well, this could use some serious polishing; nevertheless, it's a fascinating idea and I enjoyed reading it. You could take this concept really far, and it would be a fun romp.

Author's Response: I know it needs work and I am looking for a beta, but having been gone for so long I don't know how to go about asking. The stories tend to spew out of my head without regard to grammar or spelling. However, believe me when I say this is positively shiny compared to the story I previously posted as Kia Mira, but I am open for any help offered. Thank you for taking the time to review.