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[Report This]Date: 09/18/2011 7:51:29 PM Title: Chapter 17
Oh man, they are so perfect for each other. Logan is totally right about that. And I just LOVE that he's the only one who knows her real name. ::melts:: This fic is fantastic. Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. I'm glad you liked the chapter, delayed though it was =). They are totally perfect for each other, because this is my damn fic and I wouldn't write them any other way, hee. More soon!
[Report This]Date: 09/18/2011 7:47:41 PM Title: Chapter 17
Oh, my. What a payoff. (So to speak.) This is both sexy and tender. It's a fitting first time for the two of them as well as being incredibly hot. *fans self* I also love the welcome home gifts; what a great way to show how beloved Rogue is.
Author's Response: Yayyyeee. I'm so glad you liked. The more intimate scenes are always the hardest to write, simply because I never have a clue whether it's 'hot' or 'hokey'. Funny, I didn't consider this their first time, I guess since I've already written their first-all-the-way-time and first-all-the-way-feral-time scenes. But it really is a big step forward in their relationship. Glad you felt the payoff was worth it!
Date: 09/18/2011 4:53:41 PM Title: Chapter 17
Ok that was a sexy chapter! I loved it! And OMG I was laughing to my self when Marie was ranting at the beginning. Love that she decided to give them a chance. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm glad you enjoyed =). Yes, Marie (or should I say Rogue) definitely knows how to get her rant on and cuss like a sailor.
Date: 09/07/2011 10:45:00 PM Title: Chapter 16
So digging this story! I'm curious to see how things shake out now that they're back at the mansion.
“We're officially home, Logan. No more of this alpha male stuff. Clean slate, remember?" Right, keep telling yourself that, LOL!
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you enjoy the arc of the story from here. The pace should pick up, and there will definitely be some interesting moments as they struggle with their feral sides =D.
[Report This]Date: 09/06/2011 12:41:01 AM Title: Chapter 16
OMG, I'm just as angry as Rogue!!! ...but, dammit, I can kinda see where Scott's coming from. Grr... I hate when I understand both sides! It makes me feel so conflicted. sigh.
And I pretty much melted at this:
“Oh, baby. Why? Look, I know I maybe said the wrong things when you were talkin’ about how I’d leave you or resent you or whatever, but I just need ya to know that ain’t true. I won’t do those things. I shoulda told you that before. But you put those ideas in my head, and I started worryin’ maybe they were true—but after last night, I—I know they’re not. You gotta know that too. Don’cha feel it? How right this is, you and me? I told you I wouldn’t hurt you. So—so just trust that. Trust me.”
Loved this chapter and I'm looking forward to the next. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I do think Scott has some valid points. But hey, he can't expect Rogue to be happy about having her competence questioned. I hope you enjoy the next chapter. It's almost finished. Silly classes and work and things keep cutting into my computer time. Hmph.
Date: 09/05/2011 11:46:11 PM Title: Chapter 16
I love where you have taken this, you moved it from a story that could have been just a quick smut fic to something that has depth and breath. They are goiong to learn different things about themselves, their feral natures, and what they can and cannot control, wonderful.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you like the direction it's going. I was worried people would be upset at how slowly things are developing, but hopefully it will be worth the wait. Must confess, I've already written several of the smutty scenes. Now it's just a matter of getting the characters to that point ;).
[Report This]Date: 09/05/2011 7:16:52 PM Title: Chapter 16
Dude. Scott. You can really be a patronizing dick.
Great plot developments here, and I love how Marie and Logan are learning to relate to each other. More please! :)
Author's Response: Heh. Yeah, Scott, you dick. That's exactly what Rogue thinks, too. Did you peek ahead to the next chapter or something? ;). I'm glad the plot is developing quickly enough for you. I kinda feel like the pacing on this sucks. But gah, every scene just somehow expands when I type it out, and before I know it, 4000 words are gone. I really gotta learn to be more concise. Oh well, hopefully people are enjoying the leisurely ride.
