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[Report This]Date: 06/01/2007 2:08:24 AM Title: Chapter 14
"cocooning her to a painful, suffocating embrace." -- Nice. Can't wait for more. :)
[Report This]Date: 05/31/2007 4:39:35 PM Title: Chapter 14
ohh I love this story. I can't wait for more. I really like this link between Logan and Marie. and the animal inside Logan. Thats really kinda cool! Please update soon!!!
Date: 05/31/2007 2:38:53 PM Title: Chapter 13
*Gasp* That is brilliant! I sometimes toyed with the idea of writing action on the inside of their heads, but was never sure if that would work.
Great that you had the courage to take on such a tricky thing - and it works perfectly well!
Also glad to see how Logan is changing in his attitude so imperceptibly he doesn't quite notice, but still the characters stay true to themselves and the story (e.g. how Jean and Logan go way back).
Wonderful chapter!
[Report This]Date: 05/31/2007 12:15:37 PM Title: Chapter 13
Uhm not sure this is a good idea... ya know Jean inside Logan's head...
[Report This]Date: 05/31/2007 11:59:22 AM Title: Chapter 13
I'm slightly disappointed in Marie that she couldn't block Magneto from Logan herself. And the 'letting the nightmare out' thing. I'm sorry, that was halarious. Just as image of a little bald man in a trench coat and funny glasses running uncontrolably like a mad man screaming. And holding a scalpal of course. It was just a little funny. Heh. But can't wait to see if its going to be an actual battle or a battle of the minds! :D
[Report This]Date: 05/31/2007 3:51:59 AM Title: Chapter 11
... I promise to fuck the living daylights out of you later ...
Hehehe...
more please
Author's Response: Coming, coming... Grr. I should be outside, enjoying the first day of my vacation, and what do I do instead? Try to sort out my notes! And plan the best way to punish my cat for scattering them all over my living room. Teaches me not to plan beforehand. Or use notepad on planning.
[Report This]Date: 05/31/2007 3:48:25 AM Title: Chapter 10
Awwww cute chapter... well till Sabretooth popped in.
[Report This]Date: 05/31/2007 1:57:21 AM Title: Chapter 10
Can't remember if I reviewed this chapter yet or not, but I'll risk waxing redundant. The scene where she holds him against her in bed while he's coming down from the nightmare - so poignant, so sweet, so gripping! And then the flirting... vava voom! It's a marvelous chapter, Ara.
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Date: 05/30/2007 10:44:58 AM Title: Chapter 11
Hmm - no really, I can live perfectly with this turn, as long as he doesn't suddenly topple into deep infatuation with the innocent li'l angel. This twist is much more interesting.
Not sure how this bonding thing works, though. Doesn't being in someone else's head mean you can feel everything that they feel, and they can feel all of your sensations? And wouldn't that mean Logan nuzzled his own neck and earlobe, an image my imagination finds a little difficult to cope with?
Author's Response: No. Yes. Yes. NO. Logan won't turn to a blubbering emo-boy who's pining after Marie. YES. YES. Logan groped Marie, and via her feelings and emotions himself as well. But I try to keep it on a basic level for the sake of the story and my sanity. It's too complex system for me to put on a paper.
[Report This]Date: 05/29/2007 3:51:57 PM Title: Chapter 11
Hihihi...that was so great.Poor Marie..not only does she get kidnapped now Logan is teasing her!I am really curious when his little promise he gave her will come up in a conversation between them after the battle.Should be fun to watch.And somehow I expect Scott to tease Logan mercelessly once he realises that Marie has Logan practically tied around her little finger while at the same time driving him insane with her behaviour.
Can't wait for more please update soon.
Author's Response: Last chapters are coming soon. Last day of school today, and since I didn't get a job for the summer, there's very little for me to do but just sit on the comp and keep writing. :)
Date: 05/29/2007 11:28:20 AM Title: Chapter 11
*sings*
I want you
I don't want anybody else
And when I think about you
I touch myself
Ooh, oooh, oooooh, aaaaaah
*giggles*
It would be just right for Logan to get a taste of his own medicine. Say what if he tried to touch himself he felt he had girly parts? *wiggles brows*
Author's Response: Don't. Don't. Just stop right there, missy. I don't need that kind of image of Logan floating around in my head right now. He has to be big and manly, all parts intact. :)
Date: 05/29/2007 10:45:01 AM Title: Chapter 8
Ahh-ha-ha, Marie is GREAT in this! And I so hope she doesn't suddenly become on of those "I'm a grown woman plus 25 bar chicks and fight groupies rolled into one sex-drive" acts!
