Reviews For Poison
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Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2009 3:11:29 AM Title: "Denim and Dark Hair"

"Clean, smelling nice, appropriately dressed, safe sex and birth control dealt with, good hot man lined up and waiting: it was time to lose the virginity beast."

ok, i wish my own virginity-losing experience could have used something like that LOL! too bad there aren't Logans out there in real life!

Author's Response: Amen, sister! It's been interesting, responding to your reviews as you're reading my story. We're online at the same time. I'm glad you're enjoying Poison - it was fun to write (if sometimes exasperating!). It's been great chatting with you on the reviews. Thanks!

Reviewer: Bancainte Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2007 9:26:54 AM Title: "Denim and Dark Hair"

LOVE the paragraph that has Rogue preparing - conveys everything in the terse checking off of trifles, and the utter panic of the last sentence.
(Admittedly, I find it hard to grasp the concept of actually planning and arranging a night like that, but hey.)

AND, though this is not really giving your story the dues it's worth, what I almost like most is the way you give each chapter a headline and how much care you have obviously put into the one-line summaries. Great regard for details is too often neglected - I greatly enjoy it here.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Baincainte - I'm a lover of those little details, too. And the snarkiness I TRY to put into those chapter summaries, I think, sort of breaks up the cumulative angst (yep, it's coming).

Reviewer: QueenC86 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2007 2:47:06 PM Title: "Denim and Dark Hair"

if i could think of something to say i would but god damn it girl we need chapter 20 like now.

my arms and hands are shaking from the emotion im feeling for them.

Author's Response: Paitence, deary - you'll get it tonight. Or, perhaps more accurately, Marie will 'get it' tonight.

Reviewer: sharonmjl47 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2007 3:41:36 AM Title: "Denim and Dark Hair"

NEXT PART...please!!!!!! AAAWWWWWW!!!!!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2007 3:31:13 AM Title: "Denim and Dark Hair"

Hmmm the Wolverine is back... so Logan's mutation may come back... maybe?

This is not a chapter! This is a gigantic cliffhanger for the next chapter - very sneaky!

Author's Response: This is so a chapter! *stamps foot* It's an in-depth look into a mutual case of bad nerves over-ridden by desire. And I got to play with Wolverine, too. THAT alone qualifies as chapter-worthy. lol! *hands a glass of ice water* You'll be all right - just breathe deeply.

Reviewer: Dromeda Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2007 2:59:09 AM Title: "Denim and Dark Hair"

ahh, don't stop there! Great chapter; I hope next chappie picks up where this one left off.

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