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This was an amazing addition to the beginning of my week! Incredible, you really had me going with the hallucination with angelica, lol. And just hope rogue is going to be careful around Remy! Eep! Can't wait for more!!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I added some end notes to the chapter to explain my thinking when writing Rogue's hallucination. I hope it was entertaining, even if it threw you for a loop for a moment. And about Rogue going to see Remy for comfort...well, you'll just have to wait and see! ;)
So I just left a LONG comment over at your LJ then got defeated by the spam bot I DO NOT UNDERSTAND THOSE THINGS AT ALL. But anyway ... i think what I said was along the lines of a) I love the leisurely pace of this and the light, fluffy feel that shows Rogue interacting with her friends (the whiskey heist was superb), and I really felt for her with the scene in the woods with Logan where she KNOWS that she doesn't want to be just his friend, knows its not right, but feel she loves him so much she can't refuse him that, not when he was trying so hard to share his feelings. And the scene in the bathtub is just perfect because it shows that he still thinks of her as essentially a shy teenager, not expecting her to get up and help herself, but she's had enough of being put in his boxes. Lovely dialogue, and just the sort of dynamic between them that I adore. Well done!
Author's Response:
*Does happy dance* I am honored to have a review from JaqofSpades!!!! Squee!
rnOh, man, I hate when that happens--writing a long comment, only to have it obliterated, then trying to remember what you wrote. I learned my lesson the hard way; I copy the message periodically and then right before i submit in case something happens, then I can paste it if I have to.
rnThank you so much for your detailed comment! It's so great to hear that kind of feedback and to know that what I'm trying to convey is coming through through in my writing. You have made me a very happy fangirl!!!
Hehe, I wonder how logan will recover from that! Any chance of seeing a chapter from his POV?
Author's Response:
I'm keeping the story in Rogue's POV, but the thought did cross my mind to do a whole new remix from Logan's POV...do you think that would be too redundant? Might be worth it, just to see this one scene from his point of view! :)
Check, Logan....the next move is yours, obviously!!
Yes, Logan needs to get a clue so he can make a move! Thanks for commenting!
Damn, this was just what I needed this morning! I was prepared for a full on angsty chapter, but that ending.. Left me breathless ;) so can't wait for more!!
Author's Response:
So glad I could add something nice to your morning! Oh, that Rogue. She can be impulsive sometimes when she gets mad! :)
Woah! Go roguey! Can't wait to see how this will effect things with logan after this, hope more soon!
Author's Response:
Yeah, go Roguey! I wanted to see her get a little sassy, and I think Logan got a pretty nice eyeful of what he's missing. :)
Ugh, go away Bobby. Don't make rogue feel bad :( cool chapter, if a little sad, looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
Poor Bobby, lol. He seems to be made out to be a fumbler in a lot of fics. Thanks for commenting! :)
Damn good chapter, this story is coming along beautifully! Hope more soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and commenting!
Cool chapter, boo to there being a new redhead on the scene though - I'm particularly sensitive to them - in x movies/fic anyway lol. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Haha, I know what you mean about the red hair, at least when it comes to Rogue and Jean. Although, I confess that in real life I love red hair! (Gasp!) :)
Sweet! I hope it won't be too long till they upgrade their status up from best buds ;)
Author's Response:
I don't think it will be too long, although the story is actually developing into something longer than I originally thought it would. Thanks for the comment! :)
Aww, I've been looking forward to more of this - and it didn't disappoint! What a great conversation between logan and rogue! Gotta love the chemistry :) can't wait for more!!
Author's Response:
I am glad to hear that it didn't disappoint! And also glad that the chemistry between them came through. :)
So cute! Looking forward to how things progress with these two after this :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! :)
Very nice first outing! Can't wait to see Rogue get her hands into Logan's hair...we alllll know it's going to happen, just by the way he glared at Remy!!
Thank you!
What a cool fic - hoping rogue gets her hands on Logan's hair soon haha!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yes, I hope to see Rogue running her fingers through Logan's hair soon, too. ;)
Cute! Keep going, this is wonderful!!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Ooh, looking good! Very well done for your first fic, I'll be excited for more of this :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the words of encouragement! :)