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Reviewer: Valeriusjka Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2007 4:12:24 AM Title: Chapter 21

So...who's going to be a daddy now? And to what? Cause it looks like even Logan has now something 'extra' inside him.

Good to have another chapter. *does happy caffeinated dance*

Reviewer: Gamma meta Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2007 10:47:30 AM Title: Chapter 21

he felt part of it sliding in to his mouth, down to his throat, throbbing and dribbling something warm and sticky, bony legs wrapping around his head, locking in to place. EWWWWW!!! This is much grosser than watching it in Alien. I think it was the sticky dribbling, personally.

Logan seems like he still doesn't know how to tell Marie that he doesn't want their child - or *that* child, anyway. I wonder if he realizes that if he had sex with her that day, he could at least persuade himself that it was his, that it had come from him, if that's what he needed. But he's still dealing with too much at the moment: betrayal by the army, by civilization, AGAIN, a new deadly enemy, a deadly injured comrade, and Marie in the desert. So he hasn't had much time to think, and maybe he would always reject that idea anyway. Logan hasn't had many certainties in life - not even, really, Marie. They only really trusted each other recently. So I think he needs to tell her. Maybe, instead, there are things he's scared that she will tell him.

It's clear that Marie is more important than Vasquez to him - loved his outrage over Marie's being bitten. But my favorite was the way he asked to just hold her. I can understand wanting to replace the lab's touch with his.

BUT NOW, you have made him an incubator for a huge acid-for-blood, bony space/sea slug!!!! *evil cackle* Man, I guess I'll just have to hold on to my hat and wait and see for future plot developments. It's never what I expect.

Author's Response: I think he doesn't want children. At all. He's afraid that they'd be used just like he and Marie have been used.

Reviewer: miss vixen Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2007 11:01:43 AM Title: Chapter 21

Yay! Thought you'd forgotten about this story and was getting upset...
Very yucky spidery creature though

Author's Response: Not forgotten, not by a longshot. But ask from anybody, I can't seem to be able to finish my stories nowadays. Bear with me. Arachnid and black lizards I shamelessly stole from the movie Aliens. I'm a bad girl. :)

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