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[Report This]Date: 03/24/2015 9:06:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
I am always so amazed to see how MUCH can be said in so few words! This is a fantastic fic!
Date: 05/12/2012 11:05:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh, I love their special bond so much. :) I get so wrapped up in L&M fanfic that when I watch one of the movies, I'm always so surprised that they're not together, heh. Loved it; keep writing awesome stories like these. :)
Date: 12/30/2011 11:05:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it! It literally moved me!
Date: 12/17/2011 12:04:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love the intimacy of this. The love they both feel for each other is obvious, and the fact that Logan only feels this way with Marie is so affirming of their unique love. Loved it! :)
Date: 01/03/2011 12:15:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow. That was amazing. Hehe I love the way she just doesnt care, and I love the way that this isn't before they start, or after they finish, but in between. Or rather, both, lol
Author's Response: Yeah, an in between-er. A couple of rounds isn't going to do for them. If it's not a Sex-a-thon, then it just ain't normal ;p Glad you liked it! Thanks for the review
Date: 10/21/2010 9:37:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
*applauds*
Author's Response: *blushes* Mucho Thanks :D
[Report This]Date: 10/19/2010 2:25:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
What a wonderful description of afterglow. I think this little snippet of recovery time is one of the sexiest and most sensual bits of a couples lives that I've read. I think that what you do during this time can make or break a relationship and what they do just (and your descriptiveness is just superb and colorful and downright fantastic) conveys that they have one helluva great relationship.
Great Job hon. GREAT GREAT job.
Author's Response: Thank you thank you thank you. This review was delightful to find. Not quite sure what prompted this little peek into this particular part of their relationship, but I'm super glad I did. I agree with you about how people interact during this is a big indicator of type of relationship that exists between them. And I'm super thrilled you like how things are between these two in this little snippet.
[Report This]Date: 10/17/2010 6:04:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hey this is awesome, loved the way you described everything, specially all his sensations. More, more, more!
Author's Response: Thanks! More? I'm workin on it, promise!
[Report This]Date: 10/17/2010 2:30:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
Three cheers for suggestive! Ladies and not-so-ladies, may I present the newest great/amazing/fantabulous author on the WRFA! This was beyond brilliant-such a nice rythm, original presentation of the scene, and general awesome possum-ness. Thank you for sharing it.
Author's Response: *curtsies awkwardly & blushes furiously. Gets back to work on your next issue of MANimals magazine with pages upon pages of Logan's abs covered in melted ice cream* Thank you :D
Date: 10/17/2010 12:05:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
Awwwww, this piece is so descriptive and a lovely intimate snippet of Logan’s thoughts.
“If it were anyone else he’d probably feel trapped, desperate to get away. Not with her though.” – love it.
“Her eyes, even darker now with the knowledge that they’re not done yet.” - Oh Rogue, you are one lucky, lucky girl! Lol!
P.S. Bloody brilliant!
Author's Response: Two bold "bloody brilliants"?! Hells yes. I'd take them over gold stars any day. I'm glad you liked it & I'm positively bouncing because you picked out lines. Better than ice cream for breakfast :D
[Report This]Date: 10/17/2010 7:45:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
A small insight into Logan’s thoughts during a small section of time, all created in a small length fic yet containing nothing small in it’s impact with the reader. Simply lovely.
I am of an age where I do not say wow! But I have to tell you that that was the first thing that came to mind when reading the following - ‘It’s a first for him - staying, touching, experiencing. He’s still not at full capacity after all of that. He’s still feeling a bit unsteady, relying on her enveloping embrace to bring him around and again he has the fleeting thought that this should make him feel weak.’ A sentence with two meanings, whether intentional or not at first glance it could be read that the unsteadiness he’s feeling is down to his exertion - or is it the newness of his actions/feelings? Either way the perfect end to this beautiful fic.
You really are on a roll! Keep ‘em coming x
Author's Response: I wish I could come up with a response as kind and thoughtful as your review. Picking out something that stood out to you and then finding a deeper meaning in it makes me incredibly happy and completely baffled. You hit the nail on the head & got the double meaning there. I honestly didn't think I wrote it in a way that would make that clear, but I put it out there anyway. Reviews like yours make all the anxiety & nail biting worth it. I hope I can deliver just as well next time! - My angst bunnies are multiplying though.rnrnThank you so much for this. I'm dedicating my next spoonful of breakfast ice cream to you :)
Date: 10/16/2010 10:31:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
As promised, a few lines I just had to single out...
