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Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2016 4:49:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

DAMN!!  that came outta left field, Sept!! Just rip out our hearts with a dirty Taco Bell spork why dontcha??

Reviewer: Wolf CrescentWalker Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2010 1:30:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

Well done! I like the way you sneak up on the fact that Rogue has grown old. I'd consider removing any reference to the ending from the introduction, and let the piece speak for itself in impact alone, 'cause a short story with a punch-to-the-gut ending like this is powerful. The clue dilutes it.

Reviewer: silverthorne Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2009 5:39:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

The curse of his healing factor...his lovers age - and eventually die; he doesn't - and time stretches on unrelenting. In this beautiful story, he always comes back to her, even though the sight of him reminds her of her frailty. There are other good stories from his point of view on this sad fact of their existence.

Reviewer: biohelixx Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2009 11:21:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

F*ck that hurt!! But it was still eloquent. In the immortal, yet bewilderedly surprised words of one Captain Tightpants, "Huh!"

Melanie

Author's Response: Yeah, I don't know why I wrote it either. It makes me too sad! I'd rather pretend it didn't exist.

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