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Reviewer: cate Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2007 2:57:17 PM Title: Long Time Dead

Good chapter, i just picked up this story yesterday and I'm excited to keep reading :) Except I'm not sure if you noticed, but around where Marie and Logan start kissing, Logan sort of "Ah" instead of "I." I'm assuming you mixed up the dialogue a bit... just thought i'd let you know :)

Good story though, i like where it's headed.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2007 4:31:56 AM Title: Long Time Dead

Ooooooh the things I wanna do to Bobby and Logan *growls*

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2007 1:25:50 PM Title: Long Time Dead

OOoooooooo!! This is good!! I love the 'take charge, fuck you and the horse you rode in on' Marie! More! More!

Author's Response: Haha, I like that, 'fuck you and the horse you rode in on!' More to come, along with Logan's explanation as to how he could have let the best thing in his life go, to Marie's mysterious three day dissapearances... LOL, thanks for the review

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