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[Report This]Date: 12/07/2011 10:15:12 PM Title: The Confession
More Please! You have to find Jubes and Kitty in time!
Author's Response: Working on it! :-D
Date: 12/07/2011 9:41:52 PM Title: The Confession
i like where this is going... gotta say i'm enjoying how different this is and your characterization of both rogue and wolvie... i always enjoy it when rogue's written strong and put together like this, rather than as a basket-case who needs to be rescued. i think the set-up and the story is nicely "real world," too and look forward to reading the rest. hobbits away, hey!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking it! Yeah, I had to go back over this chapter to toughen up Marie a little. :-D She keeps wanting to get weepy on me, but I'm holding the line. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Date: 12/07/2011 9:40:42 PM Title: The Confession
Man, I am so in love with this fic! Poor Marie. :( Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Aw, I'm so glad you're liking it! Thanks for the review!
Date: 12/07/2011 8:19:29 PM Title: The Confession
Yay! I decide to take a break and log on in time for your update. Glad to see you're pushing through!
Yup, he's the big, bad Wolverine, but he has such a caring and honorable side that rarely is shown. I mean, going through all this gritty stuff, he's not the one to deal with emotional distress, but he and Marie already have an inexplicable connection.
I know Marie is gonna have to deal with some serious issues when she lets those scary motherfuckers out. I'm hoping Logan will keep her anchored and Jubes & Kitty will be found.
Thanks,
-Pepper
Author's Response: Yeah, poor Marie, last thing you want to do after being traumatized by two psychos is to experience it from their perspective, but she's a touch chick, and she knows she has to. Thanks for the review!
Date: 12/07/2011 1:13:06 PM Title: The Merchandise
No! The edgy and frightened part is wonderful. Don't you dare go and have everyone cuddle it out! The frightened part is like a rollercoaster. You go because you enjoy not being able to anticipate where the drops and turns are or how it'll come out in the end. I like your writing BECAUSE it's edgy.
~Mia
Author's Response: :-D Okay, I'll keep you on the rollercoaster then. Thanks again for your reviews!
Date: 12/07/2011 1:12:46 PM Title: The Merchandise
No! The edgy and frightened part is wonderful. Don't you dare go and have everyone cuddle it out! The frightened part is like a rollercoaster. You go because you enjoy not being able to anticipate where the drops and turns are or how it'll come out in the end. I like your writing BECAUSE it's edgy.
~Mia
Date: 12/07/2011 1:11:01 PM Title: The Merchandise
No! The edgy and frightened part is wonderful. Don't you dare go and have everyone cuddle it out! The frightened part is like a rollercoaster. You go because you enjoy not being able to anticipate where the drops and turns are or how it'll come out in the end. I like your writing BECAUSE it's edgy.
~Mia
Date: 12/06/2011 1:09:51 PM Title: The Wave
This is absolutely make my week special phenomenal sorts of wonderbars. I love your writing. It makes me edgy and happy and frightened.
~Mia
Author's Response: Hey, Mia! I was wondering where you had gone to! Thanks so much for your review...glad you liked it! Sorry about the edgy and frightened part, I'll try to concentrate on the happy.
Date: 12/05/2011 12:21:20 PM Title: The Key
I don't remember if I have reviewed this or not but regardless it is good enough to review again. This chapter is really good. I especially like all of the touches of detail. I am also really enjoying the fact that although Marie must be really frightened, she is willing to do what needs to be done. I am really interested to see what their conversation entails.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! So glad you liked the chapter. I am glad to hear your description of Marie, that's exactly what I'm going for...she's not unfeeling, but she has learned to tough it out.
[Report This]Date: 12/04/2011 1:02:15 PM Title: The Key
I'm glad you didn't. I devour 5 chapters to find that you have writer's block??? Seriously???? You have to get past it. I need details woman!
Love how they are covered with gore, and still push through. I mean blood can be scary, even if you are mutant who heals.
Most of all, I'm proud of Marie. She may be shaky, but she's not gonna break. Go girl!
Now, you must write the rest!
Thanks,
-Pepper
Author's Response: Ha, thanks so much for the encouragement! Don't worry, I'm still slogging away, even though it's not coming easily. I love your assessment of Marie, that's exactly what I'm going for. :-D
Date: 12/04/2011 12:56:59 PM Title: The Wave
Go Marie!
As for Logan...NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
You wouldn't do that...you couldn't.....you can't!
Author's Response: Aw, of course I wouldn't do that. ;-) I forgot that my Rogan guarantee is not on this website. I usually guarantee 1. My stories will have angst.rnrn2. My stories will have smut (and Rogue will always be a consenting adult).rnrn3. My stories will have a minimum of spelling and grammar errors.rnrn4. There will always be a happy ending.rnrn5. I will never leave a story unfinished.rnrnI'm not sure how I'll get to the smut on this one (although I'm working on it) but all my other guarantees still hold!
[Report This]Date: 12/04/2011 12:55:02 PM Title: The Snag
Who the hell blew Logan's cover?
I literally cringed in pain from your gory, graphic description. My eye is twitching now.
Author's Response: Good question! Which I knew the answer. Sorry about the eye thing...thanks so much for reviewing!
Date: 12/04/2011 12:53:06 PM Title: The Questions
Jubes & Kitty? No! How?
Author's Response: Yup! :-D
Date: 12/04/2011 12:50:58 PM Title: The Merchandise
Yay! Finally am getting around to reading fics again!