[Report This]Date: 09/05/2011 8:49:51 AM Title: Chapter 16
I feel like this story is releasing pheromones in the air, leaving me dazzed.
Author's Response: Ha, I'm glad you like the story! Thanks for reviewing :)
[Report This]Date: 09/04/2011 10:51:04 PM Title: Chapter 16
I just love the way you write their interactions. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for the read and the review :). I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
Date: 09/04/2011 10:34:16 PM Title: Chapter 16
Loved the new chapter. I'm eagerly waiting more. I really loved the interaction between Rogue and Logan on the drive to the mansion. I'm very curious to how alpha Logan and head strong RogueMarie are going to find a balance between them to be able to work as a couple. I hope to read more soon. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response: Thanks. I had such a complicated vision for this story that I wasn't entirely sure I could pull it all together 0_o;; but it seems like things are moving in the right direction. I'm glad you've enjoyed reading so far, and hope you enjoy the rest of the story!
Date: 09/04/2011 9:35:45 PM Title: Chapter 16
ooooooo. she returns. Can't wait for more to come!
Author's Response: Me neither! Wish damn responsibilities would quit interfering with my writing addiction, heh ;).
[Report This]Date: 08/26/2011 11:39:35 AM Title: Chapter 15
“Logan was right,” she muttered sleepily.
“Always,” he grumbled in her ear. Oh. My. God. There went my coffee, all over the keyboard and screen. Freakin' AWESOME!
She felt another nip at her neck. “Shut up. Sleep w’me.”
Well then. Einstein quality delivery. You are a master. Couldn't help but feel a little sorry for Logan with the waste of a gloriously *ahem* well, YOU KNOW...
He ripped it off, along with the next two sheets that carried impressions, folded them neatly and stuck them in his leather jacket’s inner pocket. You clever girl. Nice way of showing his ingrained stealthiness!
And if ever I was hooked on this story before, it has multiplied immeasurably with this latest chapter. To heck with school woman, focus on Feral only (although any more side stories would be more than appreciated!)
I hope you've got the next chapter ready for posting - and yes, yes - I am irrationally expecting another one despite devouring these past three like a glutton! :) Knowing what to look forward to is only whetting my appetite!
Author's Response: Hee. Sorry for wreckin' your comp, dear! I'm glad Logan's brusque 'Shut up' didn't come across as too harsh. He's a grumpy bear ;). So glad you enjoyed the chapter. I do hope to get the next one finished quickly! Oh, btw, didn't know you were from Canada. As much as you worry about your southern-isms, I now totally worry about my northern-isms. If there's anything blatantly un-Canadian in Logan's dialogue, feel free to point it out to me. Because I wouldn't have a clue, lol.
[Report This]Date: 08/26/2011 11:24:59 AM Title: Chapter 14
“I need ya to stay calm, baby, ‘cause I need to stay calm. Got it?” Right out of the gate with that one. Perfect. And then there's this:
One who stole his heart without a single word—yet who was now growing farther from him with every second of silence. Oh boy. You are making my heart break for him now...
Just a little side note, up here in Canada, we don't say "soda", we say "pop" (usually, not always) so interesting to learn about Marie's reaction to the phrase "do you want a pop?" Good to know to ask for soda when down south :). Now on the rest of my review:
It’s a double. And I’m thinkin’ I’m gonna get a decent night’s sleep, so long as ya don’t go crawlin’ into bed with me again.” Logan, you ASSHOLE! Love it...
