This is going to be great. You answered a HUGE number of questions there. Wonderful. I am so glad to hear you have had a good day writing.

Author's Response: So glad that you're liking it! Yeah, isn't it amazing how some chapters just pour out, and others take *ages*? Thanks so much for reviewing!

Wow, you really went for it in making these guys loathsome. But then that's what human trafficking is. Don't flinch, okay? :)

Author's Response: Hmmm...that's really good advice. I think I probably did flinch a little, in that there's never going to be any outright non-con in my stories. Allusions to past events, or even attempted assaults, but I can never quite bring myself to make a plot point out of rape. I think to do that you have to do it completely, brutally, well (like in "The Girl") and even if I could pull that off it just doesn't fit my escapist popcorn style of fanfic. So, this will be a slightly sanitized version of human trafficking, in that regard. Plenty of violence, though, to make up for my squeamishness in other areas. ;-)

Oooooh this looks good! I love it already. Love that Logan thinks Marie smells enticing. Always a good sign. More please.

Author's Response: So glad that you're liking it! Yeah, I think Logan's version of "love at first sight" is "sniff at first sight." ;-)

Ooh! I almost couldn't believe my eyes when I saw another doctorg story so quick after the last one. Lucky us!

Very intriguing. Every question alesia posed--yeah, I'm pretty much on the edge of my seat wondering those things too.

She wore a white button-down shirt and a short, girlish skirt, and she was barefoot in ragged tights. One pale toe peeked out of a hole in the foot of her tights, the oddly vulnerable sight twisting something tighter in Logan’s chest as he bit back the angry growl that threatened to leave his throat.

There is something so powerful about that image and Logan's response to it. It's sad and disturbing yet sexy. Definitely makes me wonder how old Marie is.

You may not have a road map for this one, but I'm more than willing to follow wherever it ends up going. I'm sure it'll be great regardless. Please post more soon! You've left more questions than answers with this tease of a first chapter.

Author's Response: Yeah, I couldn't believe myself when I started writing another story so quick. ;-) I'm glad you found the start intriguing. And Rogue will definitely be "of age," but I did intend for her to come across at first glance as less mature. I'm not sure where the idea for this came from, but as I started writing I thought quite a bit about "Taken" and "The Professional" (both really good movies) for inspiration, and those movies skew much more to the younger girl protagonist. And to further convince you of the joys of Google Docs, I've shared this one with you too, so you can sneak a peek at Chapter 2 anytime you want. ;-)

Reads like a great beginning, eagerly awaiting more, you never disappoint.

Author's Response: Glad you like it, thanks so much for reviewing! I've had a streak of inspiration today, working on chapter 3 now, so more should be forthcoming soon. :-)