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Date: 05/18/2012 12:11:53 PM Title: The Visitor
You are early! Yay!! I really love the banter between the two of them if the first part of the chapter. The second half was interesting because you made it a great balence in Logan keeping his temper and Marie realizing she will tell him anything even if he scares her. Victor is soooooo dead. :)
Author's Response: :-D Yeah, action is SO much easier than smut to write, once I got back into it I was cruising along. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks so much for the review!
Date: 05/18/2012 8:52:57 AM Title: The Visitor
Well hell's bells, honey. You certainly do give nice little adrenaline bursts. It complements your nanoseconds of discussion and relaxation really well. I love the line about clean, fed and healthy at one time.
~Mia
Author's Response: Yeah, it's amazing when you really look at the story. Except for the "three weeks later," it really only covers about four days, and the two of them never get a damn moment of rest. :-) At least I gave them a few minutes this chapter...
[Report This]Date: 05/18/2012 12:50:34 AM Title: The Visitor
Wha...!!!
Author's Response: I know, right! LOL. Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/17/2012 11:35:33 PM Title: The Visitor
wow. so calm and Bam! Action. You sure know how to end a chapter! Great job. Loved the chapter.
Author's Response: So grateful for your review, because that was exactly what I was going for. A little tranquil moment, and then Sabretooth bursts onto the scene. ;-) Thanks again for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 05/14/2012 8:57:07 PM Title: The Scarf
Again...whoa. I need to open a window...turn on the fan or something. DAMN.
Author's Response: :-D So glad you liked it! Thanks so much for your review. Hope you cooled down...eventually. ;-)
Date: 05/14/2012 8:17:59 PM Title: The Scarf
wonderful as always. know what you mean about our favourite couple being sex-mad: you leave them alone for two minutes and BAM! (Literally, in this case). enjoyed this chapter anyway, keep up with the story;-)
Author's Response: :-) Glad you liked it. Yes, I definitely didn't expect it, but it retrospect it make sense that Logan would want to prove that her skin doesn't matter in a very hands-on way. He's just that kinda guy. Thanks for your review!
Date: 05/14/2012 10:00:32 AM Title: The Scarf
I think it's so sweet that Logan won't let Marie change their relationship because she can't touch. She needs it! Girl is hella stubborn! Part of the reason he loves her, I bet! : )
Can't wait to read more! It's so fun to read such a well written story!
Author's Response: Yeah, sometimes Logan's bossiness can be downright endearing, can't it? Thanks so much for the review!
Date: 05/14/2012 12:06:15 AM Title: The Scarf
Well, for someone who finds smut hard to do, you sure do it well. lol :)
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! So glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reviewing.
Date: 05/13/2012 9:33:36 PM Title: The Scarf
Hot. And somehow adorably wonderful at the same time. Glad he knew just what he needed. *snicker* ...in more ways than one...
Author's Response: Aw. Thanks so much for the review! Yep, Logan is quite the good Samaritan here, isn't he?
Date: 05/13/2012 8:47:26 PM Title: The Scarf
I don't know if it is because you found this chapter easier to write but this chapter "feels" more...right between the two of them than the last one. I don't know if you wanted to put tension in the last chapter so that we could feel the time ticking away in the back ground but that's kind of what it felt like for me. This one has a distinctly different flow... it has a greater need but gives me a feeling of greater connection between the two of them.
Author's Response: Ha, I don't actually think this was easier to write, but I'm glad you liked it. Last chapter...I'm not sure if it was time tension or just the amount of stuff that had to get fit in around the sex -- making sure Logan knew she chose him, the whole birth control thing, the whole "first time" / trust thing -- but I can see it not flowing so well. This one...well, in this one I was worried that Logan was being too "dominant" -- interrupting her, forcing her out of her comfort zone. I didn't want him to seem like a bully. But then again, if anyone were to get on my case about a dominant Logan, it probably wouldn't be you. ;-)
Date: 05/13/2012 7:59:25 PM Title: The Scarf
wow... that was sexy. glad Logan showed Marie that her skin isn't a problem for him. Just need some imagination lol Awesome job on this one!
Author's Response: So glad you liked it. Thanks so much for your review! Yes, I obviously hadn't anticipated that the two of them would be gettin' it on again, but it does kinda make sense. Logan is a physical guy, and he would pretty understandably balk at the idea of Marie keeping herself away from him, especially since a little pain never discouraged him much. ;-)
[Report This]Date: 05/12/2012 1:00:43 AM Title: The Hour
Whoah....... *fans self* 10 ++ stars
Author's Response: :-D I am to please!
Date: 05/09/2012 10:42:04 PM Title: The Hour
You say writing smut is hard but you do it to perfection. You always manage to make it sweet, sexy and totally in keeping with the characters and the story you have written.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much for the compliment! And for the review.