“I’d prefer some quality literary journals. But anything’s better than those trashy beach reads she keeps on her nightstand. I’m an editor, for God’s sake. Burn them. Please.” Halelujah. :)
Marie stiffened when he reached beneath her collar, but he just pulled the chain from under her shirt. His eyes never left hers as he brought the metal tags to his lips and kissed them before letting them drop. Oh my. Jerk Logan and Sweet Logan. And Marie gets to have both?! Lucky girl - and lucky us - for yet another, well written chapter. I am savouring every word. :)
Author's Response: See, that's so funny to me 'cause we say soda, or coke for any soft drink. (As in 'I'll have a coke.' 'What kind?' 'Dr. Pepper.') The words 'You want a pop?' are something many a Southern child would cringe at, usually a prelude to a smack on the ass, arm, leg, or any other available body part, usually because said child is acting up in the grocery store or something. I'm not sure how the idea arose to use it as a plot device, but eh, I think it turned out kinda cool and highlights Marie's Mississippi roots. Also her general hang-ups about children, which should become more apparent over the course of the story.
Yes. I loved that asshole!Logan moment too. He's so smooth sometimes, and puts his foot right in his mouth at others.
[Report This]Date: 08/26/2011 11:02:11 AM Title: Chapter 13
Well, well, well Miss atmd. You have been quite the busy bee since I've been gone! What is it with all the delicious updates and brilliantly funny mini story, hmm? You do of course realize that I expect this nonstop marination of yummy Roganness to be sustained, right? :) Now, I have saved this story for last in my catching up and woohoo, you do not disappoint. Lots of good stuff here, plenty previously mentioned in earlier reviews, but of course, this being you, there is many, MANY snippets to point out:
The guy smiled—thankfully without baring his teeth I love this. Feral is right and Logan is - to me - the sexiest when he is like this.
And she wouldn’t have cared one bit, as long as he followed her down. K. Now I melt at this. Holding her up with his body because her knees gave out on her? *swoon*
“Tip him, you idiot.” Ha! Thank you for this. There's our Rogue/Marie!
Marie followed at his heels, the instinct so deeply rooted that no amount of effort could bring her to walk by his side without permission. None seemed forthcoming. Which was infuriating, and more than a little embarrassing.
But she could look on the bright side, lemonade from lemons and all that. So she dropped her eyes to his very fine denim-clad ass and at least enjoyed the view as they made their way across the leaf-littered ground towards the Jeep. Eep. Funny and so freakin' hot...
But the last line was perfect, the visual (and audio) set so effortlessby by you:
The only sound for miles was the hum of the engine and the zip of tires on asphalt.
Masterful. On to the next!
Author's Response: Agh! I fear the updates may slip to once weekly as the course load begins to consume me. But rest assured, I'm not one to leave a story unfinished, and my lab reports will suffer before my fiction does ;). It was very cool to log on and see your reviews, which are always thoughtful and prolific and make me want to write. more. like. now. It's cool to see the chapter from the reader's perspective, see what lines stood out and made an impression. Hopefully will lead to improved chapters in the future =D. Good to see you back, btw, hope vacay was fun.
Date: 08/25/2011 2:44:47 PM Title: Chapter 15
Beautiful chapter. The feelings and imagery that I got from it were super intense. You, my dear, are talented as hell. And, though I always want more of this story, the shorter chapter didn't feel awkward at all, like they sometimes can. It followed a great arc and was a good, and necessary, step back from plot and into contemplation/character development. It worked very well!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad the chapter came off well. And 'talented as hell' is like, the coolest compliment I've ever gotten as a writer. Hope you enjoy the rest of the story, as I am very much enjoying both of yours :)
Date: 08/25/2011 12:42:44 AM Title: Chapter 15
The sleepy Logan is just toooo cute! If only he realized the depth of Marie's nightmares, the last absorption just one more horror. I have loved their time together. I am not sure I want them to get to the others.
Author's Response: Isn't sleepy Logan adorably sexy? I know a lot of people think he's a light sleeper and spends every night tossing and turning with nightmares, but I kind of think he has the capacity to hunker down like a grumpy bear if he feels comfortable enough ;). And I don't think anyone could pry his mate away if he fell asleep with her in his arms. And if it's any consolation, I wasn't sure I wanted them to get to the others either, LOL.
