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[Report This]Date: 06/06/2015 12:08:15 AM Title: A different type of wound
Damn, that is dark! And sad. Poor rogue :( definitely excited for more!
Author's Response: Yeah. I wanted to warn people of that. I try not to write dark because I can get too deep into the dark mindset. LOL. Eventually the story will turn out better. I am a sucker for happy endings. Thanks for the review!!!!
Date: 06/05/2015 11:26:27 PM Title: A different type of wound
I love how Marie is calm in the face of her anguish. She tries so hard to do everything in her power not to let them get to her. This is my favorite section:
It angered Marie that they were nothing more than creatures to them and she set her jaw. She didn’t even see it coming, suddenly her head was slammed down into the table and the cigarette was being extinguished on her cheek.
Author's Response: Yeah. This Marie is strong.
[Report This]Date: 06/05/2015 12:27:19 AM Title: Stronger than that
Dark *shivers* excited to see what's going to happen knowing those two are so close to each other. This is going great!
Author's Response: Yay! Glad you like it!
[Report This]Date: 06/04/2015 11:05:58 AM Title: Stronger than that
Glad Logan's nearby, even if he isn't in the best position to help! Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: He will be eventually. ;)
[Report This]Date: 06/04/2015 3:59:53 AM Title: Stronger than that
Hmmm, right next door? This'll be interesting! Great job with this second chapter, eagerly anticipating more! :)
Author's Response: LOL. I wasn't planning on that happening originally but it just sort of happened. Thanks for the review! I will try to update the story again tonight!
Date: 06/04/2015 12:38:40 AM Title: Stronger than that
Love Love Love the whole "Take them down with me" attitude that Logan's got going on here.
Logan obeyed, knowing that if he resisted, he wouldn’t even have the satisfaction of hurting one of them before going down.
Just Perfect!
Author's Response: Thanks. I wanted it to seem that way. But I kinda noticed that my Logan is very... Creed like in this story
[Report This]Date: 06/03/2015 8:27:02 AM Title: Grey Walls
Terrific start - keep going!
Author's Response: Thanks! I am hoping to write a chapter a day but I am not sure If I will be able to keep that up.
[Report This]Date: 06/03/2015 3:34:57 AM Title: Grey Walls
Dark but awesome, excited to see what you have in store for rogue :)
Author's Response: I don't normally write dark stories but this was a zombie plot bunny that bit me. :D
Date: 06/03/2015 12:08:49 AM Title: Grey Walls
Love this!
She felt her chest start to tighten, there wasn’t enough air, that slot couldn’t possibly provide enough air. Her head started to swim. The walls began to close. She couldn’t take it.
You can just feel how scared and in pain she is!
Author's Response: Good. I wanted to convey her sheer terror. I am enjoying writing the darkness.
[Report This]Date: 06/03/2015 12:07:46 AM Title: Grey Walls
Ooh, great start - not for rogue- obviously- but I'm really looking forward to seeing where this goes! Thanks for posting!
Author's Response: Thanks!! I will try to update again soon.