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Date: 01/10/2011 2:12:10 AM Title: The Shower
Guh. The smutty goodness has left me in yet another puddle
Author's Response: :-D Glad you liked it. Thanks for your review!
Date: 01/09/2011 10:21:23 PM Title: The Promise
Wow, that last sentence just about broke my heart. I could easily see Logan in Marie's arms trying to reassure himself that she won't leave him. I adore this story so far and I anticipate another chapter with glee.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much for reviewing!
Date: 01/09/2011 9:13:37 PM Title: The Promise
i love how you switched around the usual dynamic of logan promising marie something. it was a reallly poignant moment at the end there. loved the chapter, amazing writing as usual!!!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! This wasn't one of my favorites, but I'm determined to get this sucker done. :-D
Date: 01/08/2011 7:25:05 PM Title: The Shower
Yummy!
Author's Response: :-)
Date: 01/08/2011 6:44:30 PM Title: The Shower
Whoa! That should come with a warning label! That was HOT. More please!
Author's Response: :-) Glad you liked it. Not sure if there will be more smut in the last stretch here, but I'll keep it in mind.
Date: 01/08/2011 3:07:19 PM Title: The Shower
Yea! Thank you. You do sexy just right.
~Mia
Author's Response: :-)
Date: 01/08/2011 2:59:00 PM Title: The Prisoner
I really liked the first 5 chapters. You wrote them wonderfully, while reading I actually felt like I was right there- I give you kudos for the idea and the way you wrote it. Your Feral!logan was fantastic.
The thing is after the chapter "TheBeer" the whole fic made a big change. IMHO it stopped being an original attractive story to become a "common" Rogan fic. I find almost no link with the first part of the fic and well it just made me stop reading. Like you rushed Logans reaction towards Marie or the whole thing started to lose that sensitive thing of the previous chapters.
In a normal situation I wouldnt leave a review since I dont like giving negative reviews but I do it because I LOVED the first 5 chapters and you should know that.
Author's Response: Hi Annie; I really do appreciate your review. I know you're not the only one to feel this way about the story. In truth, the original idea I had for the story carried me through the first chapters, up to and including "The Beer." As I've said in responses to other reviewers (not that I expect you to read all that) at that point I really was in a bind. There was no legitimate reason I could think of for Logan to stick around with Marie, a virtual stranger, rather than just heading off back to his normal life once he regained coherence. I'm sure there's a perfect creative solution to that dilemma, but the closest I could come was to try to combine external threats that kept them on the run with the growth of his feelings for Marie, hoping that those two forces could render the connection they form plausible given the constricted time frame. I fully acknowledge that these later chapters have a different tone, and probably a more common one, especially the ones that are more action or PWP. But, there's no going back to Feral!Logan, so I'm resolving the story in the only way I know how. Maybe I should have just ended it at "The Beer," but I don't think that would have satisfied anyone. I am really glad you liked the first part, and am sorry you don't like the rest as much. I don't like it as much myself, but I'm still okay with it as a fun read, and I want to bring the story to as satisfying of an ending as I know how.
[Report This]Date: 01/08/2011 2:48:36 PM Title: The Shower
My inner "Rogan" is purring. Well done, more please.
Author's Response: :-)
Date: 01/06/2011 7:47:54 PM Title: The Showdown
I completely agree with Shuttlelauncher. Ignore the rare negative comments or take them with a huge mountain of salt. Personally, I've enjoyed every single chapter of this story. I'm hoping that when you finish this one, you'll have more stories that you'll share on this site. You're a talented writer and I give you ton of credit for putting your work out there for others to read and comment on. Hell, I have a hard enough time writing a review, I can't imagine trying to write a story! So thanks for sharing your talent with us. Oh, and for what it's worth, I set you up as a favorite author so I can get alerts when you post new stuff.
Author's Response: Aw, you guys are the best! I have no idea about more stories, but then again I didn't know I had ideas for the three I've done so far until I had them, so I guess we'll see! And the first one I never actually planned to post anywhere -- it was more "therapy" for me to write "Full Circle" as an epilogue to RoseSumner's brilliant "Overlap," and then when I emailed it to her stalker-style she led me here and encouraged me to post it. It's hard to find time to write, but I've really enjoyed it, so if I have another story idea I'll try to write it. In the meantime, I'll be happy just reading some of the amazing stuff that is being posted by other authors right now. It's so exciting to be on someone's favorite author list -- that just makes my day. And writing reviews may be hard for you, but they are appreciated more than you can ever know!