Takes a deep appreciation of their combined scents too, along with the light lingering honeysuckle of Marie’s soap.
Love the use of 'appreciation' instead of 'sniff' or 'breath' here. A simple act, an instinctual act, takes on new meaning, new depth because this time there is emotion attached to it.
Marie had always loved running her fingers through his hair even when she couldn’t touch. That’s something that hasn’t changed now that she can.
This is so subtle it's almost an afterthought. Such a lovely way to convey that she's achieved control.
He’s got to see her face.
I love the use of 'got to' instead of 'needs'. It's so HIM and somehow it feels more honestly urgent than 'needs' which, in hindsight, would have sounded all romance-novely and wrong.
It’s a first for him - staying, touching, experiencing.
Not that he's had much choice, apparently! Drained as he is. But, the point, I think, is that no other woman would have held him in the kind of thrall that she does. No one else would have kept him interested long enough to totally sap him like that. Just her. Only Marie.
He feels humbled.
Again, only with her. And his humility implies a deep appreciation (there's that lovely word again) for all that she is and all that she does for him, not the least of which is to love him to the very limits of her being -- and his.
I don't know if you've been hiding your light under a bushel for lo these many months (years?) while you faithfully read and reviewed others' work or if you have only recently discovered your yen for writing, but either way, I am very glad you decided to share these stories with us and I desperately hope there is more where they came from. --Wendie
Author's Response: Now *I* feel humbled. This is the absolute best - having people pick out which lines they like best & why. I try to do that when reviewing & I didn't realize how great it feels to get that feedback after writing something yourself. I love love love how you picked up on these things. In all honesty you assigned more meaning than I thought my words conveyed, which I think is super fabulous because it shows that you're really into it. I've had ideas that been itching and a storage space full of plot bunnies (should have gotten them fixed before piling them all in one room) & I honestly didn't have the balls to put anything in writing until some great encouragement from months of crazy emailing back & forth with RoseSumner. So that with the support of everyone here for the past few days it's definitely amping me up to churn more out!rnrn- I'm either really cold from typing next to an open window at night or too excited by your review to stop shaking & type this out properly! I can't thank you enough for actually coming back & going through the lines you liked. Thank you times a bazillion :D
Date: 10/16/2010 8:50:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
BEAUTIFUL!!!!! How could you think you "didn't pull it off"??? This is lovely, deep, meaningful, odd for Logan but in a totally awesome way that you make obvious he's so very much enjoying!! 3 cheers, Sahara, you've done it again!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I wasn't sure it was Logan-y enough....if that makes sense. When touching is involved we usually get Marie's POV, but I wondered about Logan's take. Thanks again for the 3 cheers! I'll take it!
[Report This]Date: 10/16/2010 7:53:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
Not sure if you went where you wanted to go, but I love where you ended up!
Author's Response: Pleasing you guys -steadfast Rogan supporters - is definitely where I wanted to go so I'm happy with where I ended up with all of the kudos people like you have been leaving. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 10/16/2010 7:19:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Amazing! More more more! And for non-smut, this was a nice shade of Lime. Keep it coming
Author's Response: Haha, I don't think I've got the balls to dive in with Lemony Rogan goodness....yet. I quite like your classification of Lime, actually. I don't have anything in the pipeline at the moment, but hopefully I'll have good Logan dreams to inspire me. Thanks!
Date: 10/16/2010 3:41:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it. The look into Logan's mind at such a moment was really beautiful.
Author's Response: I love that you thought it was beautiful. It's hard to dig into Logan's feelings without losing his feral charm *sigh*, but I did want it to be this nice, quiet, soft little interlude for him....in between smexing of course. Thank you!!!
[Report This]Date: 10/16/2010 2:30:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
A bit more suggestive? Good God, girl, you might as well have screamed it from the mountaintops. No, wait, that's my job.
THIS IS ONE HELLUVA WRITER, FOLKS! SIT UP! PAY ATTENTION! And watch this space for her next triumph! --Wendie
P.S. I'm in a bit of a hurry right now. I'll come back and site specific passages later, since I know how great that makes you (and all of us writers) feel.
Author's Response: well, maybe "tame" is better than "suggestive"? It's not smut (although that's quite nice too). Thank you for the proclamation!
Date: 10/16/2010 2:07:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
Bounce, baby, bounce ;-)) You earned it. This is short, but beautiful. I love it, almost as much as I love them together. Almost.
Author's Response: I'm going through the roof after reading all of these lovely reviews! Thank you!