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Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/2007 8:44:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, powerful, very powerful. I've been there, in that place where you can hold it all in; show the world that great, brave, fake face and act like you don't have a care in the world. But once you get to "your spot" all bets are off and Niagara Falls is open for business. Ya nailed it!

Author's Response: Thanks... really, thanks a lot, that's some powerfull feedback!

Reviewer: White Dove Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/16/2007 1:27:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

ahhh... that was so sad. Beautifully written but very sad!

Author's Response: I know! I was feeling quite low that day.... Thanks for the feedback!

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