For a first effort, this is exceptionally well-written. So full of emotion. I love that he acknowledges the hold she has over him and chooses to live with it in spite of all its limitations. Or does he really have a choice at all? See, it's your ability to generate questions like that that make this such a good story. I know it's been five years, but I'd love to see you come back and write some more. --Wendie