The Wolverine & Rogue Fanfiction Archive
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"Clean, smelling nice, appropriately dressed, safe sex and birth control dealt with, good hot man lined up and waiting: it was time to lose the virginity beast."
ok, i wish my own virginity-losing experience could have used something like that LOL! too bad there aren't Logans out there in real life!
Author's Response: Amen, sister! It's been interesting, responding to your reviews as you're reading my story. We're online at the same time. I'm glad you're enjoying Poison - it was fun to write (if sometimes exasperating!). It's been great chatting with you on the reviews. Thanks!
LOVE the paragraph that has Rogue preparing - conveys everything in the terse checking off of trifles, and the utter panic of the last sentence.
(Admittedly, I find it hard to grasp the concept of actually planning and arranging a night like that, but hey.)
AND, though this is not really giving your story the dues it's worth, what I almost like most is the way you give each chapter a headline and how much care you have obviously put into the one-line summaries. Great regard for details is too often neglected - I greatly enjoy it here.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Baincainte - I'm a lover of those little details, too. And the snarkiness I TRY to put into those chapter summaries, I think, sort of breaks up the cumulative angst (yep, it's coming).
if i could think of something to say i would but god damn it girl we need chapter 20 like now.
my arms and hands are shaking from the emotion im feeling for them.
Author's Response: Paitence, deary - you'll get it tonight. Or, perhaps more accurately, Marie will 'get it' tonight.
NEXT PART...please!!!!!! AAAWWWWWW!!!!!
Hmmm the Wolverine is back... so Logan's mutation may come back... maybe?
This is not a chapter! This is a gigantic cliffhanger for the next chapter - very sneaky!
Author's Response: This is so a chapter! *stamps foot* It's an in-depth look into a mutual case of bad nerves over-ridden by desire.
And I got to play with Wolverine, too. THAT alone qualifies as chapter-worthy.
lol!
*hands a glass of ice water*
You'll be all right - just breathe deeply.
ahh, don't stop there! Great chapter; I hope next chappie picks up where this one left off.