Joann~
I spent a large part of my day yesterday (and nothing got done at home) reading your wonderful story. I decided to wait until morning to review.
This story is a TRUELY inspiring piece. You fleshed out the plot, the characters and their situations so realistically. I have no idea how long you spent on this whole thing, but I must say WOW.
I love Wolverine and I love Logan, sometimes an author will seperate the two in a story and sometimes it doesn't 'work' while I'm reading it... YOU however handled the entire aspect of our favorite mutant with respect and never debased either one or harmed them in any way. EVRYONE in the story (known XMen characters and your original ones worked togehter flawlessly and none of them stuck out in a bad way... And I have to tell you my heart broke as I read how Hank and Logan dealt with their own heartbreak near the end. You created characters that I fell and felt for! Thank You for writing such a piece of art for us! Definitely a favorite!
:)