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Reviewer: Dita Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2008 11:52:36 PM Title: You Kill Me, And You Better Believe I'm Bitter

It occurred to me that I haven't done this story the justice of a well deserved review! Ack... so bad of me.

Your plotline is awesome. The extra characters are totally believable, and your Logan and Marie are so full of angst I might burst a heart valve reading this story again.

I'm a big fan of great opening lines, and your first chapter nailed it! I've read that chapter over a few times. Such a great set up for the rest of the story.

I can understand Rogue's bitterness, and how it is slowly poisoning Logan's affection for her. I hope they do manage to get back to good... but not for a while. The sexual tension between them is great. Interesting developments to Rogue's character too.

Great work all around! I hope you'll update soon!

Reviewer: silverthorne Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2008 4:53:27 PM Title: You Kill Me, And You Better Believe I'm Bitter

I read the wonderfully creative fiction on this site for enjoyment and a welcome diversion from the nastiness of the world because I have become obsessed by these two characters. I have been reading too many stories lately which feature my beloved Marie and Logan as mean-spirited, hateful, and vicious to each other, each trying to top the other in cruel, callous words and treatment. It turns me inside out, even though I don't particularly want to read about them as a couple of mooney-eyes lovebirds all the time. While I know it's ridiculous to hope for a reconciliation after all the set-up our great angst author has established for us, I am really hoping for some light at the end of this train ride -- the light in their eyes. (Yeah, yeah...I know...if you can't stand the bitch and bastard they are here, stay away from the story. Sorry, it draws me and tortures me like a drug, and I can't back away!) Write on, rawrave...for writing's sake, write on!! more...more...more

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2008 4:28:11 AM Title: You Kill Me, And You Better Believe I'm Bitter

So where is the next chapter ;)

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