*Gasp* That is brilliant! I sometimes toyed with the idea of writing action on the inside of their heads, but was never sure if that would work.

Great that you had the courage to take on such a tricky thing - and it works perfectly well!

Also glad to see how Logan is changing in his attitude so imperceptibly he doesn't quite notice, but still the characters stay true to themselves and the story (e.g. how Jean and Logan go way back).
Wonderful chapter!

I'm slightly disappointed in Marie that she couldn't block Magneto from Logan herself. And the 'letting the nightmare out' thing. I'm sorry, that was halarious. Just as image of a little bald man in a trench coat and funny glasses running uncontrolably like a mad man screaming. And holding a scalpal of course. It was just a little funny. Heh. But can't wait to see if its going to be an actual battle or a battle of the minds! :D