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[Report This]Date: 02/27/2011 9:22:29 PM Title: Chapter 15: Kith & Kin (Family)
I feel so spoiled! That chapter was so fun and lighthearted!
Author's Response: This whole chapter, meaning both parts of it seem to be shaping up to be lighthearted. I am glad you feel spoiled.
Date: 02/27/2011 4:12:33 PM Title: Chapter 15: Kith & Kin (Family)
Oh my gosh! I loved this whole thing, but this line:
"Pluck the log from your own eye before you preach about my splinter."
totally cracked me up! Love it!
Author's Response: Thank you! I am so glad you liked this chapter. I wanted to put a new spin on the religous parents without the nutty bar included.
Date: 02/26/2011 7:17:19 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Obligatory Morning After
That's so sweet! I love how nervous Logan is, lol!
Author's Response: Yeah, bones of Adamantium and nerves of steel, but he gets a little whingy when it comes to meeting the parents. I love him...I seem to hear his voice better than Marie's.Thank you for reviewing. 8o)
Date: 02/26/2011 4:15:37 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Obligatory Morning After
Can't wait for the family reunion. God, Charlie has to answer for soooo much.
Author's Response: Yes, he does...I am still looking for a way to get him living, locked in a bitty cage with Logan. Laboring diligently...Have a Wolvie and a jar of chocolate fudge sauce. 8oP
Date: 02/26/2011 3:12:45 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Obligatory Morning After
I love stories where Marie's family isn't outright heinous. The thought of her still having a connection with her mother - even if it was strained by the puppetmaster - gives me warm fuzzies. Especially when it means she gets to introduce Logan ... take your time over that chappy because the possibilities are all kinds of delicious!
Author's Response: I sat down and asked myself as a mother what would my reaction be to my child if they were like Rogue and in no instance did I say to myself that I would shun or become hate full. Sorrowful, definately, but only in as much as my daughter would be denied a life she desired. Thanks this is the most exciting chapter so far to write. Here, I'm feelin' generous, have a hot and sweaty Wolverine. ;o)
Date: 02/26/2011 1:01:35 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Obligatory Morning After
“Enjoyin’ the view, Darlin’?”
Umm... how could she not? lol I know if I were in her place, I sure would. ;)
Love the story and will wait as patiently as I can for another chapter. ;)
Author's Response: Working on it...I am excited about this next chapter, but it is going to be longer than the rest I think. So, it may be Monday before it posts. Thanks and just for you a towel-clad Wolvie...Couldn't decide between the action figure or the blow-up doll so pick one.
[Report This]Date: 02/26/2011 10:39:36 AM Title: Chapter 13: Love Starved Thing
It was perfect! Not too far but They needed some form of physical connection too...great job!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! Your praise is gratefully received. 8o)
Date: 02/26/2011 12:17:15 AM Title: Chapter 13: Love Starved Thing
My goodness, what a story! I can't wait to see what happens next. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! That means a lot coming from you.
Date: 02/25/2011 10:06:54 PM Title: Chapter 13: Love Starved Thing
I'll understand if my "hell no!" doesn't hold much water, given my proclivities towards outright smut. But that said, I felt the sex scenes were a natural development in the story, and they weren't forced or false in any way. Nice work! (And I'm enjoying the wider story arc, too!)
Author's Response: Thank you very much...Your "hell no" is gratefully received and holds at least three gallons. I am glad that it didn't seem out of place...My muse and I were going back and forth on it and damned if ol' Wolvie!Muse didn't win out.
[Report This]Date: 02/20/2011 8:54:51 AM Title: Chapter 12: Break the Rules, Darlin'!
that was just delicious...
Author's Response: Thank you! I live to serve.
Date: 02/19/2011 10:17:52 PM Title: Chapter 12: Break the Rules, Darlin'!
awwww
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: 02/19/2011 6:52:47 PM Title: Chapter 12: Break the Rules, Darlin'!
A kiss!!! How romantic!! In that special Logan/Rogue way, of course. Let's find out how to bring professor back to life, so that they can kill him...multiple times.
Author's Response: I promise this time she won't hit him and call him names. I am searching my addledbrain to find a way to bring him back that hasn't been overdone. I think solving the world's problems may be a safer bet though.
Date: 02/14/2011 4:34:46 PM Title: Chapter 9: Mama's Story
With every new chapter I find a new depth in my dislike of Charles Xavier. What a great thing to introduce Mama!!
Author's Response: Thank you! At first Mama was just an extra that really just gave us a bonding moment, but when I sat down with her she had other ideas.
Date: 02/14/2011 12:03:38 AM Title: Chapter 9: Mama's Story
“This ain’t your usual kind of place. They have cloth table cloths and nobody’s screamin’ fer blood.”
*snicker* She's got him there. Fun chapter; thanks.
even Logan’s stomach gave a plaintiff rumble
(Psst... a plaintiff is the person who sues someone else in a civil court case. I think you wanted to say plaintive, which means pathetic or sad.) ;)
Author's Response: Holy cow! I can't believe I did that; I apologize for my mixed up words. I wish I could blame not speaking English as my first language, but really the truth is I can't spell. I have a horrid southern accent that screws with sounding words out and believe it or not that was the only thing spell check came up with. I will now go beat my head on the dictionary. I'm glad you like the story.
Date: 02/12/2011 9:59:28 PM Title: Chapter 8: Retribution
oooo burn! very nice
Author's Response: Thank you...Glad you liked it.
