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*SIGH* Ahhhhh...ok, so we've only seen a "possible" future? Now we only have to wonder....he DOES wake up, right??
*phew* THAT was intense!! As draining or as crazed as the reader wants, depending on how fast you read!
Well played Sineya, well played.
Another INTENSE ending! Love how it's just dialogue, not a lot of background explanation, lets the reader presume and assume for themselves what's going on!
So much heartache....you can feel it in their words.
"Or so they thought." what a great line to end a chapter with! *scurries off for the next installment
"Or so they thought." what a great line to end a chapter with! *scurries off for the next installment
Ahhhhh...What's this? A new development...is the Wolverine going insane? Is there another love in his life? This is getting good.
DARK indeed! Who's seeing what? Who is betraying that which they may not even know about? Who doesn't know of the pain they're causing? On to the next to (hopefully) find out!
Very, very intriguing. The way this is written, 'Marie' could be so many things -- a hallucination from Logan's grieving mind; a hypnotic suggestion from the professor to ease Logan through the stages of grief (and keep the Wolverine from going berserk over the loss of his mate); an evil taunt from Jean to torture the man who rejected her in favor of Marie...Or she could be a ghost that only the man who loved her can see. Really, really intriguing. --Wendie
Could be really cool to see if she was really there! Good job!
sooooo creepy and beatiful!
Soooooooo.....he had a glimpse of a *possible* future while holding her at the top of Lady Liberty?? Or, after she cut herself in her room, across from where he was f*cking Jean?
As long as we got the happy, shipperific ending, I really don't care!!! LOL
great stuff. Just the perfect kind of dark.
that was very intense and angsty, i like it.
the repeating lines with the smile and caress and the fact that you didn't use names made it very special, almost like a poem or something.
great =)
by the way, i was imagining rogue seeing kitty and bobby, like she did in the movie, in the ice-skating scene, was that right? or was it supposed to be...i don't know, maybe logan and jean she sees?
Wow. I liked this! Dark and depressing without being weighed down with several thousand words each chapter.
=D
I like the open ending. Did /he/ make it? Or will they go through it all again? Hrmmm...