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Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2007 9:27:55 AM Title: Chapter 19

Poor reporter *giggles*

Reviewer: Bancainte Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2007 1:06:14 PM Title: Chapter 19

"... laughing his ass off."
OMG, so did I, did I ever! That was wonderfully done - no sympathy here for the poor fella, and perfectly in character.Great humour, too.

(And, umm, about to lie... there's two words that look the same
to lie on the bed (past tense: he lay, past perfect: had lain)
to lie => to not speak the truth (past: lied, past perfect: had lied)


Author's Response: Aaargh! I swear I'll strangle my comp! For some reason, maybe because every program in this useless piece of sh...*BLEEP*...t is messed up, but the dictionary keeps changing words no matter what I do or what settings I put on! Grr... Thanks. I guess it's time to take my comp to the shop and let them do an autopsy on it to see what's the problem.

Reviewer: Valeriusjka Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2007 11:54:09 AM Title: Chapter 19

Now that was *very* mean of him. Also I can't help but think that I would like the VIP balcony to watch it. ;P

And now I'm procastinating...should go and write my chapter.

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