Date: 02/12/2011 3:47:16 PM Title: Chapter 8: Retribution
I'm enjoying the progression of this story, and your characterizations are pretty spot-on. But I wish you hadn't written Marie outing Bobby; that's just not cool, and it left a bad taste in my mouth.
Author's Response: Sorry, that upset you, the good news is that by-gones are by-gones soon. After all they will have to work as a team...Thanks for the review I really want to do well with the characters.
Date: 02/12/2011 3:43:20 PM Title: Chapter 8: Retribution
Ah, Professor...Too bed you are dead already. And "cat piss"? Touch of genius. Poor Bobby...Poor, poor Bobby (snickers). And enter Gambit!!!! My second favorite male X men!!! Woohoooooo!!!!!
Author's Response: Yeah, I have to admit I had to go to the bad place to get that section done. I had to end things with snow-boy and kitty-litter but I wanted to be able to do it in such a way that said you can't hurt me, but make it clear she was hurt and she wanted a pound of flesh to make it right. I am glad you are looking forward to Gambit...I almost asked for a vote of whether to add him or not, but said screw it I want Remy!
Date: 02/12/2011 10:40:07 AM Title: Chapter 7: Setting Logan Straight
As I keep repeating, Hank is a genius. I'm sooooo glad they cleared the air when it comes to Jean issue. And if they are still silently wandering what their next move should be, I have few ideas...
Author's Response: Yes, Hank is a genius and I love the way he just seems to roll his eyes at Logan when the Wolvster gets growly. Right now things are moving to fast in the plot for voicing the ideas you suggest, but believe me when I say there is coming a day when things will shift for the pair. I can't wait...Thank you for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 02/10/2011 4:15:34 PM Title: Chapter 6: The Storm Before the Calm
Wow. I like this story. I really wasn't so sure about reading it, but I took a chance and I think you really made a great plot by using that particular AU scenario. And I love how you write Hank! But then again, I always love Beast -- I was so happy when they made him a character in X3 XD
-- Wolf
Author's Response: Thank you for giving my humble little fic a chance...I think that is some of the best praise I could have recieved; that you were leary of the fic, but enjoy it anyway. So, thank you again, for giving me a chance.rn
Date: 02/10/2011 2:25:36 PM Title: Chapter 6: The Storm Before the Calm
“It was a medical procedure, furball!” Logan is my hero. Period. As for the prune/prude accident, English is not my first language. Sorry. And now, on with Logan protecting Rogue from evil army, doctors, ex-boyfriends, former bff's, wasps, mosquitoes, spiders, elves with fiery spirits...um...sorry...different obsession.
Author's Response: I hope you were not offended when I poked fun...Prude/prune...As a typo it was really very cute and I couldn't resist. Yeah, and the next bit is going to be a little longer in coming as I had to work late this evening, but tomorrow is Friday (doin'-da-happy-dance) which means I'll be able to write more.
[Report This]Date: 02/10/2011 6:41:26 AM Title: Chapter 6: The Storm Before the Calm
this is so good
Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate that you took the time to let me know.
Date: 02/09/2011 11:55:18 PM Title: Chapter 6: The Storm Before the Calm
“That was thoroughly unnecessary, Logan. All you had to do was say please.”< best line in the entire fic. I can't wait til you update agian!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I live for reviews...Hank was amused by Logan's aggression; poor Wolverine couldn't scare him.
Date: 02/09/2011 12:17:46 PM Title: Chapter 5: A Kiss Worth A Thousand Words
“Stupid” *Thwack*
“Brainless” *Thwack*
“Idiotic” *Thwack*
“Addlebrained” *Thwack*
“Half-Witted” *Thwack*
"Slow-thinking Jerk" *Thwack*
Now kiss her again and make up for the time lost!!! And dig up what's left of Professor and burn it while dancing madly around the fire clad only in...Um..Sorry (blushes in shame). Would you believe I'm actually a prune?
Author's Response: A prune really; sun-dried? Because that has to be the best kind of prune there is, but if you are tryin' to say you're a prude...I DON'T BEL-...Hmm...Yeah, I believe it. I'm a prude everywhere but my head and my writing. I guess my anti-prude wakes up and lives a whole sinfully lusty life through fan fiction. *Wanders into the dark corner of her mind to stare at 'the vein' alla Australia* yeap, my mind is a ceasepool, but I blush like a nun in reality. Sorry, the kiss didn't make your toes curl, but believe me...There is time for that and so much more.
Date: 02/09/2011 3:25:11 AM Title: Chapter 5: A Kiss Worth A Thousand Words
too short!!! write more!!! *whines like sad puppy*
Author's Response: Awe...Don't whine. I have more where that came from...It would amaze the world how many unwritten scenes spool through my addled brain on a daily basis. It is a good thing it isn't illegal to plot whilst driving. I'd be screwed and the po-po would be raking in the big bucks. Thanks for letting me know you like the fic...
Date: 02/08/2011 7:06:04 AM Title: Chapter 4: Mutations For Dumbies
Oh Gosh!!!! He KISSED her!!! oh my...What a perfect development in soooo many ways. Firstly, they can build from there, and secondly...Take that Ice Hole and Cats Moral!!! And Hank is great. How many hours did you spend learning about genetics???
Author's Response: Thank you for the review and I am glad you liked it.rnThe kiss...I can't wait to post where that leads and you know I can't wait to build on it. Ice Hole-I love it! Damn I wish I'd thought of that one...I thought I was clever with Ice Prick. ;o) Genetics...Well...Ya see, I uhh...Hmm...