"The other (Destroyer) was wearing a some sort of visor over its eyes." Is that a reference to Scott? Great story, can read this over and over without getting bored!

ooooohhh... what a place to stop! maybe wolverine found her? and cos he can smell her scent, he's gone crazy, and now there's a fight outside - which marie's ignoring cos she's too busy missing logan and crying. i'm sure you'll let us know soon...

Oh, Ara. Somewhat heartbreaking and very intriguing. So we're back full circle, with Logan coming to the conclusion that he must save her from even himself? That's so *awful* for him. For both of them.

And now she really does have a past, like him, she wants to run from. She almost seemed to have an alter-ego there for a while, too. Their situation is eating away at them.

Author's Response: Hate to break them apart. Looks like it was the only way to keep Marie safe. but I believe strongly that they will get back together again. As for alter-egos and rest of that fancy stuff... Don't really know. I just write what they tell me to write. Thanks for the fb. Much appreciated, as always. :)

Yay! Wolverine! Although, I have to say you're just going to have to quit school. Cuz' I need more of this story and I need it now!! ^.^

Author's Response: No can do. I have to get a job, and without excellent papers from that school that's never going to happen. But don't worry, I have a long weekend now. Might get few chappies done... ;)

This is not really a review; just wanted to let you know that I absolutely love how you bring small creatures into the stories. They seem to support that aspect of Logan which is nature, but not wild.
And Logan comes across so well, how his thoughts shift and change, not always getting things right, but always moving, like they do with real people.
And while I'm at it, I might as well tell you how well your Wolverine works here - loved it that you brought in the Destroyer aspect again.

Author's Response: Thank you.

Oh well you mean a weather like now... should have snow but it's spring here.

Author's Response: Have you seen Mad Max? This world is based on that. Mostly desert. Winter is dry season. During summer rains. Those are the only two seasons left.

Oh oh Marie really doesn't know that it's Logan... hmmm how will she find out?

Hmmm I always thought that when winter is approaching it's getting colder *scratches head*

Author's Response: This is something that is vaguely mentioned in earlier part, when Logan and Marie are still in his bunker. Before the war begun, something caused climate to change. No more cold winters. Instead hot and very, very dry winters.

so how does she know it's not camo? and now, if they have kids, does it mean the whole adam and eve plan worked?

and when's the next 1 coming?

gosh i sound like such a brat. thanks so much for updating... i'm sure everyone agrees. :D

Author's Response: Adam & Eve is terminated project. To Camo it was very much up and running, and in his eyes Logan became Adam after he won Camo in battle. So, no. No new superrace. Next one probably tonight or tomorrow. I'm not sure. Haven't started it yet, have to give Logie and Marie some time to rest before prodding them again. :)

Is Camo short for 'camouflage'? He hides, but he's alter-Logan? The one who claims, but the one, oddly enough, who won't force a confrontation.

Did Logan really kill alter-ego here, or did he *become* it? Or is the fact that he's now 'Adam', and that he's killed the idea of his beast, indicate that he now straddles Wolverine and Logan? Clearly, even Marie is not sure.

But at the beginning of the fight, anyway, I'd say Logan was still Logan. He said Marie didn't belong to anyone. He only promised Camo to take care of her. So perhaps I'm not just naively hopeful, when I see 'Logan' in the way he backs off and cleans up and gets dressed again and eats berries? *bats lashes*

Oh, I could think about this all day! But how much better if I just wait until you update, Ara! Welcome back to school, even if it'd suit me better if you wrote all day instead.

Author's Response: Camo's short for camouflage. Logan is Logan. Will be Logan, at least for a while. No Wolverine yet. :)

Ewww that sure was not a nice fight to look at - poor Marie.

Aaaah so evil - good that the next chapter is up already.

thank you thank you for updating!

but please no more teasing! i can't stand it!

sorry... inner logan(ess) growling at me... i'll be nice :D

please?

Author's Response: Next update probably tomorrow. School's getting in the way. I'm not liking this slower pace either, but something tells me my teacher's wouldn't appreciate much if I asked them to give me a vacation until this is finished... :)