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Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2007 12:59:33 PM Title: "Dinner is Served & Bobby is Toast"

“‘Cause you’re Butch, and I’m the Kid, and we’re an outlaw team,”

Awwww cute.

“Someday, you’re gonna make some poor sucker wonder what the hell he was thinkin’ when he laid you.”

Heh let's just hope that poor sucker will be Logan ;)

more please

Author's Response: "'Cause you're Butch, and I'm the Kid, and we're an outlaw team." That's my favorite line in the whole she-bang! About whether that poor sucker is gonna be Logan, we'll, I'll plead the 5th for another chapter or so.... *eep!*

Reviewer: Bancainte Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2007 9:58:19 AM Title: "Dinner is Served & Bobby is Toast"

Thanks for your really carefully crafted dialogues!

Author's Response: I adore good dialogue, so I work hard at getting a touch of wit and tease into what I write. Thanks, I'm just glad it's coherent, considering that I usually write about 4 am!

Reviewer: Deb Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2007 5:57:44 AM Title: "Dinner is Served & Bobby is Toast"

The end had me laughing. I love how she just adds in that she's breaking up so nonchalantly.

Author's Response: I must confess - that last statement is one of two lines that I didn't write. Lovey (see opening credits) did that one for me (and she's not even an X-Geek like me). I was struggling with the same concept but in awkward dialogue, so she smoothed it out for me. Give credit where it's due, I always say.

Reviewer: Dromeda Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2007 4:24:26 AM Title: "Dinner is Served & Bobby is Toast"

Does it make me a complete dork that I waited up an extra half-hour in hopes that a new chapter of this story would be posted? It does? Thought so!

Author's Response: Dork? No. Flattering to me? Yes! Glad I posted this one a little early - don't want to be the source of your insomnia.

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