[Report This]Date: 01/06/2011 5:13:43 PM Title: The Showdown
I hate that there are only a few chapters left but I hope that means we can look forward to new and exciting stories from you! I've loved this story and I hope you don't let any of the unneeded criticism ( yeah, You know who you are! ) get into your head. Out of over 100 reviews for this story, the same few people have mostly negative
comments...I say, if you've got the guts to write something and put it out there for other people to enjoy, then I can't criticize you even if the story isn't to my taste ( which this one definitely is! )! Keep up the great work! End of rant ; )
Author's Response: Aw, that's really sweet of you to say. I'll admit, the negative comments do affect me *way* more than they should, but only for a short time and then I'm able to shake them off. And although I may not love the tone of them sometimes, when people who post a bad review tell you *what* they don't like it does give valuable insight into potential pitfalls for the story, and probably did on some level cause me to rethink a few chapters in a way that turned out better for the experience. Everyone on this site has been so incredibly receptive to my little baby steps into fanfic, I definitely don't expect all positive feedback. I actually just wrote the last scene -- a little bit of foof that might be surprising change of tone given the rest of the story, and I've written the first scene after The Showdown, so now I just have to get from point A to point D. I don't know about other stories, but I had no idea I had the first three in me either, so I guess we'll see. Thanks again for all your kind words...I'd weather 100 bad reviews to hear something like that!
Date: 01/04/2011 11:57:36 PM Title: The Showdown
So, I just reread the chapter to refresh my memory- fine, ok, I'll admit it, it also had somethin to do with that yummy smut- and I gotta say, it's something that doesn't deteriorate when you reread it. That was an awkward sentence, but I can't seem to bother to make it un-awkward, I still have thoughts of spooning... With Logan... And all that comes (hehe I'm so punny) before, fresh in my mind.
I love Marie saying she trusts him not to get her pregnant.
You ever think how lucky it is he has that healing factor? Besides the obvious reasons of not-dying and more sex, he would probably have at least a couple of STDs at this point, considering how many barflies he's done. Just a thought
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! So sweet of you to leave another (!) review. :-D Yeah, I was wondering if I should make it more clear that Logan is disease-free by mutation because I sure know condoms aren't just to prevent babies, but I figured in the world where superhealer is a common term that kind of thing is taken for granted. And he did buy condoms for the barflies, but I figured it was mostly because he knew it would save explanations he wouldn't be willing to make anyway. Yeah, I've spent way too much time thinking about the details of Logan's sex life. Tough job.
Date: 01/04/2011 1:15:14 PM Title: The Showdown
Although I'm no longer very interested in this story, the smut is...nice. ;-)
Author's Response: Um, thanks?
Date: 01/04/2011 2:17:03 AM Title: The Showdown
Hotness and tenderness at the same time. I like how Marie didn't let me get away with the leaving business, ha.
I really liked how you effectively mixed the two types of Logan/Wolverine in one smutty chapter as few writers do. It's realistic in that no one is just one type, especially Logan.
I love the line, "She met his eyes, startled, and saw the hint of shame they always held when he spoke of his more animal side." It really speaks to the true comic book character.
I also like that although it's from Marie's POV, you can tell what Logan's feeling by his emotive eyes and how he reacts to Marie. well done. continue by all means ;)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it!
Date: 01/03/2011 11:31:46 PM Title: The Showdown
ok,this is my new favoritest chapter! the bit where he says 'don't leave me'? le sigh!!! and him licking her shoulder bite, like a mating mark or something, so sweet and smexy! i love possessive logan! can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! I have developed a plan, and I think we're about three chapters from the end. Both sad and exciting (for me at least!).
[Report This]Date: 01/03/2011 11:08:28 PM Title: The Showdown
I have never been more turned on by a chapter of fan fiction in my life. God damn. I need a cold shower and an extra dose of hot dickings.
Author's Response: You just about made me snarf mint tea all over my monitor. Thanks for the compliment, babe!
Date: 01/03/2011 8:10:27 PM Title: The Showdown
You said that you were worried that you had Logan talking too much but I think it really works here. He's doing things that he wouldn't do because of Marie. Like telling her that he's trash and that she shouldn't tie herself to him, or telling her that he's a monster so she can deal with absorbing Sabertooth. I think the other telling things like contacting Xavier and letting him read his mind show how devoted he is to Marie and how he'd do anything for her - even if it goes against his instincts and takes him out of his comfort zone. So the fact that he opens up to her and puts himself in emotional/physical harm for her makes perfect sense to me. Doing all of this doesn't seem out character to me because of how he feels about her. It seems very real and believable to me.
