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Wow, this is sweet and bitter and powerful and intensely painful. You did good!
You write very well in a language that's not your native language. There were a few typos, but it was beautifully written, it just flowed.
And it was so sad! Realistically so as well, and so in tune with the characters at the end of X2. Fantastic first fic :o)
Beautifully written. You captured the many varied imaginings and dreams of a young girl over her first love very well. You also conveyed the heartbreak of the bitter truth so realistically. Well done, very well done.