[Report This]Date: 08/24/2011 10:43:06 PM Title: Chapter 15
Gosh, I love this story so much. Truly, I do. It's so in-depth (both in characterization and plot) and well-written. I really can't wait to read the next installment!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story and that you take the time to leave such kind reviews. I've tried to plan out the plot and character devel. as carefully as I can, but I'm sure there are minor loopholes and moments when things have gone off track, hehe. But I will do my best to keep the updates coming regularly :).
[Report This]Date: 08/24/2011 1:19:32 PM Title: Chapter 15
Sweet chapter. I have a feeling Marie's going to get her hands on that note and is not going to be happy with the last line. :p
Author's Response: Hehe. I think there are about a hundred ways that a confused woman with repressed memories and serious trust issues could misinterpret Logan's little note. Fun!
Date: 08/24/2011 12:22:44 PM Title: Chapter 15
Very nice lead in chapter. I'm glad to see that Logan restrained himself from his roaming hands. I know that Logan must be dying to find out what Carol knows, or like you said a part of him is. Love the new chapter.
Author's Response: Glad you liked! Yeah, poor guy. He is a man, after all, but that's some pretty admirable self-restraint :). And the Logan/Carol drama is gonna get all kinds of complicated. Hee.
Date: 08/22/2011 6:45:14 AM Title: Chapter 14
Mind-boggingly delicious; I so love this exploration of the 'feral side'.
Thank you very much for sharing it with us!
I love the explo
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! "Mind-boggingly delicious" Heh. That's possibly the coolest compliment my writing has ever gotten. I'm glad you're liking the story.
Date: 08/22/2011 3:15:36 AM Title: Chapter 14
Hana... poor Carol. Stuck with all those romance novels, not to mention Erik.
Great, as always. I loved their interaction with Neil and Becca though it pains me to know that he thinks like that about mutants and that Marie's actions added to his feelings. And poor Marie. Trying to stand on her own and not knowing when to lean on someone else.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Yeah, Carol's had some shit luck. But things will get better for her in the end. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. Especially since I am so enjoying yours :)
[Report This]Date: 08/21/2011 7:40:53 PM Title: Chapter 14
"I won't hurt you, Marie," he said solemnly.
::melts::
Awwwww, they're sooooo adorable. And- EEK!!! Carol knows about his past?!? Can't wait for the next chapter of this great story!
Author's Response: Yeah, they are pretty adorable. I've messed around quite a bit with the timelines concerning Logan and Carol's history, and also Rogue's age relative to the other X-men--but then again, so has Marvel. Hopefully it'll all work out into an interesting subplot :). Thanks for reading!
Date: 08/21/2011 7:40:48 PM Title: Chapter 14
Ooh, love the new update. Very compelling. Can't wait for the next one. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I won't keep ya waiting long.
[Report This]Date: 08/21/2011 5:31:49 PM Title: Chapter 14
Great chapter. Marie and Logan are in for a heck of a ride!
Author's Response: Thanks! They sure are. I just hope I can pull it all together. This story's so twisty turny, I tend to lose track of where the characters are, and how they're developing along with the plot, especially since I'm working on a zillion other things right now. Oh well, hopefully it comes together okay :). Thanks for reading
Date: 08/14/2011 10:51:57 PM Title: Chapter 13
Ooh, how fast this update was!
A favorite line:
But then again, the little fucker had—possibly—stared at Marie. That was enough to warrant some hand-crushing, right?
hehe. It's so interesting- they know each other so well in a way and yet are like strangers. I'm looking forward to seeing how they deal with the mansion. :)
Author's Response: Thanks, me too. Every time I pull these brief little scenes from my notebook and transfer them to the computer, they just expand like crazy. The 'welcome to the mansion' scene was only a couple paragraphs in the rough draft, but I have a feeling it's gonna turn into a whole chapter, heh. Hopefully no one minds :).