/20/2010 5:55:20 PM Title: Chapter 2
YAY! *Throws confetti & ignores how hard it will be to vacuum up later*!! This made my day. This and a beer. So thank you for providing one of those.
Again a wonderful example of how visually appealing your writing is. Anybody can be descriptive, but few can pull it off effortlessly & without it becoming too wordy.
Also, how can you throw out that birthday suit comment and expect me to function normally & not creepily?!
Author's Response: Greetings, Awesome-Possum. Im glad you liked it, and almost as glad that you were drinking while you read. My writing's twice as good this way. Thank you. ;~) .....and I was going to attach that photo, but I wasn't sure how high that would register on the awkward creeper scale-I dont usually email penises to other women. But he's yours if you want it. >raises eyebrow<