"Stop being so fucking positive..." Yes, that's the Wolverine to a T. Great!
Author's Response: Heh. Don't get squeaked by the chapter 10... Jesus, do you read my mind or what? Thanks for pointing that out, I try to avoid it. :)
Author's Response: Actually I was going to warn you about chapter 11. Oww, my head's a mess. I have been fiddling with my account in FF.net. That place is a freaking nightmare!
Date: 05/29/2007 10:37:41 AM Title: Chapter 7
Still like this story very much! Hope your brain remains broken! ;-)
Erm, and:
- "Advice" is uncountable => a piece of advice, if you need a plural
- drink, drank, (had) drunk
Date: 05/29/2007 10:30:23 AM Title: Chapter 7
Just a quick pointer: "Somewhere faith was laughing its ass off with the destiny over their practical joke."
Both Faith and Destiny with capitals here, as you are treating them as persons; no article for Destiny.
[Report This]Date: 05/29/2007 3:40:56 AM Title: Chapter 10
Wow...mean Sabertooth destroying that bonding moment!Logan will be prettangry I guess.Poor Marie she just can't escape that stupid machine it seems!I love this fic and your way of writing.Hope you update soon.
[Report This]Date: 05/28/2007 11:14:47 AM Title: Chapter 10
Oh boy, what is Logan going to do now???? Really good chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next. Are you going to be following the movie plot line?
Author's Response: Little bit of this and that... Wouldn't be much of a surprise of what happens next if I answered to your question. But thanks for the fb. I'll try to scrounge up next chappie tomorrow.
[Report This]Date: 05/28/2007 3:06:17 AM Title: Chapter 9
Yup it sure is better to watch Logan and some woman than those lab scenes...
[Report This]Date: 05/27/2007 3:29:50 PM Title: Chapter 9
Ooo... I like this chapter. But it gives me several questions. Does cinnamon in coffee really taste good? Did she just fall off the bed or was it his 'bond' pushing her out? Although I was surprised how he reacted to her being in the nightmare, pleasently. Cool twist. And then the "Maybe she sould go and check if he was okay"... you just mean to end it there! :D
Author's Response: Don't know about cinnamon coffee, I drink mine black. But my parents got some last christmas and they said it was good. Next question will be answered in the next part, as soon as I have it sorted out. This one I actually have notes and whole storyline put together, but next part will have to wait until some time tomorrow. Scool gets in the way again. Well, on Wednesday starts summer vacation. Real vacation, haven't gotten a job yet. So maybe I can finish off all my WIP's as well as this one, too. :)
[Report This]Date: 05/27/2007 12:14:21 PM Title: Chapter 8
Having Logan's senses must be so cool!
[Report This]Date: 05/27/2007 10:12:24 AM Title: Chapter 7
Can I hit Logan with something hard? He deserves it...
Author's Response: Don't hit him too hard. I still kind of need him to finish this one... :)
[Report This]Date: 05/27/2007 5:54:26 AM Title: Chapter 7
Woah, when did she grow a pair? Bravo on the dont-take-no-shit Marie. But will he do it? I have my reservations.... :)
[Report This]Date: 05/27/2007 3:56:52 AM Title: Chapter 6
Very interesting!
[Report This]Date: 05/26/2007 11:59:55 AM Title: Chapter 6
...Do you like just confusing the hell out of me? I HAVE to know what happened! More please. Now. :)
Author's Response: Soon. What can I say? Logie ate a bad burger before we started writing this.
[Report This]Date: 05/26/2007 10:19:45 AM Title: Chapter 6
wow that was facinating! And very intense!!!! I haven't read anything like this before. I LOVE it! Please update again soon. I can't wait to hear what the professor has to say!
Date: 05/26/2007 7:27:15 AM Title: Chapter 2
Oh, the bastard! All my sympathies with Marie - this one guy would so not make my day!