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Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2011 9:51:26 AM Title: Protected

I wasn't sure 50 words could constitute a story, but two six-word sentences and a whole lot of preceding canon have moved this from a paragraph to a story.

"No one thought this could happen." lends just enough history and "Protection has a whole new meaning" gives just enough of a glimpse of a future to make this more than an isolated incident. Well done. --Wendie

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