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Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2007 3:51:59 AM Title: Chapter 11

... I promise to fuck the living daylights out of you later ...

Hehehe...

more please

Author's Response: Coming, coming... Grr. I should be outside, enjoying the first day of my vacation, and what do I do instead? Try to sort out my notes! And plan the best way to punish my cat for scattering them all over my living room. Teaches me not to plan beforehand. Or use notepad on planning.

Reviewer: Bancainte Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2007 10:44:58 AM Title: Chapter 11

Hmm - no really, I can live perfectly with this turn, as long as he doesn't suddenly topple into deep infatuation with the innocent li'l angel. This twist is much more interesting.

Not sure how this bonding thing works, though. Doesn't being in someone else's head mean you can feel everything that they feel, and they can feel all of your sensations? And wouldn't that mean Logan nuzzled his own neck and earlobe, an image my imagination finds a little difficult to cope with?

Author's Response: No. Yes. Yes. NO. Logan won't turn to a blubbering emo-boy who's pining after Marie. YES. YES. Logan groped Marie, and via her feelings and emotions himself as well. But I try to keep it on a basic level for the sake of the story and my sanity. It's too complex system for me to put on a paper.

Reviewer: lizzy13132003 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2007 3:51:57 PM Title: Chapter 11

Hihihi...that was so great.Poor Marie..not only does she get kidnapped now Logan is teasing her!I am really curious when his little promise he gave her will come up in a conversation between them after the battle.Should be fun to watch.And somehow I expect Scott to tease Logan mercelessly once he realises that Marie has Logan practically tied around her little finger while at the same time driving him insane with her behaviour.
Can't wait for more please update soon.

Author's Response: Last chapters are coming soon. Last day of school today, and since I didn't get a job for the summer, there's very little for me to do but just sit on the comp and keep writing. :)

Reviewer: Valeriusjka Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2007 11:28:20 AM Title: Chapter 11

*sings*
I want you
I don't want anybody else
And when I think about you
I touch myself
Ooh, oooh, oooooh, aaaaaah
*giggles*

It would be just right for Logan to get a taste of his own medicine. Say what if he tried to touch himself he felt he had girly parts? *wiggles brows*



Author's Response: Don't. Don't. Just stop right there, missy. I don't need that kind of image of Logan floating around in my head right now. He has to be big and manly, all parts intact. :)

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