Love the premise and as for Marco and his bait shop...he's fucking evil!!!
Author's Response: Hooray! Welcome back! Glad you like the premise. I realize it could be a little squicky. Thanks so much for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 12/04/2011 1:42:47 AM Title: The Key
another awesome chapter, as usual! can't wait to see how logan's going to handle himself around her now he knows she's legal...hehe.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I think Logan has kind of known from the time he saw her in person that she's actually an adult, so...why is he trying so hard to convince himself that she is off limits? ;-)
Date: 12/04/2011 12:00:44 AM Title: The Key
YAY for kick-ass, fuckin' genius Marie!! Ooh, yeah. This is good. :D
And ::melts:: I just love a Logan who immediately feels drawn to Marie. So wonderful. And YAY for her being 22! So many good things happened in this chapter (not the least of which was the return of the eyeball because, to be honest, that was really squicking me out. ew). I LOVE this story. I think it actually might be turning out to be one of my very favorites. Stupid next chapters, causing trouble. Just Wolvie-claw them into submission. >:| lol, of course I'll attempt to wait patiently for them (the wait is definitely worth it). Doc O no kaku no wa honto ni sugoi yo!! ;P [Doc O's writing is truly great!!]
Author's Response: Aw...glad you liked it! And thanks so much for the Japanese compliment! Can I consult you if I have Logan trying to speak any Japanese in future? I will try to Wolvie-claw subsequent chapters. Or more likely just slog through them whether they're coming easily or not. ;_)
Date: 12/03/2011 6:50:07 PM Title: The Key
Great chapter! Loved how resourceful Mare is! Hope Marie saved that collar. It would make things easier for her with her skin. can't wait to see where you go next with it.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Yes, the collar will definitely play a large role in the story. ;-)
Date: 12/03/2011 5:01:40 PM Title: The Key
Wonder how long Logan will keep his baser instincts in check now that he knows she's all grown up? Especially since I suspect that her 'enticing' and 'spicy' scent is a clue to the true nature of their bond, though neither of them has realized it yet. I hope your muse is more forthcoming than mine has been and forks over the necessary plot details sooner rather than later.
A credit card, huh? Guess you really do learn something new every day... --Wendie
Author's Response: Yeah, I think Logan has actually known she was "grown" from the time he saw her in person, but is trying to talk himself out of it. Hopefully for the smut prediction, he won't keep things in check for long. Yeah, I heard that credit card thing quite a while ago, but I can't say I ever tried it. Apparently duct tape or plastic wrap would work better, but in a pinch...reach for the AmEx.
[Report This]Date: 12/03/2011 2:26:09 PM Title: The Key
Now I'm really curious about that text message. Good chapter. I hope the writer's block clears up soon.
Author's Response: I hope I can make that plot point worthy of all the intrigue! Thanks for the review!
Date: 12/03/2011 12:39:34 PM Title: The Key
Awwww, that ending! I love this fic!! Fantastic job.
Author's Response: Hope you know that's just the ending to the chapter, not the whole story, right? Thanks so much for your review! So glad you liked it.
Date: 12/03/2011 11:57:05 AM Title: The Key
Yaaaaay! I'm not naive enough to believe everything's gonna be peachy for long, but I'm happy things got better for them. :)
Author's Response: Oh, of course I'm not going to give these two a moment's peace, right? But yes, they're both breathing and free, so that's something. Every little bit counts. ;-)
[Report This]Date: 12/03/2011 11:15:46 AM Title: The Key
Writer's block sucks. I'm struggling with it now. It's a good chapter, push on!
Author's Response: Aw, sorry to be sharing misery with you. Thanks for the encouragement!
Date: 12/02/2011 2:11:42 PM Title: The Merchandise
Forgive me for being selfish, but I'm glad that you didn't wait a few months to write another story!
I really like this premise. I can't wait to see how this one plays out.
Author's Response: Not selfish -- encouraging! Thanks so much for your review. Glad you like the premise.
Date: 12/01/2011 11:37:34 PM Title: The Merchandise
Yes, it does. Though back in the bad old days when not only were young women bought and sold, but nobody even thought it was wrong, virgins went for a higher price... Just a thought. :-/
Author's Response: Yeah, that's actually the "out" they use in "Taken" -- (spoiler alert) -- The sexually experienced friend gets sold to a hardcore brothel, but the virgin daughter of the protagonist gets earmarked for some Arab potentate. I'm probably just going to go with the idea that mutants are being taken for their powers, whereas you could avoid all the complications and expense and grab any runaway off the street for sex trafficking.
Date: 12/01/2011 2:05:11 AM Title: The Wave
You have the most amazing knack for sending Logan in to save Marie and then getting him into so much trouble that she ends up having to save him. I just love when that happens. I also loved 'that small act of idiotic bravery', another trait your Marie seems to possess in abundance, and one that Logan always finds endearing. Smart guy. I sure hope those next chapters stop struggling and let you get them finished soon... --Wendie
Author's Response: Ha, they seem to be stuck in some sort of co-dependent cycle of saving each other. I swear, every story I have starts out with one saving the other, or both saving each other, or whatever. It seems to be my single plot device. Yes, I think it's Logan's tendency to think anyone being brave trying to save him is being idiotic, but hopefully he will find that endearing in the long run. Thanks for the review! The next chapters are not flying off my fingers, but they are progressing, so that's something.