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Reviewer: rawrave Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2008 10:59:05 AM Title: External Guilt

Great story, full of emotion and angst, glad Logan made it back in time to help her.

Author's Response: Thanks honey.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2008 6:25:12 AM Title: External Guilt

Damn this is good - so so *can't find the right word* just wow!

Author's Response: It was a side of the thing I hadn't thought of until it just struck me, Logan has mental blocks to protect his mind, Marie doesn't. Glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Wolf CrescentWalker Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2008 3:46:15 PM Title: Internal exile

Very powerful, and yes, please do continue this.

Author's Response: I did for you all, it needed some conclusion, some ending and it will have it. I promise.

Reviewer: Digiella Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2008 11:15:02 AM Title: Internal exile

Please, please, please by all that is holy, continue this. -puppy dog eyes- I am dying to see what would happen if Logan comes back and sees her like this! Poor Logan-in-head.. He knew what she was getting into but couldn't do anything to help her.. T__T

I like the story all the more because we just got, like, 5 inches of snow in March, IN TEXAS. Sorry 'bout that but it's just so exciting 8D.

Author's Response: Theres one final part to come, a trilogy of the journey, first her fall, his rescue of her and finally the road they walk together alone. Hope you liked the road I put I them on. Thanks for the feedback!

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