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Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2016 12:55:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting little snippet, ara, leaving us to wonder what the bloody hell has been going ON....with BOTH of them!!  Logan...too scared to sleep??  Marie, having the same problems apparently. Is this right after Liberty Island? Is she still trying to assimilate him after he saved her life? So many unanswered questions, but a complete story none-the-less.

Reviewer: jenefaner Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2011 1:57:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

wow. that packed a punch.

Reviewer: jenefaner Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2011 1:57:04 AM Title: Chapter 1

wow. that packed a punch.

Reviewer: Wolf CrescentWalker Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2008 5:38:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story - I love the tension between Logan and Scott. Even the grammar is improving! I admit being mystified by the 'whine' part. What is that? This piece deserves a subsequent chapter, or I might die of curiosity. *hug*

Author's Response: In this one Logan haven't been sleeping. He's tired and worn out, sick. Whine is a little like tinnitus, only inside of his head instead of his ears.rnrnSorry that I took away the mystery, but even if I wrote a follow-up to this I probably wouldn't return to that in it.

Reviewer: silverthorne Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2008 2:54:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like the depictions of Logan as tough, then as he watches Marie, vulnerable. A beautiful scene. Will this turn into something longer, perhaps?

Author's Response: I don't know if I will return to this or not, yet. But thanks for the fb. Always appreciated. :)

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