Just to let you know that you managed to find all the emotion and sensuality without getting too much into the detail. Explicit only works if it works for the story and the writer; it's obvious when its forced. I particularly loved the detail about Logan instinctively protecting Marie from his claws, even though he had no knowledge of popping them. That speaks so much of the bond between all facets of each of them, I thought. Great job!

This was the perfect blend of enough detail and not too much to let our own imaginations go wild.