Date: 05/09/2012 10:38:40 PM Title: The Proposal
“Shut up, Logan,” she said. She felt the slow smile spreading across her face. “Two hours. And I don’t want to waste a second.”
Amen, sister! I like the way Marie thinks!
I've said it before and I'll say it again; I really enjoy how you write these two characters--very believable and compelling. You always have the right amount of angst without going to far and the perfect amount of sweetness that is just so right. Sometimes I find that I only like one character of a couple but you really do a great job writing both characters that I find myself really rooting for both of them together.
Sigh. I can't get enough of this couple and this story. I'm really glad that you're back from your hiatus.
Author's Response: Yeah, that Marie. She's a smart one. I'm so glad you are liking the characters. I think it's hard sometimes for me to hit the right balance -- a character I meant to make strong just becomes bitchy instead, someone I wanted to be vulnerable just comes off as weak and whiny, etc. Maybe a lot like life, you don't always hit what you're aiming for! I started to write this Marie partly in reaction to my Marie in "The Rogue," who I felt was too weak overall, but then this one started being just too prickly/dysfunctional. It means a lot that you feel that the way I've tacked back in the other direction is still believable for the character. Oh, and did I mention I passed? ;-)
Date: 05/09/2012 10:27:16 PM Title: The Plan
You did a great job with this chapter. I could totally see the action and escape clearly in my mind's eye. It's always good to see Logan taking charge too. It was great seeing Kitty make an appearance as well.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it. I was honestly worried that Logan was too take-charge in this (or rather than Marie was too passive), but he did have a plan and she had just promised to trust him, so it really doesn't make sense for her to try to impose her own will on the situation. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 05/09/2012 10:21:35 PM Title: The Apology
Loved Marie coming to terms with her feelings and laying all her cards on the table when she thinks Logan's out of commission. And Logan playing possum--perfect! I love LetsHimselfGetCapturedToRescueHisGirl!Logan!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it...I knew I had made the character so damn dysfunctional that it would need a pretty significant change to make a relationship between them believable, but I wasn't sure how having her say it out loud would fly. Having her say it mostly to herself, not knowing if Logan was hearing or not, seemed like the most realistic medium. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 05/08/2012 4:30:52 AM Title: The Hour
Oh, this has redeeming features. Does it ever. Well done -- it's both tender and hot. Love it.
Author's Response: So glad you liked it, especially since I think when I consulted you (way back when) we were both in agreement that getting these guys to Smuttytown would be a very difficult feat. I'm glad that you liked it.
Date: 05/08/2012 2:54:34 AM Title: The Hour
That was hot. very hot. LOVED it! Great chapter!!! can't wait for more
Author's Response: So glad you liked it. I'll get working on that more, if Syrin would give me a break already. ;-)
Date: 05/08/2012 1:14:59 AM Title: The Hour
Wow! I think that's about all I can say. Just... WOW! lol
Author's Response: Yay is all I can say...so glad you liked it!
Date: 05/07/2012 9:04:55 PM Title: The Hour
*Fanning self* I need a cold shower...excuse me while I just....*stumbles away*... get a hold of myself.
Author's Response: :-D Thanks for the very flattering review!
Date: 05/02/2012 4:43:46 AM Title: The Proposal
I really thought this chapter was quite touching. I didn't expect a thoughtful Logan even without going into a lot of exposition you gave him a soft side. I like it a lot.
Author's Response: Thanks so much...so glad you liked it! Yes, I like the thoughtful/insightful side of Logan -- when he stops bullheadedly trying to impose his will on the situation and just takes a step back to really understand what's going on with Marie.
Date: 05/01/2012 2:02:25 AM Title: The Proposal
Sooooo happy to see such a quick update!!! Love it!!!!! :)
Author's Response: Hopefully I'll be back on a more or less weekly schedule now. Thanks so much for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 04/30/2012 4:52:36 PM Title: The Proposal
Oh I wouldn't waste a second either!
Author's Response: No. Lie. :-) Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 04/30/2012 4:05:41 PM Title: The Proposal
Holy cow! What an awesome chapter! I love this story (always have) and this chapter was just amazing. The tenderness, the wanting, the emotion... excellent!
And, thanks for the welcome back! :)
Author's Response: So glad you liked it! Thanks so much for the review. Now get writing on The Search, TYVM!
Date: 04/30/2012 3:53:16 PM Title: The Proposal
I want to cry. I'm not sure if it's because I'm happy or relieved or I feel bittersweet about it all or what. But your words move me to want to shed tears. Over. Words. That is some serious stuff. You don't even know.
~Mia
Author's Response: Aw, Mia, that's so sweet, but don't cry! You know I might put these guys through hell, but I always give them their truly happy ending. :-D Thanks so much for your very touching review -- now you're making *me* tear up!