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Reviewer: Bancainte Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2007 10:37:41 AM Title: Chapter 7
Date: 05/29/2007 10:37:41 AM Title: Chapter 7
Still like this story very much! Hope your brain remains broken! ;-)
Erm, and:
- "Advice" is uncountable => a piece of advice, if you need a plural
- drink, drank, (had) drunk
Reviewer: Bancainte Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2007 10:30:23 AM Title: Chapter 7
Date: 05/29/2007 10:30:23 AM Title: Chapter 7
Just a quick pointer: "Somewhere faith was laughing its ass off with the destiny over their practical joke."
Both Faith and Destiny with capitals here, as you are treating them as persons; no article for Destiny.
Reviewer: bima140277 Signed 
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Date: 05/27/2007 10:12:24 AM Title: Chapter 7
[Report This]Date: 05/27/2007 10:12:24 AM Title: Chapter 7
Can I hit Logan with something hard? He deserves it...
Author's Response: Don't hit him too hard. I still kind of need him to finish this one... :)
Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2007 5:54:26 AM Title: Chapter 7
[Report This]Date: 05/27/2007 5:54:26 AM Title: Chapter 7
Woah, when did she grow a pair? Bravo on the dont-take-no-shit Marie. But will he do it? I have my reservations.... :)