Author's Response: I'm so glad that came across, that's exactly what I was going for! :-D
Date: 01/03/2011 6:14:21 PM Title: The Prisoner
Woke up?! Are you kidding? I would never go to sleep in the first place. I'd use that healing factor until I killed myself from it. Pshht. Morning after.
~Mia
Author's Response: Death by Logan Lovin'. I can dig it. ;-)
[Report This]Date: 01/03/2011 6:05:15 PM Title: The Showdown
I'm still high from this chapter...I will provide a proper review when I come back down to earth.
Author's Response: I think it was WitchBaby who said that I'm not a tease if I eventually deliver...with all the teasing I've been doing, I figured you guys deserved a big ol' special delivery of Roganliciousness. :-D So glad you liked it.
[Report This]Date: 01/03/2011 5:59:55 PM Title: The Showdown
Shit damn fuck hell YES!!! Also? Guh...and drool. And maybe a whimper or ten. It's your own fault you know. If you wanted coherent reviews you shouldn't have written such perfect schmexiness. I am guhhhhhhhh.
~Mia
P.S. The fact that this was dedicated to me made me feel all sorts of guilty for not having been on my computer for a few days and not reviewing the last chapter because I was intent on devouring this one. Thank you, btw. I'm still blushing. From all manner of things. Oh, and I nearly never rate a chapter as a 10. But guess what? Yeah.
Author's Response: Ha! I guess you liked it then? ;-) Um, don't feel guilty because you actually have a life and weren't hanging around the computer on New Year's Eve like lame old me. :-D Besides, as some of my wonderful reviewers today show, it's never too late to review old chapters (hint, hint). I don't have a solid plan for the next chapter, maybe I'll throw in a little morning-after sex just for you. I mean, we all know what we would do if we woke up with naked Logan, right? ;-)
[Report This]Date: 01/03/2011 3:44:39 PM Title: The Showdown
Aww I realize now that this is the last chapter so far! But I gotta say, what a great time to stop! Lol. So I will be anxiously awaiting the next chapter as I recover from the puddle I'm in.
How much longer do you plan to make this story?
Author's Response: Aw, glad you liked it -- and made it all the way to the end without getting bored! I would have been quite devastated if you had been like, "Okay, enough of this story already, bye!" halfway through! I'm embarrassed to admit that I didn't have the whole story planned out from the start. I first had the idea of it and that made me think it up pretty much through "The Beer." Then I had to throw some obstacles their way to keep them together, and that along with the idea of Feral!Marie smut carried me through to "The Stranger." Since then I've been making it up a few chapters at a time. I realize it's getting ridiculously long, though, so I think a few more chapters should tie it up. I do have some idea why the military and Magneto are after Logan, but how that's going to play out exactly will be news to me. :-)
Date: 01/03/2011 3:42:11 PM Title: The Showdown
So. Hi. Im in a puddle on the floor. Yeah. It was that yum. And I have to tell you, growly Logan=happy WiseWords
Author's Response: Ha, I always think I make Logan growl way too much, but what can I say? I like a growly man. ;-)
Date: 01/03/2011 3:15:01 PM Title: The Alley
Yay, Marie isn't letting him be an ass and walk out!
Author's Response: Of course not, what fun would that be? ;-)
Date: 01/03/2011 3:12:01 PM Title: The Face-off
Aw Scott just doesnt understand...
This chappie was soo well written!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! I feel like the non-Rogan chapters might be boring, so it's good to hear that people still find them interesting. And I was a little worried that it would seem that Logan was too easily convinced to ditch Marie, but Scott does get some good points in there, in his own way.
Date: 01/03/2011 3:05:35 PM Title: The Professor
Ohhh I cant wait for the fireworks!! Yeahhh !!!!
Author's Response: :-D Hope I didn't oversell that, they are actually kind of civil. More a lot of guilt-tripping than fireworks.
Date: 01/03/2011 3:00:23 PM Title: The Drive
Logie, you're so sweet! You think its all your fault, that she regrets it, but really she has the same struggle as you always did!!
Author's Response: "Logie" is cracking me up! I'm glad to hear your thoughts about this chapter. I wanted to try to keep some "issues" between them so things weren't just suddenly all happy couple between them, but I hate when characters have distance between them simply because they won't talk to each other to clear up a simple misunderstanding.