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Date: 07/20/2010 5:11:58 PM Title: Chapter 2
Hello! Yes, it's me again. :-)
"He carried the box up Prewer street, boots sloshing through gravy-thick water, cigarette foil and beer caps. He thought about Stebbins, what a waste the day had been--no names collected at all--and people who wouldn't steal money when they find it on the ground." - I love lines like these, I think they are almost hidden, do you know what I mean? Like 'filler' lines to move you from one place to the next, so easily over-looked, and yet they set the scene perfectly and say so much.
"She could be kinda pretty, he thought absently to himself. Nice--nice lips. Nice chin. Slender little neck. Pale." - I love the delicate way you describe Rogue here.
"Why are you surprised?, Logan asked himself as he walked to the door that belonged to him. You're not a nice person. You don't do nice things. Stop pretending." - great line, it says a lot about Logan's frame of mind.
So again, I'll stop re-quoting your story back to you (I'm sure you're familiar with every line!) and just tell you that I love your work.
Author's Response: Hello! The re-quoting is almost my favorite part. ;~) Im grateful for it. Thank you very very very much. Congratulations, you are my favorite person right now.
[Report This]Date: 07/20/2010 4:52:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ok then! I enjoyed that immensely. I always like Logan portrayed as a "not nice" person when deep down, he's just great. :)
Cannot wait for more. :D
Author's Response: Im so glad you liked it. Thank you very much.
Date: 07/20/2010 4:35:57 PM Title: Chapter 2
Awww, I love that ending. :)
Author's Response: >hugs tightly< Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 07/16/2010 11:47:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
I knew there was a reason you are on my list of favourite authors, and this story is definitely it! Awesome first chapter - this really has potential and I'm looking forward to reading more! Loved the way you have portrayed Logan - his introduction is suitably chilling!
Hope you continue soon!
Author's Response: Oh! I cant begin to tell you how great that is to hear. Im so glad you like it. Thank you! >hugs< The next chapter should be up by Wednesday......Btw, (and I was just curious, it doesnt bother me at all) did you know how the star ratings work? I just figured them out. Each number equals a half star. So 6=3 stars.
Date: 07/15/2010 2:29:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm finally back on-line, it's nearly Friday (yay!), my hubby is happily absorbed in the golf and I smile to myself that I can relax here (with a cold bottle of beer, of course) and enjoy another RoseSumner story. Am I becoming a freakish stalker fangirl of yours? YES!
"Whitmoore's finger hadn't clotted, but the blood wasn't gushing quite so fast. Instead, it seemed to unwind and fall from the hole like wet ribbon." - it's lines like these that makes me a fangirl. So descriptive, so brilliant.
"The flesh at the front of the blades did not bunch up, but parted like meat cooked all day." - what a 'Stephen King-esk' line. Love it!
The intro of 'Marie' is perfectly done.
"It had eight deadbolts and two chains on the opposite side that he never once turned during his stay. Let 'em try". - that is Logan, through and through.
So here we are again, you writing a great story and me writing ridiculously long reviews! Love it and can't wait for the next installment...
Author's Response: Oh, lord. I had the world's worst/craziest day at work. And this review made everything wonderful again. Thank you multiplied by five hundred. I'm so glad you like it (until the first reviews, I'm always convinced that I've posted worthless trash and should delete it immediately, before someone sees). rnrn Wow. Stephen King is my favorite writer. >bounces, dances
Date: 07/14/2010 10:59:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
"I will never ever ever do a story where Marie and Logan have a platonic relationship."
Amen to that!!!
Author's Response: >cheers< Thank you!!
Date: 07/14/2010 10:57:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really like this opening. I am assuming the second part - Logan arriving at the apartment and seeing the girl is a flashback? Or does the Thomas bit happen first?
Author's Response: No, you're right about the Thomas scene happening first, before he moved into the apartment. Thank you!!!! >hugs<
[Report This]Date: 07/14/2010 10:13:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
You're off to a good start! I'll be looking forward to the rest of the story. From your auther's notes I assume you're going to make the girl on the steps(Rogue?)older than she seems.
Author's Response: Thanks!!!! No, but by the time they actually have sex, she will be older. ;-)
Date: 07/14/2010 9:46:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sweet! I'm so happy that you've written another story! I'm addicted to your stories, BTW. This one sounds really intriguing with such a cool premise! Can't wait to read what you have in store for us this time!
Author's Response: Im sorry! I read this, like twenty times and didnt even see that I had not reviewed it. Thank you so much. Ive always dreamed of someone saying that. Im happy you think so.
Date: 07/14/2010 9:20:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
ok, You have me hooked already!!! I loved this chapter and the whole idea of the story! Please update soon!!!
Author's Response: Lol!!! Thank you so much!!!!! I'm insanely busy, but the next update should be fairly soon.
Date: 07/14/2010 9:13:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
Yesssssss. That's the satisfying sound I made when I saw that you had posted another story. This & a cookies & cream milkshake kept me from a murderous rampage after work. The world thanks you.
You had me at "You know what bleeds a lot?"
"There was no need for the man to scream that loud. It was only his pinky finger."
"Logan laughed. He hadn't asked for that, but it was a nice touch."
Loved these lines! There are very few things I adore more than black humor and coming across these little trinkets is like finding Easter eggs.
I'm excited to see where this goes. I don't know what this says about me, but I enjoy a Dependent!Rogue/Dominant!Logan story. So I trust your judgment.
Author's Response: Funny. Your review is what kept me from bawling my eyes out after work. My internet is messing up, so I had to walk to the library for a computer. It was worth it. A thousand times, thank you. I'm so glad you like it.
[Report This]Date: 07/14/2010 8:54:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
OK, you need to update this and soon!
Im not a fan of "action" fics, but you wrote Logan so well that It looked as if I was reading that out of a comic book. ie: "Know what a lie smells like? Burned rubber. And carrots."
"You're crazy! You freak! Psycho!"
"Uh-huh,"
Now Im really intrigued about the girl (Marie) and how she and Logan are going to be connected. You make such a unique chemistry between the characters and their relationships that I cant wait till the next chapter! This story looks promising
Author's Response: I'm not an action fan either; the rest of the story will contain mostly Rogan interraction. I swear, the Thomas-scene was (probably) the most actiony bit you'll find in here. :-) Thank you so so soooooooooo much; I hope you continue to enjoy this.
Date: 07/14/2010 6:48:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oooooh...Logan is GOD. I enjoyed his little chat with Thomas sooooo much. Does that make me a bad person?
"He stepped under the weak, dribbling flow of the shower, finding himself--for no particular reason--thinking of the girl on the steps." Oh God...Here it goes...The dense Logan. The "i-have-no-feelings-for-her-I-care-for-her-as-a-brother" Logan. Or is it?
Author's Response: No, that makes you an superduperfantabulicious person. I'm so glad you like it. Thank you so much! >hugs<
Date: 07/14/2010 6:35:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
Huh. I'm intrigued.
Author's Response: Thank you!!!!