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Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2007 11:22:53 AM Title: Chapter 20

Ok well I have to take a cold shower now!

Author's Response: Go ahead. Logie already gave me one. Things he told me... Brr...

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Date: 01/07/2007 11:18:21 AM Title: Chapter 19

Well the 'mechanic' thing worked just fine - good idea of Marie ;)

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Date: 01/07/2007 7:18:57 AM Title: Chapter 20

a change of pace from the norm, however, it fits the characters and their histories relatively well.

(translation:) damn! that was awesome.

i'm gonna want more tho... and soon... or i'll scream!!!!!

Author's Response: Join the club. If we both scream, maybe Logie will start talking and actually tell me something useful.

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2007 12:19:56 AM Title: Chapter 19

Ugh! You're not updating fast enough. This story is so good finishing a chapter is like hitting the bottom of a bowl of icecream. :( More please!

Author's Response: As soon as I get a chappie finished. Logie has been in a cranky mood, telling only small tidbits. I have had to yank every word out of him with a wrench. Of course only figuratively speaking, I wouldn't hurt my muse. *Really? Could have fooled me...* Oh, hush, Logie. You're a stubborn bastard, but you know I love you anyway... I'm glad you're liking this. :)

Reviewer: Gamma meta Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2007 8:31:34 PM Title: Chapter 19

He remembered reading a book about ancient warriors called Vikings. They believed in afterlife, and to a place called Valhalla. After a warrior died, a Valkyrie came to take his soul to there.
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Oh! Logan wants to be saved, too. After all that, his dreams are so adorable! And so *tragic*. Because we get the rude awakening, the Destroyer, his other side. NOT a warrior, not saved, and perhaps always this injured (figuratively and literally *g*).

This is the first time he's ordered a mechanic around, isn't it? This Destroyer doesn't seem interested in anything but destruction, sleep, getting free, etc. Lust and libido doesn't seem to be there at all. So why does he sometimes nearly turn into a Destroyer when he's having sex? *ponders*

I'm sure the answers are coming. ;)

Author's Response: Answers are coming. I'm not liking very much about what Logie is telling me. But this isn't the last time we'll be seeing Wolverine.

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Date: 01/05/2007 8:23:30 PM Title: Chapter 18

She repeated her question, puffing blue clouds of mist with every breath. Logan pointed at the wall he remembered seeing open. Marie walked to it, palms flat in front of her and leaned against the concrete surface. Wall in front of her started to evaporate, crumble under her touch.
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Wow! What an image. And what an imagination, Ara! This fic seems to be more and more about the world of Destroyers, Hunters, Humans, and Mutants. The socio-politics is taking over.

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Date: 01/05/2007 12:57:31 PM Title: Chapter 18

Hmmm I'm not so sure if they were lucky...

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Date: 01/05/2007 12:50:19 PM Title: Chapter 17

I hope they have a little luck this time.

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Date: 01/04/2007 10:23:37 AM Title: Chapter 16

AAAAhhhhhh cliffhanger!

Author's Response: Ta-dah!! Just had to do it. :)

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Date: 01/04/2007 10:19:15 AM Title: Chapter 15

Heh new chapter up already... *runs off to read the next chapter*

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Date: 01/04/2007 10:12:48 AM Title: Chapter 14

Damn is it hot in here or what?!

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Date: 01/04/2007 9:49:18 AM Title: Chapter 11

Uhm they didn't have that much luck in the chapters before... they always got out but still...

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Date: 01/04/2007 9:38:08 AM Title: Chapter 9

Poor confuse Wolvie *pets head*

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Date: 01/04/2007 9:19:44 AM Title: Chapter 6

I'm sure it hurt Riddick like hell and Marie too - OUCH!

Author's Response: *That's* where it came! I have been wondering where exactly that little bunny wobbled to me. Now that I think about it, it sure had weird eyes... ;)

Reviewer: Gamma meta Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2007 1:23:51 AM Title: Chapter 15

“If you see me like that ever again, walk away. Walk away from me. Slowly. Don’t even try to get my attention. Okay?” He finally said with a hollow voice.
“I won’t probably attack. You’re too small to pose a threat. I probably thought you were a Mechanic…”
“What are you talking about?” Won’t probably attack? Was she supposed to start to be afraid of him, too?
“You met Wolverine. The Destroyer.”

Oh, boy. :) So far, Wolverine the Destroyer has seemed defeated, furtive, trying not to make trouble, trying to get by, taking opportunity for escape. And sometimes he flips into Destroyer mode, too. Does he enjoy killing, or is it just something he does?

Now the question for me is...does this Destroyer Wolverine want things for himself *beyond* freedom? Does he lust? Does he feel possessive? Does he seek to destroy and revenge? Will *this* Wolverine believe he deserves Marie, that he should just take her?

I'm so glad you're prolific, Ara. I hope you finish the next chapter soon.

Author's Response: Questions will be answered in the next episode. Prolific? When I have the time. School starts on Monday, so pace is going to slow down a little. Grrr... If I could do this for a living, write 24-7, I would. Next chappie is almost done.

Reviewer: Gamma meta Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2007 10:34:22 AM Title: Chapter 14

Another lovely chapter. L&M always manage to have sex, even when they're on the run. ;) The last two paras extremely well-written. Just enough info, visual, lots of emotion. And somehow warmer because they'd been intimate but exhausted earlier with the little bath. (Also glad I didn't have to imagine dirty, sweaty, gritty sex.)

Poor Logan can't let go yet. It's interesting to find that Wolverine is a separate personality, an altered state. Docile, still thinking, even absently noting, but altered. Based on what Wolverine has been so far, I really don't think he needs to be worried. But he will be. Poor Logan. *pets him* That is his angst-y burden.

Author's Response: Wolverine isn't the most stable being, even if we have seen him mostly docile up this far... I'm glad you're liking this. Thanks for the fb. :)

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