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Reviewer: Bancainte Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2007 7:17:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

LOVE the voice in this one - and it's actually funny! Aranum, what's wrong with you? ;-)

Author's Response: Temporary insanity. That's the only explanation for this one. Or listening too much "Life's Gonna Suck When You Grow Up" and the likes of that song. I think I broke my brain.

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2007 12:40:47 PM Title: Chapter 5

Aw, this chapter makes me soo happy! I have an Austin and my boyfriend wasn't nearly as understanding as Logan! Too sweet, loved it. Even the 'if I let you sleep here will you shutup' part. :D

Reviewer: Deb Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2007 11:35:49 AM Title: Chapter 5

“Kid?”
“Yes?”
“Shut the fuck up.”

Good to know I'm not the only one that gets pissed when I'm woken up from a sound sleep.

I think Marie has been popping back some pills!

I really like this story but the thing that kind of irks me is that, yes we know she has the flu but she only seems to sneeze and cough when she says something like "Oh, I have the flu". I don't think you should go over board with her illness but she seems to be perfectly healthy all the other times they have been talking.

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, she does seem to be okay, but keep in mind that it's nothing life threatening, just a common flu.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2007 10:48:43 AM Title: Chapter 5

Hehehe what would people think if they found a gagged Marie in Logan's bed ;)

Oh and it's Fräulein not fräulain.

Author's Response: Thanks! *hurries to edit*

Reviewer: Ashnan Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2007 8:29:10 PM Title: Chapter 4

OMG! I LOVE this story! Love it! More, please.

Reviewer: irishekl Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2007 7:00:52 PM Title: Chapter 4

I hope you update soon, that was soooooooooo good. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2007 2:10:51 PM Title: Chapter 4

Can't wait for more.

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Date: 05/24/2007 2:04:48 PM Title: Chapter 3

Awwww he'll go with her.

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Date: 05/24/2007 1:57:59 PM Title: Chapter 2

Hehehe Logan the tracker dog.

Me likey this story very much ^_^

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