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Reviewer: Elliesmeow Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2008 12:02:50 AM Title: Chapter Nine

Wow. That was hot. And I like the tenderness of their relationship but it's gonna be ugly when the others find about about them while she's still his student.

-Ellie

Reviewer: Dromeda Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2008 11:54:28 PM Title: Chapter Nine

Get better soon!

Reviewer: miss vixen Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2008 3:54:00 AM Title: Chapter Nine

Where have you disappeared to? This was such as good story!! Please come back with more!

Reviewer: Dromeda Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2008 11:47:07 PM Title: Chapter Nine

More chapters are coming soon, right? *looks pathetic* pweese!

Reviewer: Lady Iris Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2008 8:10:42 PM Title: Chapter Nine

This chapter was absolutely beautiful. The love between Logan and Marie was so evident during their passionate scene together. I loved all the vivid descriptions and could see them playing out in my mind. I especially love this line, 'A sobbing moan was ripped through her throat as pleasure shot through her system, overwhelming her mind and senses as Logan made love to her.' That really shows the beauty of this scene as they have fallen in love. Of course, there are those that are willing to make trouble if they find out about Logan and Marie's romantic yet forbidden relationship. I hope that doesn't happen. Update soon.

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2008 1:16:34 PM Title: Chapter Nine

Due to computer problems i was unable to review this story for a while. I got it fixed and hereI am, telling you I LOVE this story! Its so good. I love the dynamic between Logan and Marie. The passion they feel for one another just jumps off the page (well computer screen anyway. LOL) The last chapters have been Really Hot. Great job! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: dulcesweet Signed star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2008 11:17:20 AM Title: Chapter Nine

oh wow, I was crying at first very sad begining.

But oh my what an ending, great stuff.

Reviewer: Dromeda Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2008 12:12:17 AM Title: Chapter Nine

Sooo good! I'm glad you posted again so soon. Can't wait for more.

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